Sundance, a young MechWarrior recruit, must fight in a war he has no part in. When push comes to shove, will he follow orders and pray for survival? Or will he do what he knows is right at the almost certain risk of death?
interesting chapter, I wonder what spured Sundance to recall the details of his kid/foalnaping in the middle of a simulation? I thoug the medical ward scene was fun and the new characters presented were interesting. For the Equestria I would feel that Discord really was OOC on this one, at least with all those apparent centuries he had been around he seems to have changed a lot to actually shows clear anger and frustrations for caring about the colonies that were attacked centuries ago and to actually bowing to Celestia's judgment. What could have possibly changed so much in him to from schemer and trickster to an authority figure. Could it be that some of his iridescence might have migrated there some time in history? What were the stakes for him to still be flustered by it and why didn't he used his old tricks to sew discord in the Clan's ranks, after all that would be his calling card. It was good to see little more world building in this chapter and it is enough for me to want to know more in what could happen next. Wonder if there has been more alicorns that have appear over the centuries and what could they be doing?
Looking forward to the next chapter
Comment posted by Black--Soul deleted Oct 16th, 2021
interesting chapter, I wonder what spured Sundance to recall the details of his kid/foalnaping in the middle of a simulation? I thoug the medical ward scene was fun and the new characters presented were interesting. For the Equestria I would feel that Discord really was OOC on this one, at least with all those apparent centuries he had been around he seems to have changed a lot to actually shows clear anger and frustrations for caring about the colonies that were attacked centuries ago and to actually bowing to Celestia's judgment. What could have possibly changed so much in him to from schemer and trickster to an authority figure. Could it be that some of his iridescence might have migrated there some time in history? What were the stakes for him to still be flustered by it and why didn't he used his old tricks to sew discord in the Clan's ranks, after all that would be his calling card. It was good to see little more world building in this chapter and it is enough for me to want to know more in what could happen next. Wonder if there has been more alicorns that have appear over the centuries and what could they be doing?
Looking forward to the next chapter