Spike Drake: Age 18, a senior in Highschool, single, likes to play online games and music. One day he meets a player online and they grow close, so they try and meet IRL.
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Don't fuck this up its a good start
Is this a gay story or a normal Spike x harem style ?
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As of right now it’s spike x Luna
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Well as long as there is no Gay BS going on im in
I like the concept i can't wait for more from you no gay shit tho
oh this is going to be interesting, i can't wait to see what happens when spike meets who ever lunar is (most likely vice principal luna but i could be wrong).
I like it hope we get the next chapter soon.
definitely a good start
This is going to be interesting.
I hope the physical meetup that eventually happens isn't too formulaic, that can get annoying. That said, the way they did it in Log Horizon was amusing, mostly because that whole thing was inverted due to the fact everyone was stuck literally in their avatars (just watch episode 1 of Log Horizon to see what I'm talking about, although you might find yourself binging episodes after; sorry not sorry when that happens).
Oh this reminds me of a anime called and you thought there was no grils online
I call dibs on first oc show up in game also great sao reference
Not a bad start. It's an interesting concept but the grammar needs some ironing out. For example, "Said" and "Asked" and any other verb used to state that a person is speaking, shouldn't be capitalized. You could join some of your short sentences together and the story would flow a lot better.