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not rly, I am honest, but... I was a bit too afraid to change it later.
Now... my proofreader has convinced me to do so, I hope it will not make anyone upset.
I recall a story where Twi accidentally transmogrified herself, Cadence, and Celestia. Similar level of feels/cute.
Ok so a white cat with purple eyes (Celestia) and three baby kittens with three different color eyes, teal (Luna), blue (Cadance), and purple (Twilight). Was that intentional or did that color choice just come out that way?
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both to be exact...
Sooooo, will Twilight give them a new home? Because they really bonded over this experience.
Also kitty Twi is cuuuuuuute Twi!
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? Ok. Well, I am looking forward to more of this story. Keep up the good work.
This was cute and I don't blame you for publishing it per se, but now I want to see if you can roll this little escapade into something more meaningful to the overall narrative you're building.
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the cats are in some sense or another still a thing an will come back... but when you are speaking of the story's plot... then you hopefully find the next chapter a bit more interesting...
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To be clear, it wasn't uninteresting at all, if only to reinforce the character of Twilight as you write her and establish a touch of arcane lore.
But were it to not have further-reaching repercussions beyond this incident, it would end up looking like either a non sequitur that only serves as a chunk of character inspection or a dangling plot thread.
I doubted you would do that, but didn't want you to feel like no one was paying attention either. (I know it always does me well to get feedback on what readers are thinking, so I try to pay it forward.)
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I do have some things I liked to do with of the information I gave in this chapter
...
As I said it to. my proofreader... there are many storys out there which throw in an idea and never come back to it...
I want to be difrent. I like to make my version of the story where I want to change all that what bothered me in other storys...
I know it is way to early to say so... but all future storys... all future chapter... or whatever... will take place in this universe I create.
I dont want to simply draw a blank when I have finished some thing...
It may sound complicated... or maybe undoable... but I want to try... maybe fail spectacularly... but I want to try atleast...
I cannot promise that I will not forget some stuff... or have some things of minor importancy... but I d like to build a consistent universe where I can give my ideas a home...
I thing I am rambeling... again... but anyway... thats the thing I like to do... and so I can asure you... I have some or another plan with the things I say...or do... well... as grandious a plan of a german 20 year old student can go... but still...
ps. : sorry for errors... I wrothe this from my smartphone... 3:40 in the morning...
chapter 2 is now proofread
Next Chapter will most likely come out this weekend!
“Well, they do have a point there darling, even I, as a big sister, am uncomfortable with little Sweetie learning such uncouth things like reproduction at her age.”
Yes, Rarity, the holy miracle of reproduction, the sacred act that brings life into the world, the highest expression of love and intimacy two physical beings can share is quite uncouth.
The sad part is such idiots exist in real life. *Sigh.* There's no quick fix for stupidity.
The chapter itself was great though :)
Even though I prefer the more action-filled stories, I still found this chapter a joy to read. Also, I love the display of power Twilight shows without it having to be an action scene. That's something I struggle to do when writing so I like to see it executed so well.
gods... this is almost word for word of a conversation my friend had I had over what should be taught in school... the argument 'Then shouldn’t that be the fault of the parents, not the schools.' always got under my skin... *sarcasm* it's not like withholding teaching information to someone has any possibility of harming them RIGHT?!?!?!?!?
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I counter argue, withholding informations is a very sensitive topic and can become quite dangerous...
We Germans have a phrase: "Mit leerem kopf nickt sich's leichter." (Translation: With an empty head it nods easier.)
>>>> When you are not well educated enough to figure out that there is a problem, then you cannot react to it appropriately...
But... I don't wanna get into conflict with anyone... its just my opinion...
Such a sweet chapter
Awwwww
SOOO CUUUUUUTE
Soo happy to find this fic. 10/10