A human from earth will have to learn how to live in a world that is not his own.
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A pretty good chapter. The only thing I can add here is that there should have been much more dialogue coming from the rest of the Man Six. Twilight being the only one to comment and act while the other five just nod their heads in the background is unrealistic. Plus, banter between them, or just more description of their actions in general, will only add to the story in a positive way.
Oh. I thought maybe that Gadget was the MC after living in Equestria for years and possibly forgetting much of his prior show knowledge. I guess they’re two separate characters.