Good chapter and sex scene. But, try to focus more on the sex and just the ones involved. We don't need reminder, after reminder about how other dragons do things and who's usually on top, etc., etc., just the sex, the feels and some dialogue couldn't hurt.
9927804 I will give you some advice: Never promise that you will update on a certain day, because what will happen once something more important happens in your personal life and you could not update? Promising updates is the worst thing you can do to your followers, because you will leave them excited by believing the chapters are closer when it is not.
10113262 Just because she wants something, dosent mean she will get it. Custom dragon laws and such, is dictating that she could get it, but Spike is his own dragon raised smarter then other dragons. She realizes that and is afraid, hence the though attitude. Spike is the only one that could refuse her without being blindsided by lust or seeking a hoard.
I still dislike this ship, and vote for Smolder Smothering Ember in her sleep so she can have Spike for herself!
This was fantastic. And Smolder is in so much trouble.
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I don't care what's the show endgame spike relationship, Spike and Ember for life!!!!
Good chapter and sex scene.
But, try to focus more on the sex and just the ones involved. We don't need reminder, after reminder about how other dragons do things and who's usually on top, etc., etc., just the sex, the feels and some dialogue couldn't hurt.
So, was he horrible at it, and thus underwhelming, or great at it, and she was OVERwhelmed?
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That flew over Embers and my heads... I'll fix it.
One week did you say? boy, it's been over a month, I hope you haven't forgotten this story.
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Writing multiple chapters! Sorry trying to finish pony based stories first
9927804
I will give you some advice: Never promise that you will update on a certain day, because what will happen once something more important happens in your personal life and you could not update? Promising updates is the worst thing you can do to your followers, because you will leave them excited by believing the chapters are closer when it is not.
Wait-
Ember's contradicted herself by expecting Spike to leave after mating, despite agreeing to become life-mates. How's that work?
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Just because she wants something, dosent mean she will get it. Custom dragon laws and such, is dictating that she could get it, but Spike is his own dragon raised smarter then other dragons. She realizes that and is afraid, hence the though attitude. Spike is the only one that could refuse her without being blindsided by lust or seeking a hoard.
This was beyond beautifully heart warming/touching ,and Smolder is so busted. Spike is a real male he gets all my respect.