So this is the story from your blog

Well now, this is a pleasant surprise.

I already starting to like this story.

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Yup

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Glad you are enjoying it

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How so?

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There isn't many stories where someone is Displaced as Cloud.

I'm liking this!

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Thanks!

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Let alone people displaced together and not wanting to get on with the locals

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I've seen a few of those, people tend to not balance two different Displaced.

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I think he meant
about this story have two IDPs
instead of just one

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It's rather easy. Just have one be the main protagonist and use the other as a secondary one

A bit ironic that the Cloud Displaced is named Zack

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That was the joke

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makes sense

"Deal." I said, pulling out my card before Sarah could. "Consider it my treat." I told her as she gave me a smile... But why was she blushing?

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Because we need some romantic and sexual tension to keep people returning. Lol jk, all will be explained why he rarely shows or understand emotions unless it is to Sarah later

I need more

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More will be coming in a moment. RN I am preparing for a job interview in a few days

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Good luck dude, I need to start searching for a job

Yes. All of my yes.

Also, that conversation at the start was very much lol!

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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I'm working on it. With the exception of Transferance, I've been going through and updating each of my stories. Still wishing for someone to adopt Transferance

This was a epic start.