Heat. Great for those in either lust or love with another. But for a filly experiencing it for the first time, she finds herself looking not up—but down at her older sister. The one with those previous qualities. New bonding time approaches.
It's a very visual story. Not as many descriptions as to what the characters are thinking or feeling are present as simply showing things from the viewpoint of the sisters. It's a good departure from 'talking things out' as it were...you still have some of what they are thinking and feeling, but that is to further highlight what is happening and how they are playing out. Describing AJ's tiny situation, and just how massive and imposing her 'little' sister is now. Feel like AJ is much, MUCH smaller than she was originally with Poison Joke too. Should be fun to see how this plays out!
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Your descriptions are amazing
Unfortunately, this is unreadable for me. Half the time I have no idea what to imagine through your description.
On the bright side, I found a perfect representation of this story:
Proofreading Clopfics Sucks
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You always a prick or only to people you like?
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I very much agree! They light ones imagination with visions delightful and warm.
It's a very visual story. Not as many descriptions as to what the characters are thinking or feeling are present as simply showing things from the viewpoint of the sisters. It's a good departure from 'talking things out' as it were...you still have some of what they are thinking and feeling, but that is to further highlight what is happening and how they are playing out. Describing AJ's tiny situation, and just how massive and imposing her 'little' sister is now. Feel like AJ is much, MUCH smaller than she was originally with Poison Joke too. Should be fun to see how this plays out!