• Published 8th Dec 2018
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Anon-a-Miss: A Wrinkle in Time (Rewrite) - Guardian Amy

After Sunset Shimmer committed suicide due to Anon-a-Miss, her friends travel the universe to find her lost soul.

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Prologue: Part 2

Author's Note:

Sorry this short chapter took two weeks to rewrite and it doesn't have a lot of words.

But I hope this is good enough to be worth the wait.

Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo headed to the barn of Sweet Apple Acres. Apple Bloom was inside, very pale and looking like she was about to cry. She was holding her phone in her shaking hands looking at the horrible deed they've done.

"Apple Bloom!" said Sweetie concerned, "Is everything okay?"

"No!" she said suddenly, "everythin' is not okay!"

"What do you mea-"

"Ah mean that we went too far; we gotta confess and put an end to Anon-a-Miss."

"What!" said Sweetie and Scootaloo in union.

"Apple Bloom, you know if we did that, we'll be in big trouble!" Scootaloo protested, "We could possibly be expelled!"

"Then why we did it in tha first place! We are not gonna' do somethin' that Sunset's gonna pay for."

"But why?" Sweetie protested, "The plan's working so well. Our sisters stopped hanging with Sunset and spending more time with us!"

"Rainbow's finally teaching me those soccer moves she promised!"

"STOP!" shouted Apple Bloom, though her voice wasn't loud enough to get Granny Smith and Big Mac to hear, "Ah saw everythin' that happened the Sunset. Ah thought everyone would blame her; but Ah didn't think she would be bullied. Her friend said so many mean things tah her."

"Like what?" asked Scoots.

Git outta our lives, y'good fer nothin' liar.

Good riddance! Everyone will do much better without you Sunset.

I hope I never see you again she-demon!

Go back to where you came from, secret-stealer!

You're not our friend!

"Oh. My. God!" gasped Scootaloo.

"What are we gonna do?" said Sweetie Belle.

"Confess and delete the account," Bloom said quietly.


"We can't do that! If we did, we could be in big trouble. Or expelled!"

"Can't we just delete it and pretend this never happened?"

"We can't, it won't do anything, and people are still gonna think Sunset did it."


"Guys, just think 'bout it: for a month now, Sunset bin payin' tha price for Anon-a-Miss, she suffered enough. Think 'bout it y'all, if we get expelled, at least we still have each other. But Sunset's friends are all she has. We have to do this guy."

Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo looked at each other than Apple Bloom. What she said hit them.

"You're right."

"What have we done."

The girls made an apology video right there and then.

Meanwhile at Sugarcube Corner...

The (hu)mane 5 were still in the cafe, pissed off about what happened.

Dash was clenching her teeth and fists in rage. Rarity just looked at her nails looking angry but somewhat sad. Pinkie's hair was slightly deflated as she had a sad expression. And Fluttershy was crying hard as AJ rested a comforting hand on the shy girl's shoulder.

"Why- why would she do this?" Fluttershy chokes between hiccuped sobs, "And after all, we did for her?"

"She was just waiting for the right time to strike Fluttershy." Stated Applejack.

"We should have seen this coming," Dash said angrily as she finished deleting the last photos of Sunset on her phone.

"Hey look," said Pinkie blankly, "Sunset left her journal here."

"Keep it," said AJ', "we'll need it in case of any magical emergencies."

"Get a pen," said Dash coldly.


"We need Twilight! She is the only person who can fix this."

"But why, darling?"

"Just think about the times Sunshit's been bullying us. Broke up our friendship. And she's trying to do it again. Twilight is the only person who can teach that demon a lesson. Are you gonna let her rule the school again, or are you gonna join me."

The girls looked at each other and nodded.

"I'm in!"

"So am I"

"You've got me in"

Fluttershy remained silent and looked at her feet.

"Well 'Shy"

"I'm in..." she sighed.

Pinkie handed Dash a pen as she grabbed the book

"We should have blasted her with our friendship blast in the battle of the bands when we had the chance. I hate you Sunset," she grumbled under her breath as she scribbled down:

Dear Princess Twilight Sparkle...