Also to the people who downvoted Warp Contrast please don't. He's entitled to his opinion and if he doesn't like the story then he doesn't like it and that's fine.
You didn't usually allow repeat visits unless it was an estrus emergency. Still… you hadn't allowed yourself to have a little fun for the long time you've been around. As long as she didn't try to abuse this it should be fine… right?
9071059 On the Sliding Scale of Anthropomorphism this is considered level 2. Level 3 is what you're talking about at this time. There are five levels so this is more human with barely any real differences except for cosmetic differences.
Damn ... was going so well .... was liking the guys sensitive nature then the last few paragraphs killed it .... he turned her into a cheating s**t ... shaping her insides so that his c*** specifically pleases her smells of corruption to the point of no one but him can now fully please her ... and knowing she has a boyfriend and still screwing her while not in estrus makes him a ass ....yah he said some sensitive stuff but he still screwed her instead of saying no...she said he understands a lady has needs ..but that can be seen two ways .... thats not clearly saying he's cool with her sleeping around maybe he wanted to take care of those needs. Plus with 400 years of experience and zebra potions hes using hacks ..theres literally no guy that can compete every girl he screws is ruined for other guys unless the guys take lessons from him and buy potions to increase size and performance. Hymn .... that could be a good job to ... marriage counselor or sex ed teacher. Good writing overall ... i just hate cheaters ... it brings out my inner applejack.
9071216 Egggh what can you do. When you read a story thats as well written as this it's like your standing right next to the characters. Like i said it just felt like the guy was pretty cool for the first 85% then he got seedy with his motivations at the end.sleeping with taken mares seems like a dic* move to me. In this equestria if the author wants them to have loose morals then everyone sleeping around even in relationships is acceptable but only being two chapters in we can't see his objectives yet. Hell studding might even be a thing here he might get payed to father a child or two.
9071155 That would be a level 4 actually but I get what you mean.
9071182 No I understand what you mean I'm sorry it came off that way. I'll admit I didn't intend to have it turn out that way and since this is only one chapter you don't really get a good feel for the guy who is meant to be the reader. Yes the ending is him going into temptation but take it from his perspective. He has been alive for so long with a veritable lack of company for years and years usually tossing away relationships when five years have passed. If he's asked to do a job i.e. sleeping with a mare who wanders into his building because of their estrus he's gonna do his job competently. The ending does have Velvet decide to use him for her own needs but since she said things under her breath the MC didn't hear it. So he thinks she got permission from her boyfriend to do this. It's not right mind you but he just trusts a customer at face value.
That's an explanation but I won't make excuses that it is a heinous thing to do.
9071283 Wanna know something funny? There is no overarching plot for this. There is no dark plots or nefarious schemes in this story. It is basically a slice of life into the MC's life broken up by sexual encounters that happen. He is not responsible for what these mares do and they are grown up enough to make their own choices. I'll go into this more whenever I get to new chapters.
Still thanks for enjoying this even if the ending did rattle you.
9071165 Reader. I'll put up a poll later with some name choices for the name he gives others. I will not use nor ever think about using Anon or anonymous for the mc's name.
Very interesting story and awesome lemon. I'm kinda of curious if he will end up fathering Twilight Sparkle, or other MLP characters we know as time goes on.
9071487 Hymn ...... I could so see Velvet taking Twilight to him to break her in so to speak with a good partner for her first heat.. but i can see Twilight and maybe even cadance being customers not family.... being immortal from his thoughts about Celestia I get the impression he doesn't wanna be tied down.... but Cadance has to learn all her techniques from someone maybe even getting her cutie mark during a session *bow chicka bow wow* plus her learning from him sounds fees able . Don't get me wrong I've read many a incest story so if it goes that way *shrug* Hell maybe by the end of the story he decides to impregnate the main 6/7 .... sunset needs love too.... and settles down.
9071621 i think he might be talking about one customer bringing a family member and having a threesome session like if velvet brought twilight and they all banged
Huh, I really thought thered be an overach for a second. Still i can see a bit where the guy is comming from, the MC is at first only committed to dealing with single mares then at the last minute he just decides otherwise. The character archs arent deep here so I dont particularly mind the cheating but it is a bit of a sudden shift in principles is all. He's not responsible for what they want to do with him but he is entirely responsible for accepting.
Make no mistake though, Velvet is the one going behind her boyfriends back, that aspect isnt on him.
9072131 And you are right. I haven't given much more of his back story since it's always a work in progress and I'm just gonna say that MC is not perfect. Being immortal doesn't make you have perfect morals. Even with a lifetime of experience behind him loneliness does make it so that bad decisions are still made.
Overall both are adults and both can make their own mistakes and eventually there will be either consequences or fallout. Eventually.
I couldn't exactly follow. First it is Twilight and then her mother. Also you shouldn't reveal all the rooms in the beginning. The more you keep them a mystery the more material you have to work with.
This is a hot read, keep it up. But you may want to change the name to Contraception Spell, since it's preventing pregnancy. It's a bit misleading.
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Fixed. Thank you for catching that.
Sorry, I don't think I'll continue reading this one. Not my wheelhouse.
Alright, looking good so far. Looks like its gonna be a solid little story, i'd hope to see more.
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Thank you.
Also to the people who downvoted Warp Contrast please don't. He's entitled to his opinion and if he doesn't like the story then he doesn't like it and that's fine.
Aaaaand he jinxed it.
Little bit beastly is not what I would call anthro. If it's human shaped, has fur, and has a muzzle then it's anthro.
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Shh... you'll jinx him.
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On the Sliding Scale of Anthropomorphism this is considered level 2. Level 3 is what you're talking about at this time. There are five levels so this is more human with barely any real differences except for cosmetic differences.
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Yes I know. But I still consider star fox anthro true anthro.
9071150
Fine, fine, I'll be quiet.
So, does the character has a name, or that's up to each reader to make one?
Damn ... was going so well .... was liking the guys sensitive nature then the last few paragraphs killed it .... he turned her into a cheating s**t ... shaping her insides so that his c*** specifically pleases her smells of corruption to the point of no one but him can now fully please her ... and knowing she has a boyfriend and still screwing her while not in estrus makes him a ass ....yah he said some sensitive stuff but he still screwed her instead of saying no...she said he understands a lady has needs ..but that can be seen two ways .... thats not clearly saying he's cool with her sleeping around maybe he wanted to take care of those needs. Plus with 400 years of experience and zebra potions hes using hacks ..theres literally no guy that can compete every girl he screws is ruined for other guys unless the guys take lessons from him and buy potions to increase size and performance. Hymn .... that could be a good job to ... marriage counselor or sex ed teacher. Good writing overall ... i just hate cheaters ... it brings out my inner applejack.
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Egggh what can you do. When you read a story thats as well written as this it's like your standing right next to the characters. Like i said it just felt like the guy was pretty cool for the first 85% then he got seedy with his motivations at the end.sleeping with taken mares seems like a dic* move to me. In this equestria if the author wants them to have loose morals then everyone sleeping around even in relationships is acceptable but only being two chapters in we can't see his objectives yet. Hell studding might even be a thing here he might get payed to father a child or two.
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That would be a level 4 actually but I get what you mean.
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No I understand what you mean I'm sorry it came off that way. I'll admit I didn't intend to have it turn out that way and since this is only one chapter you don't really get a good feel for the guy who is meant to be the reader. Yes the ending is him going into temptation but take it from his perspective. He has been alive for so long with a veritable lack of company for years and years usually tossing away relationships when five years have passed. If he's asked to do a job i.e. sleeping with a mare who wanders into his building because of their estrus he's gonna do his job competently. The ending does have Velvet decide to use him for her own needs but since she said things under her breath the MC didn't hear it. So he thinks she got permission from her boyfriend to do this. It's not right mind you but he just trusts a customer at face value.
That's an explanation but I won't make excuses that it is a heinous thing to do.
9071283
Wanna know something funny? There is no overarching plot for this. There is no dark plots or nefarious schemes in this story. It is basically a slice of life into the MC's life broken up by sexual encounters that happen. He is not responsible for what these mares do and they are grown up enough to make their own choices. I'll go into this more whenever I get to new chapters.
Still thanks for enjoying this even if the ending did rattle you.
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Reader. I'll put up a poll later with some name choices for the name he gives others. I will not use nor ever think about using Anon or anonymous for the mc's name.
Very interesting story and awesome lemon. I'm kinda of curious if he will end up fathering Twilight Sparkle, or other MLP characters we know as time goes on.
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Nope. He uses a contraception spell before anything happens so no children.
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Hymn ...... I could so see Velvet taking Twilight to him to break her in so to speak with a good partner for her first heat.. but i can see Twilight and maybe even cadance being customers not family.... being immortal from his thoughts about Celestia I get the impression he doesn't wanna be tied down.... but Cadance has to learn all her techniques from someone maybe even getting her cutie mark during a session *bow chicka bow wow* plus her learning from him sounds fees able . Don't get me wrong I've read many a incest story so if it goes that way *shrug* Hell maybe by the end of the story he decides to impregnate the main 6/7 .... sunset needs love too.... and settles down.
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We'll see. Also no incest. He always casts the contraception spell regardless of what occurs.
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i think he might be talking about one customer bringing a family member and having a threesome session like if velvet brought twilight and they all banged
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Oh... then I'll figure that out later
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He's not being paid. He provides his service for free.
Thank God for fictions such as theseEh, pretty good
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Huh, I really thought thered be an overach for a second. Still i can see a bit where the guy is comming from, the MC is at first only committed to dealing with single mares then at the last minute he just decides otherwise. The character archs arent deep here so I dont particularly mind the cheating but it is a bit of a sudden shift in principles is all. He's not responsible for what they want to do with him but he is entirely responsible for accepting.
Make no mistake though, Velvet is the one going behind her boyfriends back, that aspect isnt on him.
9072131
And you are right. I haven't given much more of his back story since it's always a work in progress and I'm just gonna say that MC is not perfect. Being immortal doesn't make you have perfect morals. Even with a lifetime of experience behind him loneliness does make it so that bad decisions are still made.
Overall both are adults and both can make their own mistakes and eventually there will be either consequences or fallout. Eventually.
Oh look... another fuck fantasy story.
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Pretty much. Sorry bout that. Was testing something out about the featured tab on the site.
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Yeah. Probably lol
You noticed right. I've refreshed the front page a couple times with this story sliding between second and third place throughout the day.
I couldn't exactly follow. First it is Twilight and then her mother. Also you shouldn't reveal all the rooms in the beginning. The more you keep them a mystery the more material you have to work with.