Hm. Cadance isn't taken in this universe? At this rate, it's going to end up like this. derpicdn.net/img/view/2019/9/21/2149354__safe_artist-colon-dieart77_adagio+dazzle_flash+sentry_gaea+everfree_gloriosa+daisy_sci-dash-twi_sunset+shimmer_twilight+sparkle_equestria+girl.jpeg With the way Flash keeps having more and more daydreams, I wonder if he'll start seeing his classmates engage in lewd acts too. Like, sitting in the cafeteria, suddenly his bandmates grab their girlfriends and start making out, Derpy drops to her knees and starts blowing Bulk, Snips and Snails bend Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon over a table and start spanking their asses, and Flash Sentry sits in the middle of it, not sure if he's just seeing things or because of the succubus energy around it's actually happening.
9941024 Sounds like a riot! Flash did have that erotic daydream about Lyra/Bonbon, so it's certainly possible! Good point on Cadance, admittedly not sure what her relationship to Shining is here as Alpha hasn't told me yet!
p.s: Before you ask questions on why the story/fic hasn't been updated in like a year. I chatted with his pal Banshee531 told me the author banned cause he copied another person's story! also if you're experiencing writer's block, uninspired or rl stuff in the way of completion that's okay. cause writing takes time and effort
this message was written yesterday more like several hours ago
9990417 I've actually completed the next chapter, but Alpha and I are bouncing it back and forth with revisions until he's satisfied with the results. Plus I made some suggestions to flesh it out, as his outline was mainly exposition and I didn't feel that would be fulfilling.
Even should it take a while, no plans to abandon this or any ongoing story I do unless I have to for whatever reason!
9990738 Oh that's great! what a relief to hear there's gonna be another chapter
p.s: I would like to point out there are not alot of straight or gay clop fics based on equestria girls but that'll change soon by next year though me;)
9991811 Yeah, I really hate to leave anything unfinished, makes me feel like I let down my readers. This fic is driven by the ideas Alpha lays out for me, which means I write it slower than I usually work but these chapters are also more polished than what I often churn out.
9991876 i completely understand your plight ya see...this is one of the reasons why i don't work or collab with other people/authors! i'm way too impatient to wait on somebody else & rather do it myself
p.s: if you're not busy (for i don't know what you do from outside of writing) pm me just so you know i might not respond right away either it's because of my laptop issues or in process of moving to another device.
Hm. Cadance isn't taken in this universe? At this rate, it's going to end up like this.
derpicdn.net/img/view/2019/9/21/2149354__safe_artist-colon-dieart77_adagio+dazzle_flash+sentry_gaea+everfree_gloriosa+daisy_sci-dash-twi_sunset+shimmer_twilight+sparkle_equestria+girl.jpeg
With the way Flash keeps having more and more daydreams, I wonder if he'll start seeing his classmates engage in lewd acts too. Like, sitting in the cafeteria, suddenly his bandmates grab their girlfriends and start making out, Derpy drops to her knees and starts blowing Bulk, Snips and Snails bend Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon over a table and start spanking their asses, and Flash Sentry sits in the middle of it, not sure if he's just seeing things or because of the succubus energy around it's actually happening.
9941024
Sounds like a riot! Flash did have that erotic daydream about Lyra/Bonbon, so it's certainly possible! Good point on Cadance, admittedly not sure what her relationship to Shining is here as Alpha hasn't told me yet!
9941244
Eh, he's fine with it, he's busy getting a lap-dance from the assistant drama teacher, Miss Chrysalis.
To the author - what?!? just when things were getting interesting...Oh my god please finish this fic!
it's such a creative au almost on par with this one https://www.fimfiction.net/story/442288/the-mentis-stone
p.s: Before you ask questions on why the story/fic hasn't been updated in like a year. I chatted with his pal Banshee531 told me the author banned cause he copied another person's story!
also if you're experiencing writer's block, uninspired or rl stuff in the way of completion that's okay. cause writing takes time and effort
this message was written yesterday more like several hours ago
9990417
I've actually completed the next chapter, but Alpha and I are bouncing it back and forth with revisions until he's satisfied with the results. Plus I made some suggestions to flesh it out, as his outline was mainly exposition and I didn't feel that would be fulfilling.
Even should it take a while, no plans to abandon this or any ongoing story I do unless I have to for whatever reason!
9990738
Oh that's great! what a relief to hear there's gonna be another chapter
p.s: I would like to point out there are not alot of straight or gay clop fics based on equestria girls but that'll change soon by next year though me;)
9991811
Yeah, I really hate to leave anything unfinished, makes me feel like I let down my readers. This fic is driven by the ideas Alpha lays out for me, which means I write it slower than I usually work but these chapters are also more polished than what I often churn out.
Good luck with your fics!
9991876
i completely understand your plight
ya see...this is one of the reasons why i don't work or collab with other people/authors!
i'm way too impatient to wait on somebody else & rather do it myself
p.s: if you're not busy (for i don't know what you do from outside of writing) pm me
just so you know i might not respond right away either it's because of my laptop issues or in process of moving to another device.
Why are they even after him?
10853385
Guess they see potential in him? He's athletic, smart, and most importantly hot!