A stone from the sky and a mysterious figure send a kid named ... to the world of My Little Pony. With new powers and a world he's only slightly familiar with, whats the worst that could happen? mlp/dbz/bleach/Naruto Gamer elements.
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D-A-M-N!!!!!!!
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Are you reacting to the word count, the power level of Hikari, the amount of stats he has, or did you actually read the sheets?
Depending on your answer, tell me anything I could improve upon or change for the better.
lol curios how you will deal with the caribou
9388926
Yeeeeaaaaa, that's a question...
Completely depends on how I feel when I decide to use that plot line, it's not a main thing on mah shit list.
9388955
fair enough... glad to have you back though!
9388964
Glad to be back!
You put a lot of work into this huh.
9388895
I am loving the Rewrite, He seems more OP in this one but that ain't a bad thing
Also why is Pinkie so Under powered? I was expecting her to have a power level on par with Shining Armor or Twilight?
9389333
Yea, have to put in work to manage a gamer system mah man.
9389536
In my opinion, pinkie is never overpowered or anything like that, she just had an ability to break the fourth wall on occasion. I feel as if she just had a unique gift, not power.
9389516
Holy shit, I can feel the hate...
Good, feed your hatred, destroy them...
9389809
....Isn't Breaking the Fourth Wall a Power in of it's self? I mean it could even be categorized as a Cognition ability! At most she should have a MASSIVE boost to Perception if nothing else!
9389817
why thank you
but in all seriousness FUCK THOSE GUYS!!
The caribou will not be spared except the females I will make sure they suffer from the hands of the many factions. The space marines, The chaos, the Eldar, the Orks, the Necrons, the imperial guard, the GDI. Steel Talon. ZOCOM,The NOD. Black hand. Marked of Kane, The Scrin. Reaper-17. Traveler-59, The terrans, The Zerg, The proton, I will lead them with hatred and anger against those sorry excuse parisites OF THE BLOODY PLANET
P.S the reason why the factions I told you about its because I brought them to the real world and they learned harmony from the equis from outside from their planet but when found out about the caribou and I know I have some bad factions in this but they have good in their hearts. anyway after we all heard about them we all full of anger and hatred to those who does disgusting things to the innocent we show no mercy they have numbers but we have the power of technology and the fire power they don't have. they won't know what hit them
9389845
True.... that will be a change made at a later date, thank you for the idea
9390603
Pinkie, enough said.
9390590
Dead-pool?
Ok, those stats are insanely terrifying when looked at. Very little can be a direct threat.
Hey have him learn from the kungfu panda universe like from the old tortoise or something
93948
Wushi Finger Hold?
Well, there goes any kind of tension or drama this fic might have had.
9395898
Hm? I don't understand.
This story was never ment to have tension, other than the slight romance...
Which I admit, is probably going to be very cringy, as I have never written anything like that, I am also thinking of getting rid of the sex tag too, as I don't know if I'll ever write one for this.
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9395898
i can follow what they meant,
the content here would be better served as a blog post mentioned at the end of a chapter.
and any drama and/or tension you were going for is lost when all we have is a status page. kinda kills the flow of reading.
at least i think that is what they meant.
Pinky's perception made me laugh although you should have gave her a buff called 4th wall breaker makes perception go off of walls or out of them
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GODS!! SKULL'S FOR THE SKULL THRONE!!
This was a cool chapter to know everyone's States.