Beside a few spelling errors, this seem intriguing.

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Yeah just spotted those this morning myself. -facepalm- I was so sure I’d got them all

It needs a bit more puns

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this is good, Pls keep going

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Personally, I found these jokes to be very ... ”punny”.

I do wonder if you found them all, however. Some are a lot more subtle than others.

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Get this bitch a Canon bitches love cannons

Awe, murderous kawaii bat waifu

I'm still not seeing how him being the the Night Guard is a good thing. Azure hated him even after he both helped her and she found he was an omnivore. It really doesn't seem like anything has changed or that he's actually in a non-abusive environment, she just wants to bed him now. Nothing says any of them actually treat him with respect or kindness given none of them did before.

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Patience, young one. Patience. This is only chapter 1 of like 10 or 11 (I’m still planning some of it out). All will be explained in due time.

That human seem to get some attention ;3

9437216 since you asked so nicely...
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I am enjoying this story. have a like :)

Skye is infatuated, totally. Silly human didn't even notice her thinly-veiled flirts...