Getting an error when I try and click the story, not familiar with it. Generally Alphamon_Ouryuken sends a summary for each chapter which I then write, adding my occasional ideas here and there. (Such as the Lyra/BonBon bit a while back.) Most of the concepts are his.
Question, based on the footnote about how this was suggested by Alphamon_Ouryuken, was this based on the other succubi fanfic with Twilight, Sunset, Flash, and Cadence, only in that one Flash died instead?
(Side note to anybody, in IRL, a succubus was described as they will allow you to screw them in any form or way you want, any kink or form, but they end up killing you by eating your soul. In the other fanfiction, this happened with Flash)
10755539 Thank you! Alphamon_Ouryuken hasn't given me a premise for the next chapter, hopefully he will eventually or sadly this will be a dead fic. Can't speak to his inspirations, haven't read the fic in question.
10755565 Well, I hope he send you something soon! But if you need any inspiration, you could introduce the rest of the Main 7. Sure, this is a sex fanfic between the three of Twilight, Flash, and Sunset, but it wouldn't hurt to bring in the rest of the friend group.
10755565 Oh, just for context, the entire reason why I suggested that it may be based off of the previous fic was because Alphamon_Ouryuken had made a comment about being interested in a re-write of that other fic. In the re-write, the commenter stated instead of having Flash die, he would be resurrected as an Incubus to get revenge on Sunset and Twilight
Sunset shrugged, her arms crossed. “It's nice to take someone handsome but otherwise so normal and see how much I can 'twist' him. They're all bad boys at heart, deep down. Think of it as the equivalent of the sweet, innocent girl who gets twisted into a kinky dominatrix. It will be a nice challenge to see just how far I can take him, once I let the beast inside of him run wild over me!”
“Oh,” said Twilight in wide-eyed surprise. “Nothing so elaborate, in my case. I need a switch who can be romantic or domineering on the turn of a dime. Someone who can take control when he needs to, but also tend to all my needs! That's not easy to find!”
nice work.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
10650730
10650874
Thanks!
Good stuff, but a bit more detail in Sunlight's appearance and Flash's own transformation would be nice.
10651365
Sorry about that, Alphamon_Ouryuken didn't describe Sunlight so I don't know how she looks.
To the author - Dude...didn't know you updated this story. i'm so late to the party
flash finally got laid, yahoo!
p.s: i have a question regarding flash's incubus form having black hair. did you take inspiration from this image/artist or just pure coincidence?
www.deviantart.com/ro994/art/Hey-there-Midny-767202416
written around Sunday morning on 2/7/21
10669880
Thank you!
Getting an error when I try and click the story, not familiar with it. Generally Alphamon_Ouryuken sends a summary for each chapter which I then write, adding my occasional ideas here and there. (Such as the Lyra/BonBon bit a while back.) Most of the concepts are his.
10669890
no problem. i enjoy your fic very much
Oh! alright then. i'll ask him (that is...if he's willing to answer my question?)
10670913
You're welcome, hope he sends the premise for the next chapter so I can continue.
I can't wait for this to update!
Question, based on the footnote about how this was suggested by Alphamon_Ouryuken, was this based on the other succubi fanfic with Twilight, Sunset, Flash, and Cadence, only in that one Flash died instead?
(Side note to anybody, in IRL, a succubus was described as they will allow you to screw them in any form or way you want, any kink or form, but they end up killing you by eating your soul. In the other fanfiction, this happened with Flash)
EDIT: Said fanfiction is this one
10755539
Thank you! Alphamon_Ouryuken hasn't given me a premise for the next chapter, hopefully he will eventually or sadly this will be a dead fic. Can't speak to his inspirations, haven't read the fic in question.
10755565
Well, I hope he send you something soon! But if you need any inspiration, you could introduce the rest of the Main 7. Sure, this is a sex fanfic between the three of Twilight, Flash, and Sunset, but it wouldn't hurt to bring in the rest of the friend group.
10755585
I prefer to keep the cast small and intimate, but we'll have to see what Alphamon_Ouryuken has in mind!
10755565
Oh, just for context, the entire reason why I suggested that it may be based off of the previous fic was because Alphamon_Ouryuken had made a comment about being interested in a re-write of that other fic. In the re-write, the commenter stated instead of having Flash die, he would be resurrected as an Incubus to get revenge on Sunset and Twilight
So they’re just using him?
10853428
Well, he does get tons of great benefits in return! But I'd expect demons to be selfish!