Not really. Scarlet was both incompetent and a pot smoker, and Silent Watch didn't have any reason to believe her story about the slime. Any real life officer in his position would have done the same.
i did not expect to enjoy this as much as i did its got me tithing for more. whilst ive wached the anime that this is inspiried from it really does feel real as mentioned by others. it feels like whilst slimey boy is powerful but he feels more animalistic at the same time whilst there character are developing. so i must applaud you for the way you have portrayed them. Keep the fires of passion stoked with this story its a right cracker and i look forward to how it will be developed.
Hope to see more
This is actually an amazing story. I love plots like this and characters seem great so far. Plz give me more I beg you
Realllllly hope to see more just got into the anime this kinda base on
Hitching a ride ey ?
Good
I loves slime manga/anime. But this feels more real sort off. Hope slime helps her as much as he can. She deserves it
I'm definitely enjoying this. It's just fun to read.
Can’t wait until next one
wow, the guards are dicks
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Not really. Scarlet was both incompetent and a pot smoker, and Silent Watch didn't have any reason to believe her story about the slime. Any real life officer in his position would have done the same.
9556025
Except she wasn’t incompetent.
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That is true. She was actually very competent. Maybe not in protcol or anything, but in terms of grit and dedication, extremely so.
I hope you'll give us more, because I liked this.
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I plan to. Have patience friend
i did not expect to enjoy this as much as i did its got me tithing for more. whilst ive wached the anime that this is inspiried from it really does feel real as mentioned by others. it feels like whilst slimey boy is powerful but he feels more animalistic at the same time whilst there character are developing. so i must applaud you for the way you have portrayed them. Keep the fires of passion stoked with this story its a right cracker and i look forward to how it will be developed.
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thank you friend...
Si actualizará más seguido sería perfecto
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Muchos gracias heffe, but I have no idea what you’re saying really
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I'm reading with the automatic translator, I spoke Spanish Latin
I don't ask much but is this dead. Or are you slow on output? I don't mind as long as I know.
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All my story updates are crazy and more than likely spread out. Sorry, I’m a college student, what do you expect?
That's understandable. Thanks for the explanation.
Liked, tracked, strong potential to fav...
O come on... It just started and tugs on my heartstrings just to let me wait for more... How cruel
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Did you foget about the parts where her superior has been falsifying documents to the Captain?
She's not incompetent.
I like this. It is written well, and it’s very interesting. Also, the rich guard is probably going to pay later.