A foreign prisoner and a young general, enemies united by a forbidden power. To win an endless war, Twilight Sparkle will make a pact that will change fate but will the changes be what she wishes?
9814262 Yeah and that's just a matter of bad luck since AJ and Spike weren't trying to send out that fire. Applejack will now have a dragon problem and all of Ponyville is in trouble.
Big Mac isn't dead but he is far from Canterlot or Ponyville so the family doesn't know much other than they get letters every month or so but it's their parents who are dead from dragons and that is what pushed Big Mac to enlist. He chose it and AJ would have also but someone needed to stay with Apple Bloom and Granny Smith, so dragons are what broke up the Apple family. i'll clear all this up in the story in the next chapter or two
9817843 They met really briefly in chapter 1 or 2 AJ was selling some apples. Applejack said that if Twilight went to Ponyville ever that she would have a friend there
9817880 It kinda was, I'll put a line or two reminding the reader how the two met in the next chapter. It will be called The Battle of Sweet Apple Acres
My God! What a terrible thing to have done Twilight suggested a brainwashing just to have more massacre although the dragons are not saints and have done their evil my goodness and I already realized what applajack has against friend dragons Your family is suffering because of them and my goodness Garblo is coming to ponniville thing is not coming this war has to end once and for all
that last ending paragraph, only words I have to say for that is 'oh shit'
Also is it implied that big mac is dead since he was probably drifted into the army?
9814262
Yeah and that's just a matter of bad luck since AJ and Spike weren't trying to send out that fire. Applejack will now have a dragon problem and all of Ponyville is in trouble.
Big Mac isn't dead but he is far from Canterlot or Ponyville so the family doesn't know much other than they get letters every month or so but it's their parents who are dead from dragons and that is what pushed Big Mac to enlist. He chose it and AJ would have also but someone needed to stay with Apple Bloom and Granny Smith, so dragons are what broke up the Apple family. i'll clear all this up in the story in the next chapter or two
9814290
thanks for clearing that up.
9814307
No problem! I'm glad to clear things up since it's usually my fault for not adding all this in the story
Might want to explain later how Twilight and AJ know each other.
9817843
They met really briefly in chapter 1 or 2 AJ was selling some apples. Applejack said that if Twilight went to Ponyville ever that she would have a friend there
9817844
That must have been a blink and u miss it. Might want to expand on it.
9817880
It kinda was, I'll put a line or two reminding the reader how the two met in the next chapter. It will be called The Battle of Sweet Apple Acres
9817887
Alright.
oh no the suspense is killing me and i cant wait to find out what happens next
9819181
Heh you won't have to wait too long, a week at most as I'm feeling really good about where I'm taking this story
My God!
What a terrible thing to have done Twilight suggested a brainwashing just to have more massacre
although the dragons are not saints and have done their evil
my goodness and I already realized what applajack has against friend dragons
Your family is suffering because of them and my goodness Garblo is coming to ponniville
thing is not coming
this war has to end once and for all
Just got down to reading the two new chapters and I tell ya this is getting really interesting can't wait for more!
9902786
Won't have to wait much long got it nearly done