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have to wonder if lorenzo is keeping an eye on the humans
OOoh this gon b good also FIRST!!!!!!!
'ell yeah
edit: the zetan energy rifle looks like a sci-fi version of the model 1876 lever-action rifle
That's what I wrote before, he shouldn't have given Equestria that technology without giving it also to griffons,he should have given it to them both on the Meeting Of Kingdoms.
Equestria will be that spoiled brat that will want things for free because it "deserves" it , something like Blueblood but as a country and will be looked down by others for that
10412523
actually the main reason is celestia can atomize lorenzos empire if she deems that technology THAT important, remember he always keeps in mind how damned powerful she really is
great chapter friend
10412536
Not really he has more powerful stuff.
She can't do anything if something attacks with orbital bombardment from the space for example
Even if she wanted to use the sun then the whole planet would die and her ponies too
10412560
no dork, she does not need to use the sun to melt the crystal empire to slag
10412560
King Lorenzo can EASILY kick her Ass, if she step out of line.
10412574
And you don't have to be in some Sayan,super mode to kill her
All you need is one accurate shot in either head or heart
10412577
Perhaps in your own stories and or headcannon, but in my story she is a goddess, unless the star she controls dies, she won't die, she will heal from whatever the hell ya toss at her, you can incapacitate her, true, but you can NOT kill her
10412536
At this point not really, you have made Lorenzo stupidly OP, even if Celestia would vaporize the New Crystal Empire Lorenzzi has now a star fleet that probably counts in the million ready to glass the planet at a moment notice not to mention the Akun empire which counts in the billions.
Lastly vaporize the New Crystal Empire at this point would probably require enough firepower that would doom the whole world, or at least do irreversible damage to the planet itself.
Seriously you made Lorenzo so OP im stating to think that this is some kind of self insert power fantasy of yours.
10412592
lorenzos fleet is not in the millions, its in the couple thousands, take that from the zetans which have several million, or several billion starships, each armed with a max power deathray, and control a huge chunk of the galaxy back in Lorenzo's universe (aka his Equis) and are a real threat to the empire and are going to appear in the next installment, may I remind you of that? I've stated it in the story itself, now if ya don't like the story as it is right now, I invite you to walk away, if not, then shut up for fausts sake, ya'll don't know where the story will go, for all you know in the next chapter everyone will die XD, they won't, but the point is you don't know this until I say it, in this series, Celestia, Luna, Discord, are on par with ACTUAL GODS, and if ya don't like that, too bad lol
10412606
Butt hurt much, one would think an author would like for his audience to keep reading his work.
I may have gotten the numbers wrong but the main point still stands Lorenzo still can glass the planet with ease while Celestia can’t do much without fucking herself over and GODS really? have you forgotten how your Gods were bested and mind controlled by mere mortals and our OP protagonist had to save their flanks?
The problem here is that you’ve made Lorenzo so stupidly OP that you had to make up something like the Zetans with billions of ship to even have hope of challenging him, and whats after that, an army that counts in the trillions, the TRUE GOD, the DOOM SLAYER?
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I do like it when people read my story, however. I'm looking at this, from a logical POV, from what we see in fallout 3, and several random theories and ideas people threw around that I happen to like, the zetans are advanced, the zetans have the ability and ease to go into and from other solar systems with such speed it would make a modern NASA scientist flip the hell out, and then we have to take into account how powerful that deathray is, which someone on Reddit calculated to what I see as the most accurate anyone has tried, here's a link to that
https://www.reddit.com/r/Fallout/comments/52fhqz/ever_wonder_how_powerful_the_mothership_zeta/
Lorenzo can glass the planet, yes, however like I said, Discord, Celestia, and Luna, are gods in all but name except Discord, who calls himself the Lord of Chaos, the God of Chaos, and has the power to prove it, Celestia and Luna ain't no lil firecrackers either, perhaps not as powerful as discord himself, but one controls a sun, the other can lob a moon at you at several times the speed of light with the wave of a hoof, the zetans pose a real threat to not only the empire, but equis as a hole, I won't go into more detail, as that would spoil to much, but lorenzo has a fleet for a reason, his empire advances at the rate it does, for more than one reason as well, but, if this hasn't sated ya, then shrug I'ma be on my way, I'm going to sleep and I simply do not feel like arguing with someone lol
10412619
Don't forget he have to build himself to become what he is today everything was not given to him on a silver platter and don't forget that other creatures out there that's even smarter than he is so don't start calling him god yet this is no rick and morty.
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The problem is that you’re not addressing the problem posed.
It doesn’t matter that Celestia can control the sun at what speed, what she’s gonna do drop on the planet and fuck herself over with it and you keep saying they’re GODS but you never show this in the story, heck you do the complete opposite make them powerless and inept otherwise they wouldn't have run to Lorenzo asking for help or for him to save their sorry flanks.
Plus in that universe moving their sun hardly classifies as a GODLY feet as in the past it was done by few unicorns working together.
If you want us to believe they’re GODS show it in the story not the comments section.
10412619
If you really think about it he could have stayed as a alicorn then you could have said he had a god complex a alicorn body in the power of technology.
10412649
I just realize you're new here aren't you did you read A New Empire before you read A New Empire War And Peace
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But it was given to him? I don’t clearly remember the first chapter of the prequel but I recall it was your basic merchant intro which gave him immortality and access to all his stuff from Fallout games including console commands if I recall properly so he’s pretty much a GOD, he didn’t have to learn anything or do much at all just spawn stuff that made other stuff for him.
10412650
That kinda proves that the is “GOD” or on par with ALICORNS after all why didn’t the flower just turn him into a regular pony, it would have the same effect but instead it chose the form of a “GOD”.
10412661
He didn't meet a merchant he basically died in his sleep
10412661
Also he's not immortal he just can't die and I natural way so basically he has eternal life you can remove an eternal life person soul put inside of a jar imprison him or if Princess Celestia once trap them in the center of a star
10412649
Ya know, sunbutt could just glass the Crystal Empire kinda same way in halo, I mean has control of the sun she could just focus its power into one point aka the city and just remove it, then there's space, she could do many things she could just move the side into Lorenzo's fleet and whatever is to close to planet could just get solar flared to death, shields or not a constant or near constant wave of super heated plasma, radiation and EMP would probably do plenty of damage to a metal starship, then there's the moon and meteors
10412661
and also if you were such a god why haven't he taken over the world yet he have the technology to do it oh and the alicorn thing
Alicorn of Technology
alicorn of the sun the moon of love and magic
10412661
I think he was playing fallout 4 ,started some unknown mod and waked up somewhere close to Crystal Empire , in summary
Good point, also alicorn status along with other body parts like horn can be taken away by another alicorn like with Twilight and Cadence.If I remember right Twilight's horn was taken away from her along with wings.
10412631
It actually pretty smart for him not to call himself like that for a couple fo reasons.
1.
If he called himself a god of chaos then he would be targeted by much stronger beings and real gods, for practically naming himself a god,staining the title . His chaos is childish chaos ,It's nothing close for example to chaos gods from Warhammer or Bill CIpher's chaos . Now that I'm thinking about it even Bill CIpher didn't arrogantly call himself a god but humbly and more fitting a dream demon.
2.
The title doesn't hold much of power and awe because of wannabe gods,demigods, mortals calling themselves gods.The powerful beings choose to use other titles that arent tainted by arrogance of others
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In all of these cases, the planet would be doomed
It would still affect the planet
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Look at this for example ,even if sun was much smaller it would still kill the planet .
She can't also focus the power fo the sun sun, how that would even work?Touch the spot with the planet ? Again planetary doom
Along with the fucking planet
It's the sun, not a fucking sniper rifle where you can aim and measure the power ,you would fuck the planet too no matter what.
Also, Lorenzo spaceships and technology isn't affected by EMP like when Akun attempted that and others things too.
Also, his spaceships won't just stay in one place and take the hit
They also aren't slow like a moving sun is ,that can also just slip from her grasp and launch itself into space XD
DON'T do anything Stupid, otherwise you REGRET it!
Stop being such a Bitch! You should be GRATEFUL that King Lorenzo have gone the "Easy/ being Merciful" on you, otherwise you end up like the other IDIOTIC Kings/Queens that DIED HORRIBLE DEATHS to King Lorenzo's Overpowered Empire.
Yep, Celestia had it LUCKILY!
That is why your IDIOTIC Mother is DEAD, and luckily your not. Because, you have Common Sense, and a nice ruler. And you knew that "Reducing the Empire" threat is F***** BULLSHIT! And you have NEGATIVE 1,000 chances to win.
SEE! You still get Advanced Technology by asking NICELY! Everyone Wins!
10412671
Tomato tomato it’s the reason why I usually skip the first chapter it’s always similar shit.
10412665
You do know what immortal means right? It means that said person can’t DIE at all, like Discord, you can trap him, imprison him but he cannot be killed, it’s not the same as eternal life that only means you won’t die from old age you still can be quiet easily killed.
Fun fact there are few organisms on earth which have eternal life they do not age, and unless killed they could live forever.
Lorenzo so far hasn’t show any signs of ageing and all attempts of assassination have him beat Jessus time at re-spawning
10412673
Maybe she could pull of glassing the Crystal Empire without super heating the entire planet but good luck trying to hit spaceships by waving the sun blindly around the solar system, ships that can move at FTL speeds mind you.
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Because he’s not a tyrannical dick, Lorenzo has never shown any interest in conquest as he doesn't even need to, the only times he conquered something is when he was defending his Empire.
10412714
It would be like trying to hit a couple of flies while swinging a propane tank or something similar over your head XD
10412714
I think you don't know the difference between eternal life and immortality so let me tell you haven't eternal life meaning that you may live forever but you can still feel pain you can still get hurt it just won't stay for long immortality allows you to never feel pain you don't need sleep you don't need to eat basically death can't touch you and the scars that you use that have on you led face that you used to have keyword used to have immortality gives you a clean body and that's the immortal you don't have to deal with normal Mortals problems the last time I protagonist can be killed can be poisoned can get injured he is not immortal and he does not have eternal life he is just recalling his own death.
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You and I have obviously have different definition for immortal and eternal life, but even in your incorrect definition Lorenzo still qualifie as both immortal and having eternal life as at one point in the story he was dirty or something and rather than deal with the trouble dealing with it like mortal he shot himself in the head and respawnded fresh and clean.
Same when he was poisoned re-spawn cleared that right up, he doesn’t need to eat, sleep, or worry about injures when a bullet to the head fixes everything.
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Real immortality is being unable to die permanently in short
For example, alicorns and discord are long living ,they just don't age or age much slower but still can die permanently
Lorenzo has something close to real immortality but not close enough because he can be killed temporarily.
The best version of immortality is to not be able to die from anything but also to have the ability to respawn, reconstruct the body, reappear, etc when you want to escape if you are trapped.
In short using multiple vessels in a way like some kind of force ghost from star wars for example.
10412649
if you don't like the story why don't you make us a story if you can make your story unlike everybody else's story i will keep my mouth closed
So there's different types of immortality so i'm not wrong but i'm also not right
10412752
That right there is a child way of thinking, just because im not a writer doesn’t mean I can’t see and criticise bad writing and I do like this story but if you like or love something you have to be able to see flaws in it, I criticise parts of it because I want it to be better.
I wouldn’t be wasting my time commenting or reading it if I found it really bad.
10412750
EXACTLY, thank you for getting it, in the show we have seen Discord nearly die when he tried to be orderly and the Alicorns as we have seen can stripped of their Alicornhood or have their magic drained and we’ve never seen them critically wounded like ripped heart or head exploded to confirm if they’re immortal at all and not just have regeneration abilities, thou we’ve seen them needing time to heal.
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Duh i forgot to mention if sunbutt is a god she could just use her power to shield planet, or not I mean I m dead tired and doing school work so feel free to yeet my comment
10412773
Do you have to discard
10412776
I think you should rest to think straight again after homework/school work
Did you even think about what you just wrote and how much trouble it creates?
Shielding the whole planet?
Shielding the whole planet in itself would have a negative effect on the planet don't even count that even if Celestia was able somehow do it she would accomplish it only for like a second and after this, she would need to rest ,be bedridden for a long time and that's only if you count the damage done by just starting the spell
10412761
Not really, what you were describing sounds more like.
https://powerlisting.fandom.com/wiki/Transcendent_Physiology
Which immortality is part of but one can have immortality without Transcendent_Physiology.
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Discord? Sadly no.
10412776
Pretty much but if she truly was a GOD then she could do like Discord snap her fingers and make all her problems go away, it’s like Mitrill said the term “GOD” is just overused by every wannabe out there,
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BUT SHE”S A GODDES SHE CAN DO ANYTHING SHE WANTS!!!
* Reading ALL of the Comments on Chapter 61 Specifically.*
* Mainly to Mitril, Shadowflameking/Author, Foxsevent, DarkKing2, Xblaster *
OKAY, OKAY! Would you'll PLEASE stop with the fighting and the Arguing!!!
Now then, some of you might think I'm stepping out of line. But, firstly I DON'T care. And second, I just want this argument to be OVER already before it gets VERY HEATED!
Personally, I think that King Lorenzo vs Celestia/ King Lorenzo's Crystal Empire vs Equestria sounds really STUPID, UNREALISTIC, and the HIGH POSSIBILITY of NOT happening in the First Place!
I will explain on WHY, and to make some Good Points/examples on it. And to finally find a way to solve/ending the arguing in the process.
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One day you will
10412794
Didn't you argue with someone else before in some other story or group?
I swear I remember that I saw you cringy long name before today or yesterday or both
10412794
Sheesh chill dude no one is fighting here were just having a civilised discussion, granted we could be doing on discord or something but whatever.
As for it could never happen point, as the author himself said he could write everyone dying in the next chapter if he wanted to, plus Lorenzo VS Celestia isn’t such a far fetched idea in this story she was once mind controlled remember? plus alternate version of her could attack.
10412806
True, but that was a different story all together. It's just you'll put ALOT of your comments on the "King Lorenzo vs Celestia", "Using the Sun as a Deus ex machina", and "King Lorenzo's Immortality/ God Power Status" situations. And I was getting a bit annoyed. So I apologized if I offend any of you.
And you are correct. I also see you in other stories/Comments as well. But the "cringy long name" part. Really.
I get that my User name is long. But to be fair, NOT everyone can have a Very Good User Name without being cringy in the first place.
Plus, I like to have a Overpowered Badass Name. With some Dragon Ball Z/GT/Super, Warhammer 40K, Star Wars and DOOM Game Series references.
10412807
Well it's sounds like one to me. Even though it's a "Civilized Discussion", All of you combine put over 10-15 Comments about a CRAZY "What If" of Celestia going COO COO CRAZY, and use the DAMN SUN on King Lorenzo's Empire. And the other stuff of Lorenzo's Immortality, and Lorenzo/Celestia/Luna/Discord's God Status.
I also DON'T even use Discord anyway. 🤷
And the "Everyone dying" thing sounds REALLY TERRIBLE! An STUPID/HORRIBLE BAD ENDING! And everyone ( Both the Author/Readers) WON'T like it! Besides, realistically, Lorenzo could EASILY prevent the "End of the World/Apocalypse" situation.
Didn't King Lorenzo ALREADY help Celestia with the Mind Control already from the Nasty Nobles. And I thought King Lorenzo ALREADY Defeated /Killed an Evil Verison of Celestia. Unless I'm confused from another Fic. But Besides a point, I DON'T want Celestia acting like a Out Of Character Bitch, and just be another "Enemy" to King Lorenzo.
I like for them to be Good Friends, and Competent Allies. Maybe even Lovers.
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foxsevent just repeated what the author wrote ,that everyone can just die ,so yeah
Another fic
He only killed Umbra (female Sombra) and Chrysalis form his world . There was also a mafia-style loking diamond dog.Here .....I don't think he killed anyone important here
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It is a bit silly what if that did spiral a bit, it manly came out of the author saying that Celestia is a goddess that can’t be killed unless the sun itself dies which just brought up the whole Alicorn = GOD dilemma among other issues like saying she could use the power of sun to melt the Crystal Empire. Plus we talked about Lorenzo OP levels, definition of immortality and such, it’s not just 15 comments of Celestia wins, no Lorenzo wins.
My main issue from the start is do not tell in comments show in story, if Celestia truly is a goddes make it apparent in the fic and not make her powerless and inept.
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I know, my comment is mainly for the Author. And hope he DOESN'T make it happen!
So it was Another Fic, thanks. And I know which King/Queen/Leader Enemies he have Killed. I read the Stories.
P.S. You didn't answer the rest of my comments. Mainly the "Cringy Name" Part.
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If you don't want for people to notice the name that much or think about it try using an avatar, it takes attention from the username
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I know. Besides, personally Celestia DOESN'T stand a chance. Because she is NOT a "True God/Goddess". She is BUT an ANT compared to Warhammer 40K's God Emperor of Mankind, the Chaos Gods, Gravity Falls Bill Cipher, and Dragon Ball Super's Gods of Destruction, Angels, Grand Priest/Daishinkan, and Zeno. etc.
I mean, she is EASILY beaten in the Canon Show. And don't get me started on the Mind Control thing from the Nobles. Plus, their are Anti-Magic Rings for the Horns for a REASON! And the Magic Absorbing Artifacts and Grogar's Bell in the Season 8/9.
Plus the Moon and Sun AREN'T that Special. I seen Weapons and Anime Powers that can DESTROY the Moons, Planets, Suns, and even the Solar System/Galaxy in other media. ( Star Wars Death Star, Starkiller Base, Sun Crusher from Legends. Dragon Ball Z/GT/Super's Universal/Multiverse Busting Tier Heroes and Villains.)
King Lorenzo COULD have just made (With the Right Materials, Technology, and even Magic) an Anti-Sun/Moon Killing Weapon as a LAST RESORT!I
Plus, King Lorenzo's Respawn is the BEST Immortality, so far. Sure he can feel pain and die. But, at least he comes back, STRONGER, SMARTER than ever. And not aging is a GOOD perk.