"What are you doing?" I was absorbed in my search for a book on spells, so I, at the time, didn't think anything about the voice coming from behind me.
"I'm searching for a book on easy spells." I answered simply, still looking carefully through the shelves for anything that might help me.
"Then you are looking in the wrong section. You should go to the 4th row and find the book on the 3rd shelf. The Starswirl section is too much for a beginner." Commented the voice.
"What would you know, you are probably just-" I turned around while talking and stopped abruptly when I saw who, or better yet, what was standing behind me.
The closest I could guess, he, as I ascertained from his voice, was a ghost, he certainly looked the part, with the transparent, almost see-through body and the fact he was floating a few inches off the ground. He looked like a human, about 15 years old, maybe less. He had dark brown hair and light blue eyes, at least I thought he did, since I couldn't see him well, him being transparent and all. All in all, he looked like a child, except for his eyes. Eyes that showed he saw too much of the world for his age.
"Um, sorry, I haven't introduced myself, My name is &#)&*." The moment I said my name, the ghost shut his eyes and pressed his hands on his ears, slouching forward, like he was in pain.
'Huh?! What did I do?! I just told him my name! I didn't know ghosts can feel pain! Does he need help? How do I help him?!' My thoughts were a jumbled mess, before a sharp cough cut through them and made me focus on the situation at hand.
The ghost was floating in front of me, looking completely recovered and instead of angry yelling, I was expecting from him, seeing as it was probably me, that had hurt him, I got a hum, like when you find something fascinating and hum in interest. That was followed with a simple statement: "Well, that was an experience."
I wasn't sure if he was joking or if he was serious. He looked like he was in horrendous pain before, wasn't he even a little bit angry? I decided not to ask that, as to not remind him, to actually be angry, and instead stated: "Are you alright?".
It was a simple question, yet he started laughing like I told him the best joke he had heard in years. After he managed to quell his laughter, he answered in the same kind voice he has used since meeting me: "I'm quite alright, little one. I was just surprised since it has been so long since I last felt pain. It almost made me feel like I was alive again. But I do wonder, what did you say, to make me feel pain?".
"I just told you my name." At this point I was quite curious, why would even a ghost feel pain from hearing my name from back on Earth?
"Hmm. You wouldn't happen to be possessing that little girl, right?" He asked with suspicion clear on his face. The statement took me of guard, so it took me a few seconds to manage a coherent reply.
"Of course not! I just know that one second I was home stretching after a day of hard work and the next I was in this body in the middle of the forest." Was my quick explanation. I hoped that he wouldn't try to exorcise me or something, because I wasn't sure if I could count myself as possessing someone or becoming someone.
"Ah, I see, sorry your name sounded like something a being beyond the veil would say, so I thought you might be one. But it appears I was mistaken, you just had the misfortune of accidentally jumping dimensions and landed here, where the girl you now are, died just moments before. The additional energy from your transfer must have healed the body and fused your mind with it." Said the ghost, dropping all kinds of bombs on me.
"Wait how do you know the girl died? And what do you mean, beings beyond the veil? What does it mean that my mind fused with this body?" I asked in need of answers, especially to the first question. After all, I would rather posses a body of a person who died of natural or unnatural causes instead of me killing them or outright replacing their still living minds with my own. I know it sounds cruel and like I don't care about people dying, but it would still make me feel better to at least still have metaphorically clean hands.
"First: I do believe you haven't changed your clothes yet and you look like you only wet yourself in a river, you forgot to wash off the blood and grime. all that points to you either, getting hurt badly in which case you wouldn't be up and about like you are, or the girl before you losing her life in a rather horrible way. Second: We do not talk about the beings beyond the veil, EVER. Third: It is exactly as it seems, the body you are in now, is your body. You aren't possessing it or replacing the previous user, it is yours. And really you have to change your clothes." He brought up some good points. By the hole in the clothes in my belly area I could guess something tore through the girl's belly, and most people don't survive that kind of a wound alone in a forest. I still didn't understand the whole 'beyond the veil' thing, but I could guess it's something similar to void dwellers, as we called the weird beings on earth. And it would also appear that he couldn't exorcise me out of this, no, mine body, since it was, well, mine. As for the last thing he said, ...
I looked down at myself, only now realizing, I was still in the torn up dress, I was wearing when I woke up in the forest. 'I can't believe I was able to actually run with this on me!' Were my eloquent thoughts, while gazing at the torn up parts, just imagining what would have happened, if I tripped on any of them while running from the ponies.
"Yes, about that, you wouldn't happen to know where I would be able to find some human clothing in this castle, would you?" I asked with a hopeful expression. While yelling 'say yes!' over and over in my head.
He laughed mirthfully and nodded, before saying: "And while we walk there I can answer any more questions you may have, maybe I can even teach you a bit about magic in the future, I have after all read all of the books of this library, so I think I could handle teaching someone. Now, follow me."
And so I did. While we were moving through the stone corridors of the castle, making turns every now and then, I got curious and started talking: "Um, so, you said you could teach me magic, right?"
He suddenly got a look of regret on his face and said: "Sadly, I can only teach you about magic, since I am unable to use magic myself. For some reason the only things a ghost like me can do are travel through walls, float and turn invisible, but none of that are magic."
"But I think your existence in itself is magic. That theory is just proven right with the fact that your magical form can disappear, can fly and can squeeze through the holes making up the walls." I said, presenting my theory to him with a grin. I may not know much about magic, but I sure can make a solid theory with the facts I am provided. Then again, I have been wrong and I was assuming that magic worked under similar principles as all of the other particles.
"Thank you, it's so nice to finally have someone to talk to, who doesn't just scream at you to go away, the moment you show yourself. There have even been ponies that have tried to exorcise me. As I am still here I think you can guess that they failed." Said the ghost with a smile.
"I know what you mean, those ponies really think of humans as even worse than animals. By the by, you never introduced yourself after my attempt failed." I had just remembered, he never told me his name.
"Ah, right, knew I was forgetting something. My name is Zero Control, it's a self given name, something you should think about if you don't want to give everyone around you a migraine every time you say your name." He answered and commented. I pouted a bit at that, but decided that it was probably a good idea in case I met any creature that was nice to me.
"Hm, I guess, for now, you can call me, ... Night Fairy."
Interesting... so her name is now considered some type of "eldritch" word that should not be spoken. This may be useful for escapes and/or getting the upper hand in combat, but will most likely attract unwanted attention. Then again, she would already be attracting unwanted attention by using magic and having intelligence far beyond what a human even should be capable of.
Ha! Is see what you did with the name! Good thing it's sound similar.
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Yep. Not many stories actually give a proper explanation as to why the main character changed his/her name. The common trope is, that they forgot their original, or it's like, new world new name, but I wanted to give another reason for the name change. Plus it gives me something to play with in the future. (Please don't sue me if somebody thought of it before me, I didn't actually check every fanfic on the site.)
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Ah, do you mean the fairy part? I wondered if anyone got the reference.
I'm just wondering but with the whole dieing and being brought back to life will the character grow and mature into an adult, be shorter than average or stay the same throughout her life?
Also, due to her being human she could slip past guards and assassinate some people before they even suspect a lowly magicless creature to be able to do so.
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I think they were drawing a comparison to your character and the pic of Tanya. I believe her military group was known as Fairy, or something like that. (have to go through the series again to make sure.)
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Well, since she did technically die for only a few minutes and the excess magic from the transfer healed her, she should be fine. It's a whole different story if we look at how magic affects living beings. I will probably explain it in the next chapter, but she will be shorter than average.
Indeed she could. But why would she do so now, without any motivation...?
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Tanya is a leader of a battalion of mages, they are called the Pixie battalion, but Tanya calls herself Fairy 01. If I remember correctly.
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I tried to make it seem, like he/she was stressed and couldn't think completely rationally. I'm pretty sure I would be panicking at that point, so I think I made it believable. I can fix it if you really dislike it that much, since it doesn't have any impact on the story.
If a sapient human absorbs magic, allowing "magic sight" but dies later from being oversaturated as the magic "blows out their pores".
I can only guess that for how such a young girl that the MC became, died, and how conveniently quick Twilight came out to hunt her down, means she did it. Twilight oversaturated her earlier than projected, through experiments, likely from bombarding her with spell after spell, till the girl decided to sneak out and run.
Only for her to 'POP' and die out in the forest...
A saga of tanya the evil story. Me likey
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Nah, if you like it keep it, it's your fic, to me it's just tired trope of there conveniently being a river/pond/lake or it being the first action the character takes.
You know it's natural for a panicked person who wakes up in a forest just to look for reflecting surfaces before doing anything else, like checking themselves for injuries and such.
It's just a nitpick, thou what I think you should change, thou you don't have to is his/her age, and btw how the duck he/she knows how old is the new body 4 years old is a very specific number even if it was a guess that's far to young for the shit he/she does, have you ever see a 4 old? They've barely mastered walking on two legs and basic balance, yet you have him/her perform combat and athletic feets most adults can't do? Magic or not I call bs.
Even in the series Tanya starts at 9 years old.
I dunno maybe another nitpick, do as you will, it's your fic.
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I think te whole 4 years old was a mistake on my part. I wanted my main character to start with a small but function body and at the end just two dice to see what number I would get. And no, most of my memories of seeing a 4 year old are from when I was 2 years old so I don't remember how they look.
And the first part is bugging me more the more I look at it.
I'm just wondering but is this really a youjo senki crossover because it's more in line with ascendance of a bookworm in magic being toxic to the human body (excepting nobles as they can use magic in that story without problem)
Also can humans "ascend" into some immortal thing like how a pony becomes an alicorn? Because if so I vote for a Cheshire cat girl equivilant
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I have read The ascendance of a bookworm (mostly), so I am pretty sure it won't be like that. In the manga (as far as I have seen), humans must use some kind of relic/magic tool to take out magic. In this story, that obviously isn't the case. It may appear similar with magic being toxic to humans but the symptoms are different.
I also never said this is a crossover of any kind, I only said I took inspiration from youjo senki, otherwise I would have added a crossover tag.
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Oh, ok I don't know why I thought it was a crossover haha.
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Ok, no worries, just wanted to clear up the misunderstanding.
And about your earlier comment, how humans should become Cheshire cat's when they ascend...
Nooooo, nope, not going to head there, an underage girl? I'll have police at my door before I even finish the chapter.
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Then do they become either A or B? Or just not ascend at all?
A has little wings on back and B has fairy ears
And I was thinking Cheshire cat because they are known for their illusions and their dimensional fuckery (teleportation/pocket dimensions without the use of magic) and not their physical capabilities (even if they should be quite capable fighters)
I actually think that humans shouldn't be able to ascend due to them being a non magical species. But if they somehow gained magic and ascended I would have gone with either something like this or like this. Or it's possible they wouldn't look different and would just exude power, something like this.
Did I confuse you enough? Good.
And while I do like Cheshire cat's for their trickery and dimensional manipulation, I don't think it would mix well with my characters personality.
Lol her/his name can be user as a self defense tactic to stun enemies briefly
Rule 37 of humanity: anything can be a weapon, even memes
So he/she/they/whatever could say their real name and use the resultant migraine as means of CC and escaping
Rule 38 of humanity, show no mercy to a enemy that will show you the same, but show mercy to the ones that are two young to have been tainted by lies.
Rule 39 of humanity, humans were not born at the top of the food chain. We bent it till we were, never settle for 2and place when the thing in 1st is to stagnate to change. Take the rightful place of are kind and show them what it means to be free.
His body stolen and replaced with a small girl's and his name/identity erased, perhaps permanently? That's... actually extremely depressing. To be stuck like that when not even considered a persin is a horrible fate and kinda kills some of the previous enthusiasm O had reading the story. Hopefully he recovers from this, because I don't think even magic would be worth this.
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Erased in that dimension it's safe to assume that you can hear his name in a higher plane of existence or a dimension with more power than the pony one i.e. his original world?