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...You know, I'm suddenly getting a really bad feeling about-
-this...Goddamnit.
One of them
Emberis gonna end up sneaking in, get caught, and bring all hell down on them. And/or Yeoman is going to show up. Heck, I bet what's going to probably happen is they accidentally set off some kind of alarm while sneaking around that blows their cover and draws Yeoman over.Fun times dead ahead.
This whole chapter gave me Disney Atlantis vibes, especially how protective of their secrets Teka's brother is.
As for the issue with Teka, I'm willing to guess she must've had a misunderstanding/disagreement with her brother or did something to embarrass/enrage him, and was exiled because of it. Probably wrong but something tells me it's super complicated between those two.
Also, I just noticed how we're approaching the same amount of chapters from the previous story. I'm pretty sure we're well past the halfway mark of this story already, but now I'm getting a little anxious that the story's going to start building up the tension towards a thoroughly feels-destroying finale.
I mean, the smart thing to do is explain the situation in detail and have someone who *is* allowed to go in go in and get and/or wipe the code. I doubt they're going to be able to manage it though, unless one of them can learn the language, since the chief probably isn't going to want to talk to them.
Failing that... have Surge get zapped into Teka's body for a while?