After using an old spell book, Twilight accidentally summons a teen lion cub with a tragic secret, will Twilight be able to know more about this cub to help him and become more than just her new friend or would the cub be trapped in his dark past?
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wow. long chapter.
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It is, but I've seen longer chapters in other fanfics, so nothing worth bragging about.
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I guess so. so when is twi gonna get pregnant??
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That I cannot say, the chances of Twilight being pregnant with an alicorn meta-feline African lion hybrid cub is slim but not impossible, the reason why Kion didn't impregnate Rani is because he was using condoms at the time, however its gonna be difficult for Kion to impregnate Twilight because interspecies can't breed unless both lovers have a magic pool like all magical creatures do and since Kion doesn't possess magic on his own, that makes the process of him impregnating Twilight extremely difficult, but remember, Twilight's a genius so she might be able to give Kion what I like to call, a 'breeding pill' which temporarily gives Kion the ability to impregnate her, if I'm gonna design Kion and Twilight's kid, it would be a male cub that looks like Kion when he was younger with the differences being that the kid will have dark indigo stripes on his red mane, his right eye would be the same color as his mother's eyes while his left eye would be the same color as his father's eyes, he'll have dark red wings on his back and will possess magic just like his mother however the magic would be cast out from either his chest or his right arm, his magic aura would be scarlet, and he'll possessed the same meta-feline gene as his father which would increase his senses, IQ, reflexes, and durability, he won't be without his flaws as he'll have the same mental disorders as his father despite the fact that his father would love and care for him unlike Simba and he won't be able to control his magic properly like his mother could with her magic.
Then maybe you should have twlight and kion have as second foal as well but its a filly that time and this one will have her mother's appearance, her both her father's eyes, and have both the same mane color as her mother but also have two red stripes on her mane and tail a light red stripe and a dark red stripe she'll even have the same wings and coat colors on her body and wings as her mother as for the cutie marks for both of them that's up to you to decided for them on what talent's they should have while her magic aura should be Dark Indigo/Purple.
Not just that but if you do make sure their son has the same mental disorder as Kion then you better get their son to meet a mare in his life that can help him with his mental disorder, or maybe with a pony/hyena hybird mare from pinkie pie and janja child, or have him get a herd just like his father kion did during his time in Equestria.
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Great idea, I wouldn't mind Kion and Twilight having an alicorn meta-feline hybrid foal next to the hybrid cub and said cub getting a pride when he gets a bit older, oh, I could imagine Lil' Cheese being a pink hyena hybrid with the same abilities as Pinkie, and I somewhat have an idea of future Janja being bounded to a wheelchair after getting leg injuries, basically turning Janja into hyena Frank Woods from C.O.D.: Black ops.
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……………… alrighty.
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Okay, I'll adjust to most of that but I would have to make a scene where Celestia finally humbles up to apologize and make amends with Kion as well as forming a decent friendship, and as for more action scenes, oh, God, there was a reason I got writer's block, its because I struggle at certain action scenes, but if you want more action? I'm planning on having the characters heading to Neo-Equestria which they're be more action there, as for Spitfire becoming a supersoldier, yeah that won't happen anytime soon as the whole project would be halted after what happened and she'll now reject the invitation on continuing to volunteer with the project, and plus most stories need talking in order to explain more of the other characters.
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Its alright, and yeah, I'll let you help, just give me the ideas by messaging me in my inbox instead of the comment section, I'm struggling on not making this story too straightforward like Swords of a Lion which is one story I wrote that I absolutely hate.
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Chapters 12, 15, 16, 18, and 19.
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Probably, but I'm pretty sure Luna's gonna get pissed when she sees Zira making love with Kion and probably get into a catfight with the psychopathic lioness.
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Zira is nothing more than some desperate hoe looking for sex.
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I think that 'honor' should go to Chrysalis because she can turn herself into any sexy mare you want, Zira is basically the love child between Princess Molestia and Lucy from Elfen Leid.
But still that comment was funny.
Well that, goes, without saying.
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Chapter 20.
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On the idea on having, kion's son having the PSTD/Mental disorder. NO, Just No! *Disgusted* That will be f***** up if that were to happen. It's BAD enough that Kion got raped Physically or Mentally by SIMABA!!!! Of all people.
Plus, Kion and Twilight will be PISSED OFF on you and the author for doing that to their son.
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"I somewhat have an idea of future Janja being bounded to a wheelchair after getting leg injuries, basically turning Janja into hyena Frank Woods from C.O.D.: Black ops."
Me: WHY!?!?! Would you do that to them. Besides, him staying crippled like that DOESN'T make sense into this story. When you have Strong Magic healing welders like Twilight, Discord, Eris, and even Advanced Medical Expert like the Medic in TF2!!! Plus, Pinkie Pie with her Reality Wall Breaking, would REALLY come after your ass for doing that to her Hyena Boyfriend/Future Husband.
The reason Frank stayed like that in COD Black Ops 2, is because they don't have highly Advanced Medical Technology YET, or "Magic" to fix/repair his legs. Unlike this story. 😒
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Why Luna !!!!!!! Didn't Kion still hate her for betraying him. And why NOT Twilight????? She is kion's first pony girlfriend in his herd. And plus, Realistically, Kion WOULD NEVER have Sex with Zira of all people. She did Rape him before, and it DOESN'T matter if she has Huge Tits or Hot Body! She still is a psychopath, a Terrorist, and a total BITCH!!!!I
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Its just a damn concept, I wasn't really planning on doing that!
And as for Kion's son, I decided to replace those mental disorders with anger issues, basically turning the kid into an character that gets angry at foal kicking assholes and selfish hypocrites.
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One: Kion doesn't hate Luna, he was just angry with her, just because someone's angry with another, doesn't mean they hate them.
Two: I got an inbox message from one of my followers who has supported me and gave me more ideas telling me not to write the Kion X Zira clop which I accepted for obvious reasons.
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Sorry if I offended you, it's just I don't think they can just stay crippled like that, when they have healing people like Twilight, Discord, Eris, Medic, and the Princesses, when they get their heads out of their dumb asses.
Plus, they got Enough Problems as it is. With Grogar, the three villains stooges, Scar coming back, the two leopard Mercenaries, "Neutral" Zira, Racist pony assholes like Shining Armor or Blueblood, and FINALLY Celestia's idiotic leadership stupidity, and her "Mercy" Bullshit!
And as for Simba, Well I don't know. Kion already " Took care of him" 😈😈. But, he might try to "fix" his family relationships, by going to equestria himself, and try to "Apologize" to mostly Kion, then Kiara, Nala, Kovu, Sarabi, and Mufasa. And "Beg for Forgiveness". 😒
Plus, having anger issues against racist assholes to selfish hypocrites, is Badass and cool. 👌
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Sorry, it's just kion was really pissed off in that chapter. And he was Justified in being mad. He can forgive Luna if she can Stop following her sisters orders, like a robot to a creator. And I like do Zira a bit. It's just she's very violent, a child molester, and a bit cuckoo.
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https://m.No problem, and plus I also like Zira as well, especially how scary and sexy she looks and acts, I mean she makes Chrysalis look like a mear fly, and both Zira and Makucha, AKA Leopard Deathstroke pose more of a threat to the main 6 than Chrysalis who's a mear bug with a queen goddess complex, Cozy Glow's just a spoiled, manipulative little shit, and Tirek, well...
(Begin at 2:50.)
I'm pretty sure that Discord said that Tirek's compensating for his little magic dick, so yeah, those three are jobbers to the main 6 and they have big egos to the point that it makes them complete idiots.
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Yep, but those three and Groger still need to be taken care of. But, since you like Zira so much. Are you gonna make a scenario that Zira AND Chrysalis are WORTHY of possibility of reforming and be with Kion. Because, I don't think Kion have it with him to let Zira join his pride in this story. 😕 Due to their Bad history in the past. But, I like to see how it gos.
Plus, What was Celestia doing with that project of hers. Is she trying to make super soldier's like the Spartans(Halo), or Space Marines(WH40K).
Because, it sucked horribly. With the two Leopards kicking all their asses.
But, what if Kion, Twilight, Kion's family, Jasiri, Janja, main 5, Discord, Spike, and even Luna learn of Celestia's failed project, how would they all react???
P.S there's nothing wrong of concepts, it's just sometimes there can be both Good Or Bad, depend on the story or ideas.
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One: no, because Chrysalis can't be reformed because she way more stubborn than Applejack and Simba combined and she's too evil, and Zira's way too fucked up in the head to be reformed, saying that they could be reformed would be like trying to reformed the Joker.
Two: there was one superguard in the fight and he was just a prototype with the mind of a feral pony, so to didn't prove much of a challenge for Makucha, the reason why the normal guards got killed is not just because both Makucha and Chuluun were smarter and have way better combat experience, they have guns while the guards only have medieval weapons.
And three: I'm sure that the main 6, Spike, and Luna would be horrified by it while Kion, Jasiri, the Hasnuu family, Janja, and Discord would be disguised because Jasiri hates the unethical and unjustified deeds done by authority figures, Janja is an anarchist who hates the high class, authority figures, and rulers, both Kion and his family had experience on investigating incidences, including secret corporation and \or government experiments, operations, and cover-ups, and Discord knows that Celestia is an anti-conflict propagandist who wants to keep Equestria under a really strict order keep it 'peaceful', which is stupid because she was blinded by her own vision of harmony that she ignored a threat in Canterlot just for a wedding, and she had never been in a fight, let alone a war for God knows how long, I mean seriously, Celestia, you got your ass handed to you by a love eating bug, did you really think you can stand a chance against an ex-Marine, meta-feline leopard? I also find it funny that Shining Armor tried to attack Makucha only to get backpaw bitch slapped by the ex-Marine instead.
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One: Makes sense, but compared Zira to the Joker, of all people. Damn!!! 😐
I just thought with you, and that other guy talking about Kion x Zira. That you come up with something to make her join his pride for some reason in this story. But, guess not. 🤷 Probably in a different story where Zira AND Chrysalis are LESS EVIL, and more Grey Area Neutral, and they hit off with Kion or a Nice version of Simba.
Two: Still, even without Advanced Weapons like Guns. Those two Leopards still kick ass, due to Combat Experience, and deadly tactics. Plus, they got the Fire and Ice powers from Grogar, so there's a plus. And even if it's a prototype and Is crazy. They probably faced WAY Worse. Like facing More Advanced, More Highly Trained, and More deadller, better and REAL Super Soldiers back on earth. Due to their Profession, if you think about it.
Three: Wooa, that's big. Okay, if THAT were to happened it be very chaotic. What I think will happened will be this:
When Kion, Twilight, Gleming Shield, the Hasnuu family, Janja, Jasiri, Spike, and Discord come back from there break. They saw the big carnage, with multiple guards dead, knockout princesses and Shining Armor, nothing and shockingly, a very BIG pony guard, that is wearing strange armor. Kion knew that Makucha, OF COURSE, escaped with the help of chuluun, and cause this bloody mess. He told the others, THIS is the reason Makucha is better of dead than being captured alive. With his family, Janja, Jasiri, Discord, and even Twilight, when she now knows the risks after seeing The Princesses got hurt REALLY BADLY.
Then Kion noticed that BIG dead guard, and looking at the body closely. He has something in his gut, that this guard was "Mutated" somehow. And knew that celestia, with her pride and dumb arrogants, that SHE has something to do with that guy. He saw the big hole in the castle, and decide to go in and find HOW Makucha escaped in the first place. But also to find out that BIG Mutated Stallions origin. With the Main six, Hasnuu family, the hyenas, and others follow him. Confused on why is he go inside that hole. And also Discord use his magic and carry the still Knockout Celestia, Luna, and Shining with them, because when he also was the big stallion. Like kion, he knew that the guard was altered to be some type of super weapon/soldier somehow, and it was all Celestias name written all over it. And once she wakes up, SHE has some explaining to do!
Kion go though the normal Dungeons/Detention Facility, lashing all the dead guards on the way, and out though the broken door, he found the Lab itself. At first he was shocked on all of this. He searched though all the notes, and blue prints, and even the serums. He already piecing all of this together. And once he sees the lab sign itself on top. He knew WHAT this lab and that Giant dead guard are. SIGN: "PROJECT: SUPER ROYAL GUARD SOLDIERS. Kion, is really livid!!!!! He knew Celestia is a incompetent, prideful, egomaniac, arrogant, a bit Xenophobic and Racist Hitch of a leader. But, THIS is really taking the cake. The others finally found him, and were shocked too. But, the Hasnuu family, hyenas, Spike Twilight, and discord quickly knew What all this is.
For the Kion and his family, Janja and Jasiri have seen this situation many times in their world. With Governments, Secret Companies, and even terrorist groups work on various experiments, Cover Ups, and secret projects for War. All of them now Despise Celestia even more for doing something like this behind there backs.
Twilight being a very smart scientist, and is a expert on magic. And seeing all the blue prints, notes, and the magic potion themselves. And Kion did tell her of the nasty Governments that done this kind of thing for War. She knew Celestia was not a good ruler and has TONS of mistakes, after Kion did bring Very Truthful facts on why Celestia is TERRIBLE. But, seeing all of this!!!! Her ENTIRE respect for celestia went down the drain.
Discord, with he's powers and sees and knows what Kion, his Friends and Family went though in their world. At first, he knew Celestia is an anti-conflict propagandist who wants to keep Equestria under a really strict order keep it 'peaceful', which is stupid because she was blinded by her own vision of "harmony" that she just let Twilight and friends do all the dangerous and possibly life threatening dirty work. And when she finally fights, she got her stupid ass kicked EASILY by various villains that weren't even trying. And NOW!!!! It's like HE himself never knew her at all!!!! He'll wait For her to wake up, explain this with really DUMBASS reasons. And wait for the Hasnuu Family, Janja, Jasiri, and especially Kion to make a REALLY LONG "WHY YOU F****** SUCK" Rant/Speech. He'll have the "SPECIAL" Popcorn and Chocolate Milk for this. 😎😎😂😂
For Spike: He seen this "Super Soldier" or Secret project type of stuff, from SUPERVILLAINS, Some corrupted governments, or secret evil society's from his Comic Books. He can't believe Celestia would do something like this.
The other Main 5 and Gleming are shocked as well. They too, EVEN Rainbow Dash can't believe Celestia will betrayed them like this, when she says she's a "Pacifist" , but make Secret Super weapons of projects for WAR!!!!!!
Speaking of Celestia. She, her sister, and Shining are finally starting to wake up. First was Shining, he was Kion, his "Traitorous" Sister, and others. And he will say something like. "WHAT, how did you all found are secret laboratory to enhance my guards!!!!!" But, Kion quickly punch and kicked him in the face and dick, to shut up the douchebag and knock him out again. But, what he said before, proves their theory.
Then Luna woke up, she sees all of them standing their, shocked, horrified, or losses up. She sees kion, and got stiff, because he is looking her in the eyes that said: " Do YOU KNOW about this, LUNA!!!!!!????? ". 👺 Luna sees the Lab herself, and after taking a closer look. She is very disgusted with her Sister, and wants her to ANSWER for this.
FINALLY, Celestia woke up. And what see shes.
Me: Ooooooooohhhhhhh!!!! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
She sees the Main 5 and spike look up to her in shock, horror. And to Apple Jack, Gleming, Shield, and EVEN Rainbow Dash looked up to her in disgusted and a sense of betrayal
She then sees Twilight, Discord, and EVEN her sister Luna look in her in slight anger, disgust and disappoint. And eyes that say: YOU got some explaining to do!!!!
Next, she sees the Hasnuu Family And the hyenas, and all of them look in her furious anger. With Janja say something like " Wow, you Screwed big time you white bimbo bitch!! " .
For Kion, he look with her with eyes that looks like HE wants to BEAT HER, THEN RAPE HER, AND FINALLY KILL AND EAT HER, and do it all again for 5,000,000 times.
Celestia face: 😱😱😱😱😱, She KNEW she F***** UP HARD!!!!!!!
To be continued
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Well to be fair with the author, both the Joker in the Dc Comics, and Zira in this story did some Psychotic, terrorism, Mass murdering, and f***** Up things in their stories. I agree that Joker is worse, but I feel that Zira here, is like a water down Verison of him. Plus, the Author did say he make a new story where Zira is less evil and more Anti Hero, and "Get it on" with Kion, or Good Simba. 🤷 😏 *Looks at the Author* Are you??
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Zira may act like an antihero, that doesn't mean that Kion would be in bed with her.
Zira still hates Simba, so she won't be in bed with him, I mean she tried to kill him numerous times.
And as for Simba, he's still an asshole, but he learned his lesson from Nala's anger towards him and her divorcing him after what he did to her son behind her back, which all of that caused Simba to break down in tears.
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In THIS story I agree, all of it. And Simba did deserve all of that!!!! But, what I am trying to say, is you CAN make a new and diff. story, where Simba is still nice and good father to kion. And one of them hit it off with a much diff. And nicer Verison of Zira. I mean, don't you remember your first story. With the Prototype crossover, where Simba is the Main "Lion" in the story. And he is a good father to Kion and loves Celestia, until she screw it up one time, where she try to defend the racist ponies. 😒 🤦 But, she is trying to fix that, and be with Simba again. And in that one, it WAS Twilight that's being a bitch, unlike this one.
You see what I mean. You made both of these stories, where you make some characters like Simba, Twilight, Celestia, etc. As Polor Opposites in them. You can make a new story one day. Where Simba and Kion are a good Father/Son duo, along with their family and Wife/Girlfriends. And they can get their own "Prides" with Nice, Xenophilia, and smarter main Six, Celestia, Luna, and possibly even Zira, and Chrysalis as well.
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Sorry, but I've gotten too far on this story to do another multi-chapter story involving Kion or Simba.
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Alright, I just want to see how your first story, the Prototype crossover ended. Since you put it on hiatus, and was working on this one. 🤷
I just don't like how you change their personalities, and traits in your two stories. On one hand, Two of the Lions have a good relationship and powers, and Celestia is the lead girlfriend to Simba. On the other hand, Simba is a abusive, and rapist father to Kion for some reason, and Kion, while is a Soldier, has F***** Up Mental issues for it. Twilight is the nicer, and lead Girlfriend to Kion. And Celestia is bringing a Prideful Bitch in here. 🤷 😕
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I'm not planning to continuing my first story, but the reason why Simba abused and neglected Kion is because Simba has daddy and uncle issues, and he only sexually assaulted Kion once while drunk.
Kion was never a soldier, the reason why is because he never led the Lion Guard in this story and he was too young at the time, and his mental issues came from bullying and discrimination from the rest of the Pride Landers with the exception of Nala, Sarabi, Kiara, and his friends, his abuse from Simba, and the death of his future wife, Rani, which broke his soul and drove him in attempted suicide.
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Well that's f***** screwed up dude, for having Kion have a f***** Up child hood. At least that idiot Simba, and those bullies got their asses whooped. And lucky, Twilight is smart to be a therapist to help Kion with that. And who knows. Rani can be revived as well. You did bring Nala in the Prototype, and Mufasa in both of these stories. So, Why can't her???
Plus, if Simba do come, to try and "apologize", I want Kion, Twilight, Nala, Muffasa, Sarabi, Main Six, DIscord and eventually Celestia and Luna. have All of them make a HUGE rant, on why you FRICKIN suck, and the worst father in the world to Simba. 😈😈😈😈😈
Edit: Wait!!!!???? What do you mean "Not continuing it", you mean rewrite, or CANCELED!!!!!????
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I meant that I lost interest in writing my first story.
And the idea of resurrecting Rani is both complicated and controversial in my part because even chaotic beings like Discord and Eris have very difficult time in bringing people back to life without the result of accidentally creating zombies, and Rani being brought back to life like if nothing happened would defeat the purpose of the story, as much as I love Rani as she reminds me of Fluttershy, I don't like the idea of resurrecting her with the snap of the fingers.
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I hope you come back to it, after you done with this.
BUT, doesn't Mufasa also included, because he also died, but got revived?? Is it like the Dragon balls before it got upgrade, that it got limits on how long the person died or something???
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I have side plans on making a story involving Makucha in the Friendship is Magic official canon universe or a story of Deathstroke fighting Shredder in the similar universe as well.
And yes, Mufasa did died, as for him being brought back to life, it was still extremely difficult for Eris to do so.
Seeing Luna just lose just stings honestly