Nothing wrong with three chapters. You actually did an extremely awesome job with this chapter. I originally thought you'd have a chapter for each character. This kind of made me wonder, if that was the case, how'd it work out. Having them all together babying Smolder is certainly, in my opinion, far better.

I enjoyed how you brought out aspects of each student to make this whole situation work out. Very well done.

It'd be neat to see how far Smolder would go to discover her 'cute' side? This story is really the closest we'd ever come to finding out beyond "What Lies Beneath". The build-up you did along with how it all worked out after she was caught came off quite perfect.

There's a Young Six character tag that can be used, just so you're aware.

It is a bit unfortunate that the story will only have three chapters but all stories must end at some point so it’s completely understandable.

This story is very well done! I can’t wait to see how it ends.

Since Sandbar was the only remaining creature with hooves, he reluctantly volunteered to milk the transformed Ocellus (thanks to Applejack he was able to learn how to milk cows, so he could handle this).

I'm confused. How would hooves make you more qualified to milk a cow? Wouldn't Gallus, who has digits, be more qualified? And I assume that Sandbar isn't the only creature who Applejack has taught how to milk a cow.