Great chapter, look forward to see what going to happen next.

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Thanks! I plan now on showing how rough the word is but at the same time how hard it is for a jaded world to believe in something like hope when one of the two people willing to change things is an enemy

Hmm, now That's pretty dam OP. Guess Twilight and Spike are going to be in a romantic relationship in the future too.

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It was a bit OP here but seeing as this was their first connection and the dragon instincts overpowered them both, the times they use powers after this will actually be weaker since for control they will let go of some of that power. Now their power will be based on how close they are and the trust they put in each other so it would take time for the two to become true friends. As for romance, I don't have that much trust in my writing to actually portray a really good relationship so there will be moments where the two are that close but maybe in the end that could be something not sure how far to take that. The Alchemist's Dream story is how I would take it, hints here and there but that is background compared to the stories told.

9706999
I see. At first I thought you were building a relationship between Flash/Twilight and Ember/Spike. But with the exile of them both, I now wonder if that changed to Spike/ Twilight.

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Yeah that was what I was going for, I do know that this isn't the last time we see Flash or Ember but the two are forced to be connected, bound together forever by their choice and later they will see what they had given up, Twilight a potential boyfriend in Flash but I never see her actually ever giving it thought since she was focused on the good of the world and Ember cares for Spike but would have never admitted it really. Not being the feeling type. I can say that I'll try to give both characters all that they deserve I know that not of people like Flash but he seemed cool the times we saw him and want to give the character respect and Ember well I like her a lot and try to make her important in my stories.

9707273
Flash doesn't deserve such hate, its so overblown unfortunately. Ember is just a tsundere. Oh well, do whatever you think makes the best.

9707616
I'll do my best!

I think it is a little strange seeing Spike and Twilight interact with eachother as if they were friend, but that maybe the effect of the bond.
I like the fact that Celestia don't hate dragons show that she don't want the war but she has to deal with it.

Also, great chapter.

9731970
Yeah the bond more or less helps the two understand each other but they will have problems being born and raised on two sides of a war, something you'll see soon enough!

It was very good this chapter
but the ember with may have managed to defeat the spike before colleague if he has part of the powers of Twilight, to have access to her soul
And Celestia speaking of the dragons gaining, the levels can be the same and they want to know
and the own celestia said that the oensi treat with disrespect certain prejudice to the dragons
and the ember and sober even the colleague
after all she beat another dragon to demonstrate she wants blood
and companion, this continuing war will certainly cause the end of this world
You bet it.

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