Spike Drake: Age 18, a senior in Highschool, single, likes to play online games and music. One day he meets a player online and they grow close, so they try and meet IRL.
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I remember my first one.........ah good days
Fun chapter as always!
I've spent a week going through most of you're stories and while I've really enjoyed them I do wanna make one suggestion. You often end up repeating information or over explaining things, like this for example:
You tell what type of drunk the girls are and they explain what that means when you really don't need to. It's already self explainitory what a happy drunk, or a competetive drunk is. All you do by over explaining is break up the flow of your story.
Hope my advise helps and can't wait for the next chapter.
I watched an anime about some dude wanted to find love only someone called 'Undirella' that would be one of many suspects.
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I know it’s for plot sake but, has spike never heard about door-locks and why would he clean everything up ?
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First, he didn't think that it would devolve into that kinda truth or dare that quickly. Second, he lives with Twilight, and he like's his living space clean.
BURN BITCH!
Um. Not sure what came over me.
Yeah, that is the sole reason I'd ever want to be a younger brother, really. Well, one of two reasons...
Oh it usually is.