Sundance, a young MechWarrior recruit, must fight in a war he has no part in. When push comes to shove, will he follow orders and pray for survival? Or will he do what he knows is right at the almost certain risk of death?
I really had wanted this to be the last chapter, but I got about halfway through the battle and realized I was already at 8k words. For real this time, the next chapter should actually be the last one (excluding the epilogue).
I think this was one of the best chapters you did yet. Cotton, Obsidian and Hazelnut were a lot of fun to read as they really did felt like part of this word. I take it they managed to reach the rank of commanding a ship because of managed to pull off risky suicidal stunts in succeeding their missions that the Trueborn wouldn't have ever dared to consider. I would love to see more of their life exploits in the Clan and wonder if they will take on a 'mentor' role for the main cast of the story, and what insane lessons they will teach them while leading them? It was lice to have more of an explanation as to why the planet was so important, or at least who it would invite almost certain death and destruction to Clan Draconequis in a decapitating strike of other Clan Khans which could pull all the other Clans to fight one another because of the even. From the sounds of it the Freeborns are used to make a sacrificial attack on the planet because they never were planned to be recovered or survive the counter attack in the first place; I take it their loyalty would always be put into question being freeborn and all, which they were right, so they though of them as expendable troup. I wonder how are the the other characters are doing at the moment? How many mechs or troups were planned to take part on the attack anyway? Keep up the good work.
I really would have loved to do a cover art of a mech designs, but I really don't care draw existing design, I much prefer doing my own original one.
I really had wanted this to be the last chapter, but I got about halfway through the battle and realized I was already at 8k words. For real this time, the next chapter should actually be the last one (excluding the epilogue).
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Awwwwwwwwww!
I think this was one of the best chapters you did yet. Cotton, Obsidian and Hazelnut were a lot of fun to read as they really did felt like part of this word. I take it they managed to reach the rank of commanding a ship because of managed to pull off risky suicidal stunts in succeeding their missions that the Trueborn wouldn't have ever dared to consider. I would love to see more of their life exploits in the Clan and wonder if they will take on a 'mentor' role for the main cast of the story, and what insane lessons they will teach them while leading them? It was lice to have more of an explanation as to why the planet was so important, or at least who it would invite almost certain death and destruction to Clan Draconequis in a decapitating strike of other Clan Khans which could pull all the other Clans to fight one another because of the even. From the sounds of it the Freeborns are used to make a sacrificial attack on the planet because they never were planned to be recovered or survive the counter attack in the first place; I take it their loyalty would always be put into question being freeborn and all, which they were right, so they though of them as expendable troup. I wonder how are the the other characters are doing at the moment? How many mechs or troups were planned to take part on the attack anyway? Keep up the good work.
I really would have loved to do a cover art of a mech designs, but I really don't care draw existing design, I much prefer doing my own original one.
How is Freebirth a slur?
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I don't know, it just is. I'm not the one who came up with it.