There's a parallel reality where Flash Sentry grew up as a sweet, delicate, and girly femboi. Now, his lonely life turns rosier as he's reunited with Sunset and her friends... who happen to be hot Amazonian futas. Life lesson? Sissy pets are magic.
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God damn the flurry of emotions in this chapter was crazy pretty awesome though
This chapter had my heart and more going everywhere, from start to finish. And I'm happy most of all the truth has come out,now we can see how they move forward.
The cards are on the table! Or at least, most of them.
Sunset says the nature of the Well and Fountain make them very compatible...
I'm not totally sure how well Sunset's 'shotgun' is going to pair with Flash's brush-hole but we'll find out eventually I guess.
Also this chapter states The Equestria Girls universe came about solely for the purpose of lewd.
How meta should I take this?
Edit: Actually after some thought I think this IS a meta statement: Sunset stated their universe was created solely for fetishes. Their universe's creator was Skirts.
You had me worried with that caveat at the beginning cause you made it sound like Sunset was gonna give him that ultimatum. Which didn't really match up with her character, cause every hint we've got so far has been her saying how she doesn't want this forced on Flash and how he needs to have a choice. I'm glad she's still going for what's best for flash and didn't suddenly turn into the type of character that would give that ultimatum willingly.
This was an amazing chapter! Great job
Largely what I suspected in terms of the applied harmonics, though I hadn't anticipated the need. And the increasing requirements have me concerned for Flash. He may be ultimately he a stopgap measure. What happens when even he isn't enough? Regardless, excellent emotional interplay.
Also, exquisite bit of porn logic worldbuilding. Darn precursor mages and their science monkey fetishes.
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I’ve always wondered about the EQG universe. Stepping back, it really has the appearance of an imitation of the pony universe, which makes it look like it was created. My head canon was that Starswirl created it when he made the first portal to throw the sirens through — he didn’t know it, but the EQG world didn’t exist before that moment.
But Skirts’s meta comment does make sense too. The idea that the fictional universe was created for specific reasons that the fictional characters in the universe may become aware of.
And that's the kind of plot hole that makes me stray away from these genre of stories.
It's a well written emotion filled story,its just the idea of the EQG universe being created by hormone driven equines mind boggles me.
I guess this genre is just not for me.
Though keep the story interesting and I'm sure it'll do great.
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Is it a plot hole? Or just kind of a weird setup/rationale to justify the actions?
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Not sure.
An excellent job blueballing the reveal up to now, it gave us plenty of time to piece it together ahead of time, and the reveal itself was wonderfully heartfelt. Some of us, myself included, follow the story hoping for smut, but this is feeding an emotional well for me. If I had to make an analogy, most smut that we see is like a steak I can cook at home, filling and tasty with little details like spices I can add to my leisure.
This story you're writing is like Gordon Ramsay himself was serving me a Beef Wellington. Is wonderful with all the goodness I hadn't even considered that I was missing out on. Honestly I feel like going back and starting from the beginning just to enjoy the ride again like a second helping!
And the best part is that now we get to see what Flash will do now that he knows. Maybe that now that he knows what's up he will be more open towards her about some of his wants and desires? He described them as kinks so maybe soon he will feel comfortable enough to ask for some exploration? I truly have my fingers crossed that he takes a bite of that apple! Not just for the sex side of it, but because I want to see these two clear the air between them and get closer. I want to see them both genuinely happy together like they should have been at CHS.
All in all I'm dying to see where the story goes from here, and I hope it's soon. KEEP GOING STRONG!!!!!!!
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I can understanding wanting to stop. I'm through chapter 22 now and I started to care for this Flash since about chapter 4 or 5. I just can't self-insert as him and this isn't really porn, maybe emotional porn, like a lot of Skirt's work?.
I'm envious that he's 5'nothing and such a delicate flower, but mostly I just feel a sense of wanting to protecc.