I had just finished with my morning hunt and was heading home, when I felt my eyes tingle like they if I stepped into a high density magic zone.
A high density magic zone or HMZ, from what Zero told me, is a place where either, a really powerful magic was used or a being with massive amounts of magic is currently there. In some very rare cases it can also exist in places where enough creatures with magic died.
Until now I had only ever encountered a HMZ when I accidentally stumbled upon an Ursa Majors lair. Luckily for me, it didn't regard me as a threat and allowed me to leave. At that time too, my eyes tingled, like if you were to spray them with tiny droplets of water, since magic was trying to flow through them, but couldn't.
For that very reason I was immensely confused when I felt that tingle. 'Is the Ursa moving, or something?' was my first thought, but was quickly thrown aside when I realized how close to the castle, my new home, I was.
I didn't know why, but I could feel fear grip my heart, so I decided to hurry home, to check on Control and my things. But as I was getting closer and closer to the castle and could feel the HMZ steadily getting more powerful to the point where my eyes stung, I started going faster and faster, when I was at the entrance to the tunnel I was already in a full on sprint, using what knowledge of magic I had gotten from Zero to reinforce my body and make me faster.
When I got to the courtyard I was met with a scene from my nightmares.
There, at the entrance to the castle insides stood the purple alicorn, as Zero called them, together with a green lizard like thing. At that point I was afraid, my memories of how this Twilight was chasing me once more fresh in my head. I was frozen stiff with fear as I watched her brightly glowing horn.
But then I saw him. Zero, caught in a purple bubble, with Twilight bouncing on her hooves around it. He too noticed me and mouthed to me 'get it, run'.
I knew what he meant since we had made a plan for a scenario like this, but I wasn't prepared. The plan was so simple, I would just have to sneak past twilight and the lizard, get to the library, get the book that Zero wrote for me to learn from, so I wouldn't have to read the whole library, and then, I would just have to run away, leaving Zero here.
When we made the plan, I agreed to it, but now, that I would have to actually do it, I wasn't sure I could leave him here. But there was nothing I could do, I had no choice.
So I used the side door while neither of the trespassers were looking and was off, sprinting to the library. When I got there I quickly grabbed the book that was at the designated spot and ran back. Being careful I slowly peeked through the side door I ran through.
I barely managed to stop myself from sobbing by holding my mouth shut. Zero was still in the bubble, but several things were different, for one, the alicorn had stopped hopping around and had a creepy, almost sadistic look on her face, Zero on the other hand had a horrified look on his face, while at the same time looking at the stump where his hand used to be and said hand glowing in a purple aura and floating outside the bubble.
Not a moment after I saw that scene, the screaming started. I could hardly tell it was Zero, with how horrible it sounded. I just couldn't stick to the plan anymore, so I ran into the courtyard and screamed at the top of my lungs: "MY NAME IS &#)&*!"
My cry was just barely louder than Zero's screaming, and the moment Twilight and the lizard heard my name they fell to the ground holding their ears. Consequentially, Twilight lost her hold on Zero, who quickly picked up his missing hand, reattaching it to his body. Then he ran to me and hugged me, me hugging him back with all my strength.
After our hug we ran back into the castle, since Zero couldn't leave it. We ran down corridor after corridor, hopping to lose the alicorn and lizard who wanted to catch us. Then, to my horror, a wall of purple energy I knew far too well passed by us, followed by a popping sound as Twilight appeared in front of us.
She grinned maniacally and said: "Could you please tell me what you just did? I would love to learn!" The question was obviously directed at me but the way she accentuated some of the words made me think, she didn't really want to hear the answer as much as she wanted to experiment on me until she figured it out herself.
In my panic driven mind I turned 180 degrees, intending to run away, only to see Zero quickly pass through me, followed by an explosion. I slowly turned around, looking at Zero's back, that appeared more solid than usual.
"Z-Zero, a-a-are you ok?" I shakily asked and stretched my hand to his shoulder. Only for his form to collapse into dust the moment I touched him.
'What... What just... what happened? Why did Zero turn to dust?! Why did this happen?! Why? Why?? Why?! WHY?! WHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHY?!?' I couldn't help it, I burst into laughter while I cried at the same time.
There, for just a second Twilight's face lost that infuriating grin, and in that moment it contorted into a frightened expression, before reverting back.
My eyes glowed a sickly green, I know I have seen them do it, as I used magic outside my body for the first time, taking the very molecules that made up her horn and ripping them apart all at once. I watched as her horn disintegrated at a molecular level, listening to her screaming as the nerves in it just stopped existing, before tearing open a hole in space-time and jumping through.
The moment I reached the other side I let sleep take me from this cruel reality.
That day, something important in me broke.
Yay twilights dead does she get her magic now?
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Twilight isn't dead! She is just crippled not for life, sadly.
And yes, it's magic time!
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I wonder if miss magic eyes can learn to drain magic like tirik?
Oh Twiggles is gonna feel the pain... purge the sun heretics!
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You'll just have to wait and see .
zero sorry
Finally! She gave THAT twilight what she fucking deserved! Well, not by my standards though. I wanted to do worse. Completely erasing her horn? Childs play! Try cursing her so she CANNOT die physically and cannot pass out due to pain and even if her limbs are removed, she'll still feel them in pain, no matter how much damage she takes, so that even if she's nothing but a pile of mushy flesh she'd still feel every, single, fucking, thing. Take a Rusty, Metal, POISONED Cactus, and SHOVE IT up her ass and then keep thrusting it backwards and forwards until nothing is left of that part of her, then take a rusty dull saw and slowly, agonizingly, cut through every, single, one, of her fucking bones, taking just an inch at a time, until she's rendered into a leg less, hornless, shit. Then look in her eyes, and show that there is MUCH worse left in store for her. Then slowly scoop out her eyes with a rusty spoon, then pissing / shitting on them, so she'd SEE just how little you thought of a person who does such horrid things, then taking and slowly roasting them over a fire. Then take a Maul / War Hammer, and go, fucking, APE SHIT! Beat her with it until nothing but PULP is left. Then take lemon juice, mixed with the worst fucking pepper spray ever, and spray that on her once she is turned into nothing but mush / pulp. THEN Burn her whole corpse, then take the ashes into a container, seal them up in there, and toss it in a volcano and wait 30 minutes for the fun to be done! THEN, and ONLY THEN, remove the curse. THAT is almost how fucking much I hate this twilight sparkle. I mean, I would probably be questionable in terms of methods and means and such if I was deep into science, but I wouldn't even do 0.1% of the bullshit she's obviously done to completely unknown beings! I mean if an alien arrived on earth then, yeah, I'd want to know how their biology works, but I wouldn't be seeing 'Oh, hey! Lets see if they're bullet proof here!' then shooting them full of fucking holes, and then 'oops! More testing needed!' I mean seriously! THAT. IS. FUCKED. UP!
I hope this has conveyed just about how fucking much I hate this Twilight Sparkle. I'd of said to do 'worse' things, but... yeah, I'd rather not scare anyone any further.
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Jesus, I think you should calm down. It's just a story. No need to get heated, or traumatize somebody.
I'll never look at curses the same way.
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Yeah, curses can be rather nasty.
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Eh, that isn't even the worst I can think of, you'd probably consider me an Eldritch horror in terms of the torture I could come up with, though, THOSE types of torture would be reserved for the things EVEN WORSE than what twiggles here does. Trust me, you don't wanna know. But I can say that Rapists are one of said things. Because that.... that's just BEYOND horrid, and unforgivable. At least what Twiggles here does puts them outta their misery... eventually..... rape though... they person has to live with it unless they get killed by the rapist.... not something I'd wish on anyone.... Anyways, that curse idea? Came from a pretty good story here on fim fiction. 'ALL GLORY TO THE OVERGOAT!' is the name. Great story, pretty funny at times as well. Too bad it's essentially dead last I checked. Some parts of it were hilarious!
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Hail Grogar! And I agree with you but personally I would have her feed to pigs and Timberwolves after mincing her! After all she could be cursed to still feel her severd parts!
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Nah, they'd die from the sheer amount of SHIT in her system. I'd say it'd be better to feed it to a hydra, probably either get a really bad case of indigestion or get constipated for so long it'd die from that. Still prefer my idea though.
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I... see. I totally agree with you on punishing rapists.
And I looked up the Overgoat story, sounds fun but the last upload was in February 2018, so I think it's dead, something I hope doesn't happen to this story.
this chapter made me want the next chapter, also karmic retribution for the win. Just need that to keep coming Twilight's way, while everyone else who didn't do horrible experiments on humans to the level of twilight don't need what's been unleashed due to mad scientist twilight sparkle.
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Well if you dont dissapear then we should be good, also little tip slow down the story a bit you're jogging and this story is still at a walking pace. Maybe do a bit more on the main six and how each of them feels about humans. I mean fluttershy and AJ I feel would HIGHLY dislike Tiggle Sticks for just up and murdering humans. Fluttershy because they are animals, and AJ because magic or no they are technically Family to the apples. Maybe even RD could find the Cut- I mean kinda cool.... idfk bout Pinks or Rares but that's my thought. Hell make what Twi was doing HIGHLY ILLEGAL even It seems she was lying to spike and she has gone off the deep end in the show so.... just a thought.
I like it, for some reason I don't think twilight gonna be able to fix her horn... or else tempest shadow would have been able to fix it as well! I wonder how sunbutt and the rest of the elements are gonna respond to this
Lair*
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Hmm, yes, it would appear I have been rushing the story quite a bit. I'm going to try to slow down, but I can't really promise anything. Also, the next chapter is going to be in Spike's perspective, so yeah.
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Tempest shadow wasn't an alicorn.
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Thanks for pointing that out, already fixed it.
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She still lost her horn... I don't thjnk there's any difference between an alicorns horn and a unicorn horn because isn't an alicorns a mix of all three types? The strength of a earth pony the wings of a Pegasus and the magic of a unicorn?
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Yeah, but all of those are times three in the lore, so maybe she'll regrow a weaker one...
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spoonsteaspoons.the cover art reminds me of Tanya
Well thats sad, I did like the fellow.
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Could you maybe stop talking about horribly mutilating Twilight? It's not that she doesn't deserve it, but I think you might be overreacting a bit.
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It is Tanya, I just felt it suited my character best. I have found some others, but they just don't have the same feel.
While I'm on the topic of how my story looks, does anyone have any idea on how to write a proper summary? I am seriously starting to hate my current one.
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Was it the spoons?
I bet it was the spoons....
*Mumbles* ....might been a bit too much. What if....
Fixed it!
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Hahahahaha, ahhh
I guess that's better?
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That's because it is.
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Crippled? Good. She obviously is hostile. Though I don't really think the protagonist having magic is worth being turned into a little girl. Trading it away to get his old life and and body back is where I'm hoping the story goes.
You are filled with... green?... DETERMINATION!!
Megalovania intensifies
Sadly i could not find a proper *megalovania intensifies* video
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