I was always looking forward to when you write Cookie Crumbles. I got way more than what I was expecting and I loved it. Great job. So, Pear Butter and/or Chiffon Swirl is next. I always assumed-hoped you were going to do Pear Butter but I wasn't sure if you would; thank goodness I was right.
Nice as always. I'm gonna call it and say Chiffon (to this day I don't understand why they thought it necessary to say Cup Cake had a different name back then, it doesn't impact anything) and Pear will be a threesome chapter.
Here's a couple errors I noticed:
It was the only thing you could think about!that would make sure that Cookie Crumbles was taking you seriously.
This time showing that her other hole which seemed to pucker up.
You asked keeping your finger still as they squeezed each cheek.
9154273 Yeah I figured you would enjoy it. As for who's next... well, who can say. It'll be a surprise but to dispel any worries I'll say everyone gets a turn.
9168596 So Pear should be the threesome... hmm... we'll see about that later. I'm still not sure what to do with her because of story reasons. If I couldn't figure out what to do with her I probably would have skipped her but I won't.
I fixed the typos. I'm pretty sure I got the three you found and the two more I found.
I was always looking forward to when you write Cookie Crumbles. I got way more than what I was expecting and I loved it. Great job.
So, Pear Butter and/or Chiffon Swirl is next. I always assumed-hoped you were going to do Pear Butter but I wasn't sure if you would; thank goodness I was right.
Nice as always. I'm gonna call it and say Chiffon (to this day I don't understand why they thought it necessary to say Cup Cake had a different name back then, it doesn't impact anything) and Pear will be a threesome chapter.
Here's a couple errors I noticed:
9154273
Yeah I figured you would enjoy it. As for who's next... well, who can say. It'll be a surprise but to dispel any worries I'll say everyone gets a turn.
9168596
So Pear should be the threesome... hmm... we'll see about that later. I'm still not sure what to do with her because of story reasons. If I couldn't figure out what to do with her I probably would have skipped her but I won't.
I fixed the typos. I'm pretty sure I got the three you found and the two more I found.
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Thank you. I did think about that but decided to use this story to break my comfort zone at least a little.