A human from earth will have to learn how to live in a world that is not his own.
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they're
tho is informal spelling of though
did you mean fit of laughter?
Other than that solid job as far as i can tell!
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Thanks for the editing. I'll get to all of those as soon as I can.
Using "tho" instead of "though" is improper. Texting speech may be okay for some, but to those of us that used to have to write out all messages by hand to be passed around in class, it's very distracting.
Also, please research and implement the differences between there, they're, and their.
Another great chapter. The interactions between characters just seem to get more interesting.
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Agreed
If this story is this intense, what will the shipping be like ?