Some sloppy grammar, was a bit tough to follow at times. Also, why list it as RGRE? I didn’t see anything that was reversed. Not even a sex position :P
Seriously though, imma be pissed if you tagged it falsely.
9709706 Still I think it's a good idea that we know the ages of the characters in this series of yours. For example is Spike 18? 118? Somewhere around there? I'm just saying you should add some context to this like in a blog or on an author's note on the latest chapter. Not trying to be rude here, just feel you should clear this up a little.
9727021 I literally said his age in this very chapter while also stating in a author note the he is still younger then the mane 6, and the first fic in this series takes place about a week after his coming of age birthday
That reminds me you should do a story where during the Mane 6's trip at Hope Hollow, Spike decides to commence his harem operation.
Some sloppy grammar, was a bit tough to follow at times. Also, why list it as RGRE? I didn’t see anything that was reversed. Not even a sex position :P
Seriously though, imma be pissed if you tagged it falsely.
9709071
Did you not notice the change in the wedding vows?
... Spike's a hundred years old?
9709628
See the note at the top for why
9709706
I did. I was bringing up how strange it is that he's an even hundred.
Or, rather, I was TRYING to.
9709706
Still I think it's a good idea that we know the ages of the characters in this series of yours. For example is Spike 18? 118? Somewhere around there? I'm just saying you should add some context to this like in a blog or on an author's note on the latest chapter. Not trying to be rude here, just feel you should clear this up a little.
9727021
I literally said his age in this very chapter while also stating in a author note the he is still younger then the mane 6, and the first fic in this series takes place about a week after his coming of age birthday