Six students of various races sit at their desks in an otherwise empty classroom. Gallus looks up at the clock above the blackboard, noting the time of three-o’clock. “So where is she?”
Yona turns to Gallus. “Where who?”
“Where who what?” Sandbar follows.
“Ooo, is this some new word game? OK, my turn: Where who what which?”
Gallus puts a claw to his forehead and groans upon hearing Silverstream’s follow-up. “Where is Professor Pinkie Pie?” he clarifies. “She said she had a special friendship lesson for us.”
“Speaking of ‘us’, where’s everyone else?” Smolder asks.
Ocellus turns to Sandbar. “Is there some sort of pony holiday or observance that we’re not aware of?”
“Nothing I’m aware of,” Sandbar replies … as Pinkie Pie pronks her way into the room.
“Hi, everycreature,” Pinkie cheerfully announces. “Looks like you’re all here, so we can begin immediately.” She notices Ocellus raising a foreleg; “Oh, got a question already? Little miss mind reader here, amiright?”
“What? No, just … uh … you said we’re all here, but there’s only the six of us.”
“Yeah,” Smolder adds, “and I don’t have you for class at the same time as the others. What gives?”
“This is a special lesson, just for the six of you,” Pinkie states.
“Why just us?” Gallus asks. “Is it because we’re the only non-ponies in the school?” His comment draws a confused look from Sandbar.
“Well that is part of it,” Pinkie admits, “but only a teensy part. Now then … I want every creature to look at the front of the room. What do you see?”
“A desk?” Gallus states drolly.
“No, silly, behind the desk. C’mon, what do you see?”
The students look around the area behind Pinkie.
Smolder offers a response. “A blackboard? Some chalk? Uh … the clock above the blackboard?”
“Oh, are we playing I Spy! I love playing games!”
“Love the enthusiasm, Silverstream,” Pinkie cheerfully admits. “Okie-dokie, now turn to your left and tell me what you see.”
The students turn as instructed. “OOO, I see bright blue skies, and a big yellow sun, OH, and that’s the fountain down below!!! Wait, all those things are outside the room … I SEE THE WINDOWS!!! Oh, and I see curtains, too! Well? Amiclose, amiclose? Warm? Cold?”
“I don’t think the professor is playing I Spy,” Sandbar informs Silverstream. “... uh, we’re not playing I Spy, are we, professor?”
“Nope, but that’s a super-great idea for tomorrow! OK everyone, now turn to the right and tell me what you see?”
The students oblige. “Well,” Ocellus begins, “I see a bookshelf containing seventeen tomes, a couple empty desks and chairs stacked against the wall, a map of Equestria and its surrounding lands, uh … the doorway …”
“Great job, Ocellus! Now, this is the big one … everyone turn to the back of the room and tell me what you see.”
One final time, the students turn to face …
…
“Yona see nothing.”
“Gallus agrees with Yona,” Gallus adds. “All I see is a bare wall.”
“Exactly,” Pinkie triumphantly concludes.
The students turn to Pinkie, then turn back to the wall. “Now Yona confused.”
“You see,” Pinkie starts as she pronks her way past the students toward the bare wall, “the first thing I asked you to look at was a wall. The second thing I asked you to look at was another wall.”
“With windows!”
“Wonderful observation, Silverstream! And the third thing I asked you to look at was—”
“A third wall?” Gallus asks dryly.
“Yeppers! Wall, wall, wall … three walls. But that brings us to this, the focus on our special lesson … the fourth wall!”
Pinkie slaps the bare wall with a hoof, while the students look to each other with confused looks before turning back to face Pinkie.
“So what?” Smolder bluntly asks. “the room has four walls. Every room has four walls.”
“And why is it empty?” Ocellus adds. “Shouldn’t there be something there? Like, another blackboard, or a bulletin board?”
Pinkie laughs. “Silly, they couldn’t see anything posted on that wall.”
Her comment raises further concerns among the students regarding their professor’s mind. Sandbar raises a foreleg. “Uh … who’s ‘they’?”
“Why the ones watching us, of course!” Pinkie responds naturally. Among the students, concern turns to discomfort.
“Wait,” Smolder starts, “someone’s observing us?”
“Yona not like being watched. Yona enjoy privacy.”
Gallus shakes his head. “Hold on! Professor, you’re saying someone’s watching us right now?”
“Yep.”
“And, they’re on the other side of that wall?”
“Yep again!”
“May I? …”
“Go ahead!”
Gallus gets up and walks towards the wall. He places his claws against the wall and feels around. He gives the wall several knocks. “It’s just a wall, right?”
“But not just any wall,” Pinkie corrects. “It’s the fourth wall.”
“But professor,” Ocellus asks, “isn’t there another classroom next to this room? Do you mean someone’s in there, able to look through this wall to see us?”
“That is a super-rational explanation! But fourth walls don’t work like that.”
Sandbar cocks his head. “Then … how do they work?”
“They allow others to watch us as we carry on with our entertaining lives. That’s basically it, really. Hey, quick lesson!” Pinkie cheerfully asserts.
Smolder raises a claw. “Wait, I’m still confused. What ‘others’? Who’s watching us?”
“Your audience, of course!”
“What audience?”
“The one watching you, of course!” Pinkie cyclically replies, causing Smolder to copy Gallus’s previous facepalming.
“I think what Smolder means,” Ocellus adds, “is that we’re still unclear as to the makeup of this ‘audience’ you’re referring it.”
“They could be wearing all kinds of make-up … or none at all. Maybe some are just born with it!” Pinkie slyly replies.
A strange sensation overcomes Silverstream. “Maybe it’s …”, she begins before catching herself mid-sentence as the sensation passes. “Wait, why did I just say that?”
Pinkie gasps. “You are sooo close!” she exclaims.
“I am? Wow! … Wait, close to what?”
“To breaking through!”
“Breaking? I don’t want to break anything! That would be vandalism!”
“That’s super; no one likes senseless destruction,” Pinkie states. “But I’m talking about breaking the fourth wall, and you almost did it in your first lesson! I’m so proud of you!”
Sandbar comments: “Uhhh … Silverstream never left her desk. How could she have come close to breaking the wall?”
“Oh it’s not about physical breaking,” Pinkie explains. “It’s a metaphorical breaking.”
“But to what end?” Ocellus asks.
“To let the audience know that you know about the audience.”
Pinkie notes the continued confused expressions on her class’s faces. “Hey, let me give you all a demonstration of what I mean.” She turns to the bare wall and …
Hey everyone! Hope you’re having a super-terrific day today! Are we entertaining you with this discussion? Got any questions? Don’t hesitate to ask!
…
Gallus glances at the bare wall, then turns back to face Pinkie. “Who are you talking to?”
“The audience.”
Gallus turns back to the wall. “This is just a wall, right?” He again knocks on the façade. “It’s not a sentient wall, is it?”
“Of course not, silly … walls aren’t sentient!”
“All right then … I’m going back to my seat now,” Gallus says as he slinks back to his desk.
“Yona still confused.”
Pinkie focuses on the young yak. “It’s a very advanced concept; even my friends have trouble grasping the concept.”
“Wait … aren’t other professors pink pony professor’s friends?”
“Uh huh!”
“So other professors also confused by this ‘fourth wall’?”
“Mmm-hmmm!”
Yona breathes a sigh of relief. “Yona feel better knowing others confused too.”
“So professor,” Ocellus starts, “if this is such an advanced concept, why are you teaching this to us?”
“Because you’re all stars now, of course!” Pinkie’s declaration draws more confused stares from the class.
“Waitaminute,” Gallus responds. “we are stars?”
“I’m a STAR???” Silverstream gushes.
“Of course! Haven’t you seen how everything revolves around the six of you?”
Sandbar counters: “That’s a little strong to say, isn’t it?”
“Really? Who went on that field trip with AJ and Rainbow? Who was accused of sabotaging Hearthswarming? Who participated in that play for Princess Celestia? Who got taught a friendship lesson by the Tree of Harmony?”
“You know about that???”
“Know about what? The point is, all the notable events that take place happen because of you! And that’s why I want you to at least be introduced to the concept of the fourth wall.”
“This is because we’re not ponies, isn’t it,” Smolder responds, irritation in her voice. Again, Sandbar reacts with a confused look.
“It’s because you’re interesting,” Pinkie states. “And only the truly interesting need to be concerned with the fourth wall; the audience won’t stick around for just run-of-the-mill characters.”
“Right,” Gallus adds sarcastically, “we’re just the six most interesting characters in the world.” His comment triggers another, stronger sensation in his hippogriff friend.
“I don’t always drink cider, but when I do, it’s Apple Family cider … Why did I say that???” Silverstream states in surprise.
“YOU’RE GETTING IT!!!” Pinkie exclaims. She bounds over to Silverstream and gives her a big hug as the others look on.
“Yona never felt more confused.” The yak’s comment draws nods of agreement from the others as Pinkie releases her grip on the hippogriff and pronks back to the doorway.
“OK, this was a super-awesome lesson, but I got a meeting with the other professors now so I have to trot. Just remember: all of Equestria’s a stage, and we are merely players.”
“Wait!” Sandbar calls out. “What do we do now?”
“Well it’s only three-o’clock; why not take some time to address your audience? Answer some questions. Make new friends.”
“With who?” Gallus asks to no avail as Pinkie bounds out the door. The griffin rolls his eyes and turns back to the others. “Well that was pointless,” he declares.
Smolder flies over to the back wall and raps on it several times with her claw. “This is just a regular wall, right?”
“Of course it is,” Gallus replies. “our laughter professor’s probably been inhaling cleaning fumes from the ovens again.”
“I dunno,” Sandbar says, “Professor Pinkie Pie seemed real sure about that wall.”
“And she did make some solid points about the events in our lives,” Ocellus adds. “Maybe there is more to this place than just the physical manifestations of—”
“THERE’S NO ONE WATCHING US!!! … Sorry, didn’t mean to snap at everyone,” Gallus quickly adds. “But come on, do you really think there’s some ‘audience’ behind that wall who’s more interested in us just sitting in a room talking to each other than their own lives?”
Ocellus turns to Silverstream. “The professor seemed to believe you were making more progress than the rest of us.”
“Yeah,” Yona adds, “what you think?”
“I don’t know,” the hippogriff admits. “I just had an urge to say weird offhoof comments a couple times. It just felt, you know, natural to do that.”
“You feeling anything now?” Smolder asks. Silverstream shakes her head.
“Maybe if you touched the wall, it would trigger another reaction,” Ocellus posits. “Are you up for trying?”
“I … I guess I can try.” Silverstream cautiously flutters over to the back wall, inspecting it from corner to corner as the others gather round her. She reaches her forehoof out and touches the wall … and instinctively retracts as her eyes widen, her body stiffening as in a trance.
“Whoooooooaaaaaaa …”
Gallus waves a wing in front of her vision, getting no reaction from the hippogriff.
“What do you see?” …
Dumb.
Pinkie only directly breaks the fourth wall on two occasions, both as part of sight gags / the wipe-out for the episode. Neither count.
I have a question, Pinkie. Why are you teaching them of this? The knowledge of the Fourth Wall is forbidden for a reason.
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Except neither of those situations can apply to words on a page. So the fourth wall must be broken in other ways.
9210061
No, it doesn't. Because it's a part of her character that doesn't exist and is really irritating.
She's your fun friend whose humor is mostly memes and references but is otherwise capable of holding a conversation, but half the fandom seems to have decided she's Deadpool.
That unintentional burn is amazing!
9210063
I mean, she kinda is the Deadpool of MLP. Just not murdery or vulgar. And your complaint about her "breaking of the fourth wall shouldn't exist in written form" would apply to just about 97.5% of all fics on this site with Pinkie in it as a main character. Just accept it will happen in fics and move on.
9210063
God who got a stick up your ass?
Tracking.
OMG xD Pinkie looks like a damn pig! xDD
Silverstream is proving she has a connection to the Element of Laughter.
9210084
It shouldn't. And no, I'm not going to just "accept it" because it's shit and immediately ruins a story.
She is nothing like Deadpool
9210381
"It shouldn't." And yet in the overwhelming majority of stories I've read on this site with Pinkie as a main character, the fourth wall is broken at minimum once. It's going to happen. Deal with it. Pretty sure the "it's shit and immediately ruins a story" thing is a personal problem of yours.
9210384
It instantly makes a story shit when it happens. The overwhelming majority of fics on the site are shit and most people don't know how to write Pinkie. I will not "deal with it".
9210387
"Majority of the fics are shit"
Wow who died and made you judge and jury? If you don't like it, don't read it plain and simple. So Discord is shit for his 4th wall breaking? Oh hell, even Fluttershy has broken it
9210387
It really sounds like you are throwing a tantrum because someone disagreed with your point. You are welcome to your opinions, however disagreeable they may be to others, but don't try to force them down our throats as if they were fact.
9210387
Damn, You must be fun at parties...
9210399
Er... no they haven't. Discord's references are a fair bit wider, but he hasn't broken the fourth wall. Ever. Nor has Fluttershy, so I don't get what you're talking about.
9210408
I really hate that phrase, because I am. Is there something wrong with disliking flagrant abuse of a favorite character?
9210416
You realize that the fics don't have to follow what characters are capable of in this show religiously, right? Your own fic The Untrotted Path is guilty of making a character capable of something they in canon aren't.
9210426
This ^
9210416
Fluttershy breaking the 4th wall
Looking dead at the camera and talking to the audience
9210416
In that same vein as Sandstorm94 (9210452), Discord's broken the fourth wall too.
In all honesty, if someone were to look long enough, it wouldn't surprise me if we found instances of nearly all of the main cast breaking the fourth wall at least once in the show's run--Pinkie's just the one most famous for doing it. And she's totally done it more than two times. I don't think you understand fully just what can constitute as a fourth wall break. So some reference reading if you want it: Link
But if you really have such an issue with it, you don't have to read the fic at all.
Anyway, I, for one, will follow this fic, see where it goes.
this sems like fun, despite what others might whine about
9210063
Heve you ever SEEN that Universe enough times to KNOW what is and isn't a part of HER Character (and no, the TV series doesn't count, I'm talking about either Being avble to see that universe through dreams or Brute force your way in with your actual human body and all)...
what I am trying to say, in case you don't get it, is that no one knows the absolute 100% character of those people, because we can't possibly be there to live with them...
9210119
if going by id / handle alone, I'd say Princess Celestia
9210384
agreed, it wuold be either from a peet peeve to a serious case of bitchy nitpicking...
9210381
Again, you can't Possibly know her, nor Deadpool for that Matter
9210416
well, you are projecting the exact opposite, that's why the phrase is used...
I'd say Deal with it but it's more than obvious that you aren't trained to do it...
Smolder raises a claw. “Wait, I’m still confused. What ‘others’? Who’s watching us?”
“Your audience, of course!”
“What audience?”
“The one watching you, of course!” Pinkie cyclically replies, causing Smolder to copy Gallus’s previous facepalming.
Ohh it begins The whole wall is gonna be broken
I try to answer that question a long time ago I still know know how that works pinkie pie And you know what yeah I am having fun with this thanks for asking 😅
Why am I not surprised that pinkie pie knows that did she Read the script 🤔 I don't know why I'm asking this lol dang it
“It’s because you’re interesting,” Pinkie states. “And only the truly interesting need to be concerned with the fourth wall; the audience won’t stick around for just run-of-the-mill characters.”
“Right,” Gallus adds sarcastically, “we’re just the six most interesting characters in the world.” His comment triggers another, stronger sensation in his hippogriff friend.
She's not wrong I've always been interests in those kids Ever since season 8 And even comics as well Although I really wish they have done more with them And probably that's why I'm in fanfiction story At least theres more stories about these kids and no I am not going to a Rated m territory Not even a 1000 years
“I … I guess I can try.” Silverstream cautiously flutters over to the back wall, inspecting it from corner to corner as the others gather round her. She reaches her forehoof out and touches the wall … and instinctively retracts as her eyes widen, her body stiffening as in a trance.
“Whoooooooaaaaaaa …”
Whoa hello silverstream Did you just broke my TV Because you can see me this is weird And somehow pretty awesome
Hi Pinkie!say yellow to the students for me! Thanks and have a great day!
She sees a bunch of bronies reading about this fanfic