Cadance is off to an important meeting with the other princesses, but she's seen to it that Shining Armor won't miss her much. She's instructed every mare in the Crystal Palace staff to "entertain" him while she's gone.
Okay I get we're trying to keep things happy here, but I hope there is a bit more to Amber's husband then that.
Look no offense, but "I don't have the heart to tell him he's infertile" So is she passing the foals off as his? Because I think he'd notice they look nothing like him, and also question these 'special uncles' that keep showing up. Unless he's a complete idiot.
So she's really been constantly cheating on her husband this whole time, and this has been going long enough that it includes going as far as not being aware of not being the father of all his foals? So her foals will never know their real father to keep up the illusion and from herself being found out? Do the foals never mention the uncles that visit them to their father, who he doesn't recognize and knows they're not in fact family?
How does one even find out if their husband is infertile, without their knowledge? Seems impossible to diagnose on your own, much less on another person. Usually, those suspected to be infertile have to get themselves tested, and a doctor wouldn't hold back from telling that individual. This might be the first story I read that has someone ignorant of their own infertility, while having another person somehow find out through unethical means that they're infertile without permission.
The whole thing feels like a sort of glaring problem with a plethora of questions that are slid under and unresolved, and that Cadence and Shining seem surprisingly okay with for some unknown reason. I was honestly hoping cheating wasn't the case, because that was the only issue that kept distracting me with questions and from enjoying the great writing. Would've been simpler if the husband was accepting and aware of it, while enjoying his special capability of having as much sex as he wants without worry of impregnating anyone.
I was kind of expecting the twist with the married made but the fact that she’s going this behind his back just feels like a massive dick move on her part.
9761193 9761198 9761221 Heh, people are getting more upset about that than I thought. It’s not in the story (how could it be?) but I have a feeling that her husband is secretly aware of it and doesn’t really mind.
Twilight Velvet: Shining, don't forget to introduce me to every one of your children. I need to know how many socks I have to knit for Hearth Warming. Night Light: Wow, son, I know you have a high ambition since you were a Caption of Royal Guard before a Prince. But this sure take the cake. Twilight Sparkles: I cannot believe Cadance set my brother up for multiple relationships. Damn it, I should have asked her to set me up with him before those mares. Spike: Does this mean Shining is creating a harem in his Empire? Like in one of my comics?
Cheating/cuckolding/NTR are all very, very hot button topics. Most people of experience likely know what it is to lose someone important to you, or even just some aspect of your relationship that was very meaningful. Even just the idea is enough to scare those who haven't. How can you be confident in what you have if there are people okay with the idea that it can be snatched away without you even realizing, or that things you thought weren't going to come to pass had been going on all along without your knowledge? That someone you could make yourself completely vulnerable to and trust implicitly could hurt you in the worst way for some cheap thrills and fetish?
Outside of their specific fetish-circles you're going to find an unmovable mountain of hatred there, and I can't say it's unreasonable that it exists. In this case, people are more likely to put themselves (however slightly) in the shoes of Amber's husband rather than Shining Armor. Naturally gravitating to the more realistic role of the one being wronged rather than the one in the position of being used to do the wrongdoing, away from the power fantasy role. Partially because if you're acknowledging the 'wronged party' (fictional or not, since this is all emotional reaction anyway) as a person (or potentially as yourself, as well) then you're likely to exhibit a guilt reaction which might cause physical revulsion and a spike of that cold anger that you get in the pit of your stomach. Or... you know, flashbacks to when it happened to you, if that's the case.
Now, if it was something like Amber's husband is infertile and he's an actual consensual cuckold, then I think there'd be less hate (much in the same way as the premise of the story. We've got Cadence cuckqueaning herself all over the place and no doubt she's dripping on the cushions at the meeting thinking about how hot it is.) Like, Cadence knew about their situation and hooks them up with good guys who aren't going to abuse that fact from time to time - and this time they're actually looking to have a foal, so she offers them Shining while she's away. Knowing that the husband would be happy about this would not necessarily create good feeling among readers who are especially affected by the topic, leaving them distant and disconnected from the idea of him if they don't have the particular fetish due to being unable to understand him, but much less anger.
But this was specifically the fetish you were going for, so it's not like I'm saying make changes - that'd be rude and uncalled for, regardless - but I am trying to put a bit of perspective on why it shouldn't be surprising people would be upset. This chapter, especially, didn't have the 'infidelity' tag on it like last time, so no one knew to skip it if was going to screw them up inside. I think it was the bit about how she does this more or less often and then has the fathers visit that really pushed this over the edge from what Amber'd been doing to 'even if she loves him this is really too much and feels kind of malicious' and can kill the ol' boner if you're not one of the minority who's part of the fetish's loose community. Which I'd bet cash money happened here with a number of readers and thus posting on the topic commenced.
Well-written chapter, very nice imagery. Pretty well fine up until she mentioned the part about how this is just one more in a line of these issues and how she treats her husband. I winced once I read that and came down here expecting to see some indignant outrage. It makes Amber seem less like she's doing this because Shining is special to her and possibly her husband, and more like she's abusing her husband who is cartoonishly blind to it, and Shining was just another notch in that bedpost. (Something like the husband being a guard/former guard and looking up to Shining, and this being his and Amber's first child and they wanted Shining to be the father might have actually been a little romantic, and played up the power fantasy role that Shining is the vehicle for ((being special and popular to the degree a couple want a permanent reminder of you in their relationship)), but I'm not the author and haven't been one in many years. Just my unasked-for personal thought on the matter!)
As his cock firmed up and swelled inside her, Amber shifted again, mumbling to herself a little ... until she finally woke with a start and an adorable little gasp.
A great way to wake up!
Amber's pussy still winked around his cock even as the wide-flared head of it flopped out. That might have been a mess, if it weren't for the way Topaz was instantly there, licking the last little dribbles of cum from both his cock and Amber's well-used slit.
Well, keeping things clean and tidy is part of an maid's job after all.
What? You want me to say more? When you've got so many of my fetishes wrapped up into a single encounter? Sure, I could talk about the idea of waking up inside Amber, or going straight to town while Topaz assists both from below, or how the inevitable climax is visible, or how Topaz enjoys cleaning up the aftermath... But why, when I have the perfect, concise expression for it already on hand?
Personally, I enjoy this story a lot, and view it as the husband does know of his infertility, just he loves having little ones around. I know two guys who are infertile irl... one from a military accident, another from ‘juicing’ when he was in college... they both learned after the birth of their second child, and rather than getting angry or sad, the former juicer was happy, cause he just wanted to be a dad... the other guy found out, confronted his wife, and insisted on being the one who set up who knocked her up the next time. He was an only child in his family, and wanted a big one for himself.
I really needa check up on those guys, actually... been like a decade since I spoke to em last >.<
9844342 The problem is that they are the exception, not the rule, not the rarity, altho it is rare...they WANTED families....then discovered later that they weren't the father, and i'll bet just about anything that the military guy was willing to divorce on the drop of a hat if his wife so much as thought the word 'No'
My personal thing is that my introduction to this 'Cuckolding' business was from fics that more or less had the female getting raped....and then more or less getting addicted to it, usually because the story had the rapist not only known, but 'larger' and whatnot... and it usually happened in front of the hubby/bf whatever while they couldn't do anything but watch
9761193 Maybe he already knows and is cool with it as long as in the end she ends up in his bed. Never had kids come up but my girlfriend was cheating on me for years and I didn't mind everyone deserves as much love as they can get fuck monagamy
Shining Armor kissed her then. He didn't know why – it seemed like the thing to do. It all would have been an incredibly sweet and wholesome moment ... if not for Topaz still doing a very thorough – and rather noisy – job of cleaning his cock.
Welp, it wouldn't be in royal harem/affair without someone getting pregnant
Okay I get we're trying to keep things happy here, but I hope there is a bit more to Amber's husband then that.
Look no offense, but "I don't have the heart to tell him he's infertile" So is she passing the foals off as his? Because I think he'd notice they look nothing like him, and also question these 'special uncles' that keep showing up. Unless he's a complete idiot.
So she's really been constantly cheating on her husband this whole time, and this has been going long enough that it includes going as far as not being aware of not being the father of all his foals? So her foals will never know their real father to keep up the illusion and from herself being found out? Do the foals never mention the uncles that visit them to their father, who he doesn't recognize and knows they're not in fact family?
How does one even find out if their husband is infertile, without their knowledge? Seems impossible to diagnose on your own, much less on another person. Usually, those suspected to be infertile have to get themselves tested, and a doctor wouldn't hold back from telling that individual. This might be the first story I read that has someone ignorant of their own infertility, while having another person somehow find out through unethical means that they're infertile without permission.
The whole thing feels like a sort of glaring problem with a plethora of questions that are slid under and unresolved, and that Cadence and Shining seem surprisingly okay with for some unknown reason. I was honestly hoping cheating wasn't the case, because that was the only issue that kept distracting me with questions and from enjoying the great writing.
Would've been simpler if the husband was accepting and aware of it, while enjoying his special capability of having as much sex as he wants without worry of impregnating anyone.
I was kind of expecting the twist with the married made but the fact that she’s going this behind his back just feels like a massive dick move on her part.
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Oh, we’re not done with that, either! ^.^
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Heh, people are getting more upset about that than I thought.
It’s not in the story (how could it be?) but I have a feeling that her husband is secretly aware of it and doesn’t really mind.
Damn hot!
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^.^ I try.
Twilight Velvet: Shining, don't forget to introduce me to every one of your children. I need to know how many socks I have to knit for Hearth Warming.
Night Light: Wow, son, I know you have a high ambition since you were a Caption of Royal Guard before a Prince. But this sure take the cake.
Twilight Sparkles: I cannot believe Cadance set my brother up for multiple relationships. Damn it, I should have asked her to set me up with him before those mares.
Spike: Does this mean Shining is creating a harem in his Empire? Like in one of my comics?
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You know, this might be my only fic so far that involves Shining Armor without at least insinuating some incest...
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Cheating/cuckolding/NTR are all very, very hot button topics. Most people of experience likely know what it is to lose someone important to you, or even just some aspect of your relationship that was very meaningful. Even just the idea is enough to scare those who haven't. How can you be confident in what you have if there are people okay with the idea that it can be snatched away without you even realizing, or that things you thought weren't going to come to pass had been going on all along without your knowledge? That someone you could make yourself completely vulnerable to and trust implicitly could hurt you in the worst way for some cheap thrills and fetish?
Outside of their specific fetish-circles you're going to find an unmovable mountain of hatred there, and I can't say it's unreasonable that it exists. In this case, people are more likely to put themselves (however slightly) in the shoes of Amber's husband rather than Shining Armor. Naturally gravitating to the more realistic role of the one being wronged rather than the one in the position of being used to do the wrongdoing, away from the power fantasy role. Partially because if you're acknowledging the 'wronged party' (fictional or not, since this is all emotional reaction anyway) as a person (or potentially as yourself, as well) then you're likely to exhibit a guilt reaction which might cause physical revulsion and a spike of that cold anger that you get in the pit of your stomach. Or... you know, flashbacks to when it happened to you, if that's the case.
Now, if it was something like Amber's husband is infertile and he's an actual consensual cuckold, then I think there'd be less hate (much in the same way as the premise of the story. We've got Cadence cuckqueaning herself all over the place and no doubt she's dripping on the cushions at the meeting thinking about how hot it is.) Like, Cadence knew about their situation and hooks them up with good guys who aren't going to abuse that fact from time to time - and this time they're actually looking to have a foal, so she offers them Shining while she's away. Knowing that the husband would be happy about this would not necessarily create good feeling among readers who are especially affected by the topic, leaving them distant and disconnected from the idea of him if they don't have the particular fetish due to being unable to understand him, but much less anger.
But this was specifically the fetish you were going for, so it's not like I'm saying make changes - that'd be rude and uncalled for, regardless - but I am trying to put a bit of perspective on why it shouldn't be surprising people would be upset. This chapter, especially, didn't have the 'infidelity' tag on it like last time, so no one knew to skip it if was going to screw them up inside. I think it was the bit about how she does this more or less often and then has the fathers visit that really pushed this over the edge from what Amber'd been doing to 'even if she loves him this is really too much and feels kind of malicious' and can kill the ol' boner if you're not one of the minority who's part of the fetish's loose community. Which I'd bet cash money happened here with a number of readers and thus posting on the topic commenced.
Well-written chapter, very nice imagery. Pretty well fine up until she mentioned the part about how this is just one more in a line of these issues and how she treats her husband. I winced once I read that and came down here expecting to see some indignant outrage. It makes Amber seem less like she's doing this because Shining is special to her and possibly her husband, and more like she's abusing her husband who is cartoonishly blind to it, and Shining was just another notch in that bedpost. (Something like the husband being a guard/former guard and looking up to Shining, and this being his and Amber's first child and they wanted Shining to be the father might have actually been a little romantic, and played up the power fantasy role that Shining is the vehicle for ((being special and popular to the degree a couple want a permanent reminder of you in their relationship)), but I'm not the author and haven't been one in many years. Just my unasked-for personal thought on the matter!)
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this was a really well written response to what it means to be cheated on. good show
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Yeah, I really failed to anticipate how upset that would make some people.
A great way to wake up!
Well, keeping things clean and tidy is part of an maid's job after all.
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This is a well written statement and agree wholeheartedly
Unf!
What? You want me to say more? When you've got so many of my fetishes wrapped up into a single encounter? Sure, I could talk about the idea of waking up inside Amber, or going straight to town while Topaz assists both from below, or how the inevitable climax is visible, or how Topaz enjoys cleaning up the aftermath... But why, when I have the perfect, concise expression for it already on hand?
Unf!
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Perhaps you should put a warning in the description or something?
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Funny... your avatar looks like (s)he is saying "Unf".
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Really loudly, apparently.
Personally, I enjoy this story a lot, and view it as the husband does know of his infertility, just he loves having little ones around. I know two guys who are infertile irl... one from a military accident, another from ‘juicing’ when he was in college... they both learned after the birth of their second child, and rather than getting angry or sad, the former juicer was happy, cause he just wanted to be a dad... the other guy found out, confronted his wife, and insisted on being the one who set up who knocked her up the next time. He was an only child in his family, and wanted a big one for himself.
I really needa check up on those guys, actually... been like a decade since I spoke to em last >.<
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Heh, nice to have a different perspective than ‘nobody would ever be okay with that!’
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The problem is that they are the exception, not the rule, not the rarity, altho it is rare...they WANTED families....then discovered later that they weren't the father, and i'll bet just about anything that the military guy was willing to divorce on the drop of a hat if his wife so much as thought the word 'No'
My personal thing is that my introduction to this 'Cuckolding' business was from fics that more or less had the female getting raped....and then more or less getting addicted to it, usually because the story had the rapist not only known, but 'larger' and whatnot... and it usually happened in front of the hubby/bf whatever while they couldn't do anything but watch
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Yeah ... that sounds like pretty typical cuckolding shit ... and I never really liked that fetish.
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Maybe he already knows and is cool with it as long as in the end she ends up in his bed. Never had kids come up but my girlfriend was cheating on me for years and I didn't mind everyone deserves as much love as they can get fuck monagamy