This was interesting for sure. It fit Smolder to be so Tsundere about everything bu honestly I was a bit sad to see it go that route or better to say have Ember come into the picture SO soon into Spike and Smolder getting together. I was really hoping to see them have more time together and see more interaction with them. But Ember came so fast into the picture we didn't get to see some more cute moments of the two younger dragons. And Ember came in clear as day, there wasn't any burying the lead here and she started out talking about mating to him. Idk I really enjoyed the chapter and seeing their first time together and think Smolder totally make how she would react I just wish we could have had more time with just her and Spike and seeing her be all Tsundere with him and him realizing that is just how she is and liking that aspect of her. The duality of both her sides.
9425922 Embers entrance was supposed to be here... more than just a letter. Yet I needed smoldering to reflect on her descicion about how she feels about spike. The intervention of ember makes her want to try further but until the next chapter, she will learn what she must decide to do next.
This is definitely an good read, but the editing can be better. Take your time. There's no rush to get the next chapter out. Really looking forward to a threesome and real open feel from Smolder.
Fate had a funny way of showing up at the right or wrong opportunity, especially those whom test it. Let the fool, be quelled by their actions, and least test fate, with their boundless words.
This was interesting for sure. It fit Smolder to be so Tsundere about everything bu honestly I was a bit sad to see it go that route or better to say have Ember come into the picture SO soon into Spike and Smolder getting together. I was really hoping to see them have more time together and see more interaction with them. But Ember came so fast into the picture we didn't get to see some more cute moments of the two younger dragons. And Ember came in clear as day, there wasn't any burying the lead here and she started out talking about mating to him. Idk I really enjoyed the chapter and seeing their first time together and think Smolder totally make how she would react I just wish we could have had more time with just her and Spike and seeing her be all Tsundere with him and him realizing that is just how she is and liking that aspect of her. The duality of both her sides.
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Embers entrance was supposed to be here... more than just a letter. Yet I needed smoldering to reflect on her descicion about how she feels about spike. The intervention of ember makes her want to try further but until the next chapter, she will learn what she must decide to do next.
This was great man. I loved it, the clip was awesome. Also can you P.M me that link?
Smolder, someone needs to teach you about the concept of Murphy's Law.
The chapter was worth the wait. Could you pm me the anthro version?
I think that should be "Smolder" and "hers".
This is definitely an good read, but the editing can be better. Take your time. There's no rush to get the next chapter out. Really looking forward to a threesome and real open feel from Smolder.
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And fixed thanks.
This is a good quote
I>>9426618 have read your other works and love them keep it up (I'm still waiting on dusk shine series tho)
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Me too!
think we can have Smolder in the pink dress while Spike bangs her lol
When the next chapter? because I feel that this story has potential
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Update soon!
This was a beautifully sweet and spicy first time with a sad end I hope Smolder and Ember can share Spike.
Aww I feel sad for Smolder that she has feelings for spike but she's too proud to admit it.