I freaking love this. The drama, the dark tones, it's all so... real. It's like I'm actually watching a man fall apart, something that I, sadly, have a lot of experience with.
Yeah, real open and welcoming place. Considering his last interaction with the Lunar Guard, I'm surprised he doesn't just bring up his concerns with Luna. She'd be his boss, and it'd be irresponsible of her if she were to insist on his joining if they're going to ultimately be like the Day Guard (as it looks to be).
The simplest solution would be to travel to the past, then go to the place the portal appeared and just get inside again, you don't need to travel through space AND time, just one after the other, first time, then space, 24 hours is more than enough to do the trip.
9454700 Twilight has a time travel spell, though it only lets you stay about 30 seconds, I think is enough time to do a scan of the portal, where it comes from, how much power, etc. etc.
The coverart has the Titanic in it but the description doesn't mention anything of it, so, does this story involve the Titanic or a ponified version what so ever?
I get if it’s a personal choice to call it that, but I’ve always heard it called the ”Lunar Guard”, not the “Luna Guard”. Also, faved and liked, and awaiting more!
9493022 Hmm. I’ve done some reading on the subject and from what I can gather, “Luna” which is identical to the Latin roots, is just the name, but the adjective is ”Lunar” most of the time. Technically, Luna Guard still works but one doesn't say “Celestia Guard,” they say Solar Guard or Day Guard. In short, I think you might be right. I might have to change that. Sigh. Why does language have to be so complicated?
Hey great story so far but the only thing is the dialogue could make someone have to go back and reread to see who is doing an action in the conversation while another is talking. Like towards the end of the last chapter when our main man is talking with Supernova and Azure about his people, i could see the reason you could write it like you have however. A specific line that comes to mind is when Nova says “Just wondering” when asking about his sleep patterns, with only a space in between him yawning and her dialogue it somewhat makes it sound like HE is just wondering, not Nova. Other than that I’m liking this very much.
Hesitant fav. Don't get me wrong, I'm actually loving this story. Only thing is the 3 months without a chapter that has me worried. I've got so many great fics in perpetual favorite even though the author put a bullet in em'.
9634590 Yeah sorry about that. I have been really busy lately but I AM still working on it. The new chapter is called “Water” and It’s 3/4 done already. Feel free to join my discord if you want updates on what I’m doing (link below)
Interesting, he drowned? He better be careful, demons in magic-horse-land aren't a thing to just brush off... It's actually quite likely he's being literally attacked from a certain dream monster type...
I freaking love this. The drama, the dark tones, it's all so... real. It's like I'm actually watching a man fall apart, something that I, sadly, have a lot of experience with.
Yeah, real open and welcoming place. Considering his last interaction with the Lunar Guard, I'm surprised he doesn't just bring up his concerns with Luna. She'd be his boss, and it'd be irresponsible of her if she were to insist on his joining if they're going to ultimately be like the Day Guard (as it looks to be).
The simplest solution would be to travel to the past, then go to the place the portal appeared and just get inside again, you don't need to travel through space AND time, just one after the other, first time, then space, 24 hours is more than enough to do the trip.
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Maybe, but remember that he has been in Equestria for almost a year. so the spell is useless passed the 24 hours.
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Twilight has a time travel spell, though it only lets you stay about 30 seconds, I think is enough time to do a scan of the portal, where it comes from, how much power, etc. etc.
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yes but she can only go back for a week, not 11 months
Someone thought of a safe password that is almost fully ponyproof...
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That was part of the reason yes. You get a cookie.
The coverart has the Titanic in it but the description doesn't mention anything of it, so, does this story involve the Titanic or a ponified version what so ever?
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Spoilers... ;)
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Let me know in PM then, the involvement of the Titanic will determine if i read this or not
I get if it’s a personal choice to call it that, but I’ve always heard it called the ”Lunar Guard”, not the “Luna Guard”. Also, faved and liked, and awaiting more!
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Hmm. I’ve done some reading on the subject and from what I can gather, “Luna” which is identical to the Latin roots, is just the name, but the adjective is ”Lunar” most of the time.
Technically, Luna Guard still works but one doesn't say “Celestia Guard,” they say Solar Guard or Day Guard. In short, I think you might be right. I might have to change that.
Sigh. Why does language have to be so complicated?
Anyway thanks for pointing that out. /)
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No problem, man! (\
Hey great story so far but the only thing is the dialogue could make someone have to go back and reread to see who is doing an action in the conversation while another is talking. Like towards the end of the last chapter when our main man is talking with Supernova and Azure about his people, i could see the reason you could write it like you have however. A specific line that comes to mind is when Nova says “Just wondering” when asking about his sleep patterns, with only a space in between him yawning and her dialogue it somewhat makes it sound like HE is just wondering, not Nova. Other than that I’m liking this very much.
I'm glad to see you've continued his story. I love the polyamory and RGRE elements. I look forward to reading the next chapter when it's ready.
Hesitant fav. Don't get me wrong, I'm actually loving this story. Only thing is the 3 months without a chapter that has me worried. I've got so many great fics in perpetual favorite even though the author put a bullet in em'.
Hmmm. Curious...
-Ru
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Yeah sorry about that. I have been really busy lately but I AM still working on it. The new chapter is called “Water” and It’s 3/4 done already. Feel free to join my discord if you want updates on what I’m doing (link below)
discord.gg/xKHqMmM
Interesting, he drowned?
He better be careful, demons in magic-horse-land aren't a thing to just brush off... It's actually quite likely he's being literally attacked from a certain dream monster type...