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Well, Twiggles sure fcked up royally to put it mildly, I wonder how the ending thing goes? Guess we shall see later.
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hah
Twilight, my dear, my face palm is going past the moon.
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god dammit twilight, even celestia said it, DON'T MESS WITH LORENZO
At this point we all saw something coming but still this was not what I expected, why must this Twilight be so fucking stupid? Also the stallion riot is pretty hilarious. I mean they do deserve this but a full on riot like this is not the best way to get things done and the mares can't refuse the stallions because if they do then the stallions can just leave and go to the Crystal Empire.
Honestly this worlds Equestria is fucked if Celestia doesn't start smacking the stupid out of everyone and I wouldn't be surprised if when Lorenzo figures out how to return home she comes to him begging he take her with him so she can be in a world that has some semblance of common sense.
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celestia will be joining the herd when he goes, as discord can raise the sun, so lol
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lol
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the lack of "the wish" getting featured may be due to... ya know... not being updated in a year.
Lorenzo's version of the Salamanders.
new chapter
Okay three things
1. Twilight you are so fucking stupidπΎπΎπΎπΎπΎ
2. I pity the stallions because to go so far as rioting means they've to deal with so much bullshitπππ
3. LORENZO ARMOR LOOK GOOD (AAA MUST BE THE MONEY!!!!!!!!)πΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉ
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HELL YEAH!!!!!! Vulkan: FREE HUGS to the Kirins!!!!!!! ππππ
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Hell Yeah!!!!! Here comes the Money!!!!! π€π€π€π€π€π΅π΅π΅π΅π΅π΅πΈπΈπΈπΈπΈ
*Seeing Twilight FINALLY got what she DESERVED!!!!!
TF2 Scout, Heavy, Demoman, Medic, Soldier, Pyro, Sniper, Engineer, Spy, and Toy Story Woody: HAHAHAHAAHAHHAAHAHHAHAAHHAAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU REALLY F***** UP, REAL BAD!!!!!! Even the Tree itself is on KING Lorenzo's side. But, question: What is it's angle????? I mean, didn't the Tree itself, was the ONE to bring Twilight and the other Five Main Ponies to the Super Crystal Empire in the FIRST PLACE!!!!!! While Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Rarity are VERY LUCKY to be on KING Lorenzo's GOOD side. But, Twilight FAILED FRICKIN Horribly!!!!!!
What was even the TREE'S TEST ANYWAY??????? Was the Tree TRYING to have them Befriend King Lorenzo, the RIGHT WAY, be on his GOOD Side, and NOT TO PISSED HIM OFF????!!!! But, only Twilight Failed???!!!!
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I agree, Twilight IQ is F****** RETARDED, AND HAS THE IDIOT BALL IN HER ASS!!!!!!!
For the Stallions, CAN YOU BLAMED THEM!!!!! I'm just glad they FINALLY got a Big Pair of Balls to do this. πππͺπͺ
Celestia NEEDS to finally give her Pony Subjects Common Sense.
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Interspecies Reviewers dejavu, If you watched a particular episode then you will know
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So I see a plot hole?
Why Twilight was even able to use magic, teleport there?
Lorenzo was mentioning a couple of times in previous chapters about how they did it at the first time
He said that he will have magic, teleportation precautions, etc
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So Empire's aircraft carrier is essentially a Helicarrier?
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The portal gates are magical,as such, it takes a lot of effort to get into one from outside,she worked for weeks on it
The Element bearer hate is getting OLD.
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Your opinion,your entitled to it,but this was planned from the beginning,sorry not sorry lmfao
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ay I was half asleep when I replied the first time, one, I don't HATE twilight, I honestly don't but this is how I decided to take the story, as we know, once she has her mind set to somethin, she refuses to stop, regardless of what happens, like I said, I planned for her to be the crazy stupid fuck from the beginning since I introduced her character, to her, she was completely and flawlessly logical in her planning and thinking, in reality she was slowly going insane because her friends refused to speak with her after she lied to them and nearly could have got em all killed, even spike went to live with fluttershy due to the shit she pulled
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This comment makes more sense. Although I still cant help but see a pattern in your stories involving the ponies.
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*Shrugs* the only pony I don't like is rarity
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Still seems like all of the ponies carry the Idiot ball in your stories for long periods of time.
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*shrug* I'm half asleep rn, so idk how to respond lmfao, regardless, its not what I intend most of the time, I do plan for much bigger things in the future, for both lorenzos empire, his equis, and the kingdoms and empires upon said planet, given time, things shall change, so will equis, already changed by so much, the passage of time shall change all
I do want to point out that assigning 'tests,' especially with no instructions or even letting someone know it's a test, tends to be an element of an abusive relationship. Stuff ain't right.
EDIT: Hold up. 5 million to 5 thousand is 'a thousand to one'. That isn't disproportionate, that's extinction unless the males are strapped to semen milking machines all day in lieu of a job. Even a hundred to one is some seriously bad juju.
now this was a fine piece of work