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Dr Sharaz Jek


Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!

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i remember a story with thenexact same concept as this....it didnt end so well.

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I thought it sounded familer

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No dark tag at least

I already given up hope that someone will ever make a nsfw story about the two "demon girls". So imagine my surprise when i saw this pop up, Im really hoping that its gonna continue and not get lost in the ether.

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No plans to make it dark unless the person who requested it asks me to!
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Unless for some reason I can't write it the fic will definitely finish eventually; at worst I'd hand it over to the person who requested it to complete if I get stuck! :twilightsheepish:

Good thing it doesn't seem like the interdimensional deep-sea abominations from across the mirror are appearing, or this would suddenly turn into a crossover between Call of Cthulhu and Love Hina.

Love Cuthie.
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That would be a fun story!

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Know the name of that story?

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He met a terrible fate indeed.

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Would you believe if I tell you it has already been done?

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I find myself less surprised than I expected. Possibly due to finding out about Ulysses: Jeanne d'Arc and the Alchemist Knights. Mother's Basement had a few choice words for that one.

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id actually like to read that but on that note I pegged Leviathan as the Dazzlings dad for some reason but maybe Leviathan could be the mother and Cthulhu the father. lol imagine the meet parents moment lol

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Father Dagon and Mother Hydra.
My Little Deep Ones.:scootangel:

Twilight's words as Cheerilee, I'm hoping she'll want Flash to become more dominant in the long run!

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That will be up to Alpha since he's helping me shape the fic, but I'm definitely into the maledom stuff myself!

For Flash's sake I hope he survives this encounter with succubi.

Hmm, now we're talking! Even if Flash's dominance came on a bit suddenly. Then again, we're less inhibited in our sleep, so maybe he just cut loose more...

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Yeah, rewrote that a few times fearing it was a bit rushed, but I figured Flash realizing it was a dream pushed him over the edge, and it was like a dam bursting after that!

Combination of "dream mode", and explicit succubi manipulation.

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It'd be interesting if he became an Incubus after choosing both of them.

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I like the idea, though it will be up to Alpha if that happens!

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Thanks. Could you inform Alpha of that idea?

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I think he reads the comments here anyhow since most of the story ideas are his (Filtered through my interpretation) but it doesn't hurt to be thorough!

Hm. Cadance isn't taken in this universe? At this rate, it's going to end up like this.
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With the way Flash keeps having more and more daydreams, I wonder if he'll start seeing his classmates engage in lewd acts too. Like, sitting in the cafeteria, suddenly his bandmates grab their girlfriends and start making out, Derpy drops to her knees and starts blowing Bulk, Snips and Snails bend Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon over a table and start spanking their asses, and Flash Sentry sits in the middle of it, not sure if he's just seeing things or because of the succubus energy around it's actually happening.

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Sounds like a riot! Flash did have that erotic daydream about Lyra/Bonbon, so it's certainly possible! Good point on Cadance, admittedly not sure what her relationship to Shining is here as Alpha hasn't told me yet!

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Eh, he's fine with it, he's busy getting a lap-dance from the assistant drama teacher, Miss Chrysalis. :trollestia:

To the author - what?!? just when things were getting interesting...Oh my god please finish this fic!
it's such a creative au almost on par with this one https://www.fimfiction.net/story/442288/the-mentis-stone

p.s: Before you ask questions on why the story/fic hasn't been updated in like a year. I chatted with his pal Banshee531 told me the author banned cause he copied another person's story!
also if you're experiencing writer's block, uninspired or rl stuff in the way of completion that's okay. cause writing takes time and effort:twilightsmile:

this message was written yesterday more like several hours ago

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I've actually completed the next chapter, but Alpha and I are bouncing it back and forth with revisions until he's satisfied with the results. Plus I made some suggestions to flesh it out, as his outline was mainly exposition and I didn't feel that would be fulfilling.

Even should it take a while, no plans to abandon this or any ongoing story I do unless I have to for whatever reason!

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Oh that's great! what a relief to hear there's gonna be another chapter:yay:

p.s: I would like to point out there are not alot of straight or gay clop fics based on equestria girls but that'll change soon by next year though me;)

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Yeah, I really hate to leave anything unfinished, makes me feel like I let down my readers. This fic is driven by the ideas Alpha lays out for me, which means I write it slower than I usually work but these chapters are also more polished than what I often churn out.:derpyderp2:

Good luck with your fics!

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i completely understand your plight:raritycry:
ya see...this is one of the reasons why i don't work or collab with other people/authors!
i'm way too impatient to wait on somebody else & rather do it myself:rainbowdetermined2:

p.s: if you're not busy (for i don't know what you do from outside of writing) pm me
just so you know i might not respond right away either it's because of my laptop issues or in process of moving to another device.

So in this one he's sought as a mate rather than food. Lucky him.

Hahahah, Chrysalis being the drama teacher came true! I am very happy! :pinkiehappy:

Now we just need to see all that lust-energy bleed off into the rest of the school, turning those around Flash more and more kinky... preferably Sunset's influence making the guys more sexually dominant and the girls more submissive, that would be ideal. For me, at least. :trollestia:

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Alpha might like that idea, we'll see!

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Hopefully they'll consider it! :twilightsmile:

Flash's transformation into incubus would probably make him more attractive and sometime afterwords he then becomes a demon lord.

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We'll see, honestly don't know where the story's headed myself since Alpha gives it to me chapter by chapter!

Wait... what? Interesting i woun’t be surprise if 95% of the school is monsters

Also welcome back

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Thank you! Alpha let me decide how many attendees were monsters, and I left it vague so each reader could choose. Personally I think the majority being monsters would take away from their uniqueness, although I added that line about them possibly penetrating all levels of society to hint lots more are potentially out there!

Well, this makes for some interesting student demographics. And it may explain some of what they're serving in the dining halls... :raritywink:

Fun stuff thus far. I wonder if Sunset's going to try to sell Flash on the idea as well or if she'll oppose Twilight just for the sake of opposing Twilight.

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I was curious myself when writing this how Alpha plans to have Sunset react and had the same thoughts!

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I'm ok with a marquerade scenario where several supernaturals hide on plain sight with only a few selected humans capable of penetrating their magical disguises, like in the Grimm serie

Having 70-80% of the population as monsters and predators in hiding would be Flock of Wolves silliness territory.

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That's also my view on the idea, although admittedly I don't take MLP or clop that seriously, as the EQ universe is already quite ridiculous as-is imo.

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Some of them were explained by Twilight in the latest chapter. Not sure if it will be elaborated on, while I write most of the actual prose (with suggested changes from Alphamon) he came up with the premise and does the basic outlines for each chapter. (Although I add in my own ideas when I feel them appropriate, such as the Lyra/BonBon fantasy scene.)

When are you going to continue?

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