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All we need now is Spoiled Rich protesting the adoption for "Reasons".
I remember when I put on kh3 and for some reason goofy was all ultra philosophic on me and telling me that yensid has been saying this line every time we leave his tower
WOO! Hurray! Its up! I had a blast writing this chapter with you, and I'm looking forward to any future crossovers we might do!
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I think she would most likely protest at the fact that both the CMC & New trio could use magic. She would be willing to accept that both Unicorns & Alicorns are the only race to use magic, but an earth pony and other non-pony races she won't accept. Plus there also might [MIGHT] be a chance that she'll use this as an opportunity & demand Lex to give Diamond magic as well. If Lex declines the demand, she'll attempt to talk down lex, arrogantly boast that since she's rich and believes that she has the right.
9535484 Don't forget Lex has adopted a Changeling, a Diamond Dog, and a Kirin considering how xenophobic some ponies are about non-ponies Spoiled could use them as cannon fodder so she could try to have the guild shut down on bogus reasons. I mean Neighsay is just as bad as her and he would prevent them from getting an education.
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That's what I meant by "New trio", I couldn't think of a better word to describe the second group. Plus if she were to figure out that the princesses (Luna & Cadence) are involved & apart of the guild, this will only cause suspicion among the ranks and they'll try & attempt to sabotage the Fairy-Tail Guild. Pity, arrogant and greedy nobles will always try to sabotage & destroy everything that doesn't belong in the vision of their society or affects their image.
However these are merely assumptions and overthinking, it's actually up to the author so we'll have to see what happens next.
I'd recommend giving this whole story a solid rewrite. It's good, yes, and I understand completely if you don't want to because you're already so far ahead, but take it from a guy who's been writing Displaced stories and more for 5 years and writing in general for at least 8; this story is just too unrealistic with it's main character.
Honestly, if you want, I can help you with the process. I've got nothing but time on my hands right now, and I'd love to help another author out if I can.
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Hey do you have any advice for someone who is planning to write a displace fic? If so please message me.
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You could argue that any and all Displaced fics are unrealistic with their MCs though. Personally, I like read/writing Displaced fics like this.
9536035 A fair point, and one I would not judge you for.
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Seriously, why not something like Terra or just plain Earth
Oooooo this is recent!!! I'm happy to read this now