The Elements didn't appear, Twilight failed and Nightmare had almost won..at least until Celestia beat her with some help and imprisoned her. Now she is trying to get her sister back with any means necessary.
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Is Celestia supposed to be so OOC in this universe? It seems like she is almost up to mustache-twirling levels of crushing Twi's spirit. What I mean to say is that seems so over the top that it starts to smell cheesey.
Love the image set! I can't wait to see you give them even more depth and depravity!
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cant wait to publish the other things we already worked out ^^
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You're the best! ^_^
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She is supposed to be cold-hearted, but it isn't like there is no reason for this. All her hopes were suddenly crushed. She was eager to meet her sister again, but this was denied to her. And she waited a 1000 years for it. So her disappointment and anger is high, which will be important for this story.
Oh yeah... this series... Uhhhhhh...........
Hoo, that was some coldness I have not felt for a very long time. This story is starting intense! Oh and added to my watch list.
Impotant tip: put a comma before the name when characters address one another. Because this:
Actually means "You have failed Twilight the pony.", not "You have failed, Twilight."
Faaaaaaailed!