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seeing Mavis was cool but that power up feels a little out of left field and OP at this point in the story but there's a difference between "knowing" how to use magic and "mastering" it. Lex has a lot of training to do if she want's to fully master her new powers.
oh please give me more. i want to see sunbutts face when she see's Sonbāsutā
There's so much bulding material for this ship
Lex... you're doomed
As do I
Eh just give Twilight archive and memory make magic and she is set for life
so... she has fairy law now as well as fairy glitter? sweet...and that sheild will come in handy.
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unless they had a spy in the empire that COULD communicate... and seeing as they were 'narrow minded' towards dark magic.. they may have marched before it was too bad, but it took them time to march their. what with no trains
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Would make sense
I did not see that coming
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fairy law would make the invasion too easy though... probably why our fem fatale is there AFTER it.
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You meant that "he" (Adam) tracked down Ray and beat the crap out of him.
Ah, yes. There's the OP!
I do wonder if her friends are going to show up at any point or they got banished elsewhere? I'd kinda dislike if this were like the other Displaced stories where it has continual crossovers with other stories and then dies after a month and a half, but I've seen no sign of the others, so that implies multiverse after all. That said, I don't object to the first part of that idea so long as it's actually a real enemy that needs fighting (and isn't nearly every chapter) -- I am firmly of the opinion that with the level of OP that quickly accumulates on MCs in such crossovers that they really should be able to handle most goings-on. Perhaps if it's a really difficult one like buffed Tirek it would work.
I never saw all of fairy tale, i know of fairy law and fairy glitter but what was the third master spell? And for that mater what dose fairy glitter do, i never saw beyond the s rank tests when ti was first introduced.
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fairy law is a wide scale bombardment of allwho the caster thinks of as enemies.
Fairy glitter is a shot of magical power that destroys a target
Fairy sphere uses the bonds between people to make a protective sphere.
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Thank you.
Like your work so far. Still though I must say this. Make the mane 6 and spike dragon slayer’s. Or at least make Fluttershy a sky dragon slayer. She would do well in the support, healer roll.
1. Character appears in the another world populated by entirely different species than humans and takes that completely nonchalant so far. Huh, I fek if I know where and this is clearly not a Kansas all around and there is no obvious way back to my friends and family. Whatever.
2. Not only learns, but pretty much masters her new magical powers in hours. Also completely nonchalantly. Huh, I can do real magic now. What a surprise.
3. With absolutely no fear for her own life or problems eradicates 9 (?) timberwolves.
4. Doesn't give a single f when communicating with princesses even though she already knows at that point that they are more than 1 thousand years old and powerful enough to control celestial bodies.
5. Fights one on one with Sombra and wins. And not just wins, but also cleanses Sombra from his corrupted magic before Crystal Heart activates.
6. Did nothing wrong so far and loved by everyone she encounters.
7. Received OP upgrade from another universe just for being her perfect self.
Even though fic is more or less fine and interesting so far Lex looks more and more like some Mary Sue.
Welp, Garnet, you brought that upon yourself. Now you have to make an interesting story with OP character. That is not a simple feat since it would be hard to throw anything at her that she would have a hard time to deal with.
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most displaced are mary sue from the start of their story but this goes without saying thats why people write sotries like this so they can be op in a world where character have know understanding of the displaced's powers and through crossovers displaced can teach each other new powers etc becoming even more op
but i have to say great story keep it up
Wonder what those commands for Sonbāsutā were
Eh a decent chapter