9253056 That's being saved for later, it was more of a small feel good chapter for Warm Smile. Cuz yah know she wants to feel like she belongs and what not.
Impression of Sunrise Beam? my orange cream pop ball of sunshine and the best part of Applejacks day~
I want more scripture of the book of Log. MOAR I SAY! WE MUST CLEANSE THE HERETICS AND MAKE THE NON-BELIEVERS TO BELIEVE OUR LORD AND SAVIOR LOG! FOR LOG LOVES AS FOR WE ARE ITS PEOPLE!
9257083 About what?? I dont understand why you are furious about that, imagine being a Male and then becoming a female its dumb masculine thoughts she is having
9257741 Ooooh, well that's just how she is! When I first came up with Warm Smile I gave her a few things she would have to deal with.
Most herbivores have twice as many taste buds than omnivores or carnivores, this means her human saturated brain is receiving twice as intense flavour responses than a normal human. Which means food taste nearly orgasmic in nature she will eventually get use to it but for now she has a very positive response to eating.
9257788 yeah but you know this is a M rated fic right? Its got 'Sex' in the tags and so when you read this you read this knowing there is sexual content in it, so Idk why the sexual stuff in a M rated fic is bothering you
9257883 ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Then I really dont know what to tell you, Warm Smile is going to talk sexual, because she is a sexual being and a mammal. Her genderfuidity has been established that she has no clue if she was male or female before so she wasnt going to bother with it and just did what makes her happy. She has also been wanting sexual relief because she is so stressed, so things like the food are just embarrassing for her
Its gonna be hella cute, the Sisterhooves Social us a perfect place for all three of them to bond~ and maybe by then that cruel god that cock blocks Smiley might let up
9272154 I mainly just want to see smiles meet sweetie mum and dad. Confusing chaos for them since i guess thry dont know about smiles. Unless they go back to stay in canterlot
9273554 I thought about it~ Spike is a cutie and Spike crushing on Warm Smile would be very cute since both of them can nerd out like the dorks they are~
9406823 It's a bit sad news, I'm eager to read more of this story... I'm read this story about 5 times before and wait next chapter to read whole story one more time) But anyway I wish you have a good rest and when time come, return from your writers vacation with more exciting chapters.
9409359 Thank you, it means a lot, I havent abandoned it if that's what you are thinking. The chapter I'm writing is very slow since I'm going over a lot of general stuff to tie into later plot points later, Twilight talking about how magic works and other various things have big backgrounds I set up and I kinda set myself up a grind I have to overcome.
But I will try and get it done soon thank you for reading~ it means a lot
Did I just invoke Murphy? Oh no. Murphy's law seemed to be out on a desperado crime spree in this universe, who knew when it’ll come riding in on a black stallion with a big iron on its hip looking for trouble!
I wanted to hug Pinkie forever, like hold her tight and never let go hug.
“In courts,(—— and you can get jail time
a little damp which I took the towel back
the chest glands had a stronger smell
pressed my own cheek to her’s
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I pushed the front of my chest against her and wrapped my hooves around her upper shoulders,
she said through a snicker,
ah think their magic is still there if its it's makin you sing their song.
that song made me miss them,
She was a beautiful Pegasus mare,
Like how Equestrians don’t fully believe that gravity isn’t caused by mass rather the amount of harmonic magic within a object? A basic explanation was given to me about this, since Scholastic was a earth pony and didn't dive too deep into the magical reasoning.
The Harmony magic pulls things toward its most concentrated area thus it is to be reasoned the moon and sun are harmonic in nature too just made of different materials. The more you know right?
fierce and I couldn’t help but giggle along
my three friends slowly coming out of their stupor enough to say a few things to Pinkie who was giving Apple Bloom a playful noogie.
“Really? That’s really cool!
Evil overlords do like being tall I’ve heard.”
“Good! You three are super cute together, and even cuter now that you are marefriends with one another. I was half tempted to write a fanfiction of you three confessing just so I had the satisfaction!” Sunrise Beam coughed to the side making Sweetie’s face turn several shades of pink.
but lost to the other two leagues for Unicorn and Earth Pony
it was so caked on afterwards we couldn't fly back home!
Sweetie is taken too far away from me
pulled down one of my eyelids going ‘nuuuaaaah’.
2:38
The day wouldn't of been the as good without you.
football but can’t get it to go
a scuffed hind leg that, (—— like a concrete burn, (—— oozed a tiny bit of blood.
Sunrise replied half way through taking a few big gulps
He said with minor jealousy laced through his words..
them seem all that excited about it like I am.”
you can do this just don’t cum in front of everypony.
have large venues in the the Daring Do Con in Manehatten too. I've been there once or twice,
Sweetie ended up burning down the tavern by accident and Pinkie somehow seduced several undead to do the cha-cha. Freaking Bards and Rouges I swear.
Reminds me of this clip at 1:56
I managed to peek out the door to catch Sunrise kissing Applejack and saying soft sweet things like how much they love each other and when they could go on a date again.
8:32
Puttin all this expectation on yah, no memory, can’t even read.
“I care about you all way too much
Sweetie asked lightly kissing on one of my ears,
That they don’t want me anymore,
but Sweetie and Scootaloo are mah friends and what's important to them is important tah me.” Apple Bloom said coming over to the three of us and laying down too.
but it felt over all too soon,
unexpected intrusion that seemed all too common by now.
Sweetie who made a distinct ‘oof’ sound that reminded me of something but I couldn't remember what.
She said recovering from the assault and launched her own pillow at Pinkie who swiftly dodged the attack.
This caused a chain reaction among the five of us as a war of pillows broke out, I was one of the first casualties in this war. Still tired from the outside activities I ended up buried underneath a fallen pillow fortress behind enemy lines.
Sweetie’s was face was pink… or was that Pinkie Pie? I.. I couldn't tell.
The voice was male in sound,
much of it so dirty than the original orange
She fell onto her belly, taking a very…
I blinked slowly my eyes wondering over to the window, it was still dark out but the sun’s rays of light were breaking through the shades of darkness. A soft thump sounded as the heating turned on throughout the house, so the vent over near the vanity blew warm air into the slightly chilly room.
This where Luna shows up and this happens. 1:04
I don’t really know what it was
I rubbed my face, keeping the stinging feeling in my eyes from becoming too much for me.
Applejack’s tail flicked along with one of her ears as she looked at me, then slowly turned around to head back to the house.
The moment she was was about several meters away
I hope this hasn't been too fast for you
“I will find you.” I said hugging her tightly, pouring all the feelings of love that… Applejack had shared with me in her song.
This was for her.
For everyone.
“I promise.”
Then the world burned away.
It just occurred to me that that scene is similar to this clip. 2:25
We gotta work on our project for the show so we don’t miss out.”
which caused her to chuckle, giving me her favorite mischievous grin.
my face began to heat up as I tried to think
it wasn’t mean I don’t think Pinkie had it in her to be
Then kissed me on the nose and disappeared again leaving me
Murphy's law seemed to be out on a desperado crime spree in this universe,
1:52 and 12:38
Considering Sweetie Belle’s cooking habits anyone’s food would taste heavenly, but this was taking to a whole new level.
Is that why her food is always burnt!?
Scootaloo wouldn’t feel so bad that her wings
get something sweet without worrying too much about building
that confusion quickly turned into surprise and then a blush.
“D-don't fret too much Warm Smile
pick on yah too much if yer brand new. Though when yah are the trainin shoes come off and then we can tease yah senseless!”
New ideas, culture, math, religion, technology!!” Twilight squeed happily nearly jumping up and down around us.
I blurted as she ranted to herself, the purple smart unicorn turned to me
“I don’t know about you ponies but Twilight
and if we can get to it maybe one of the big threes.
she said rubbing the back of her neck as I gave her a arched eyebrow.
“I'm ready to learn Miss Sparkle! May I offer you a apple as a gift?” I gestured, indicating Apple Bloom.
“Har har, very funny Smiley.” Apple Bloom said giving me a very light shove.
Ooooooohhhhhhhhh that sounds so cute!!
“Great!” Twilight announced cheerily, “Let's head on by to the library. Is Spike still asleep? I'll go get him then we can be off!” she trotted off upstairs the Apple house.
There already inside and Spike is already awake and on the first floor!
even if we got off to a bad start,
“Not unless you want to, I might blubber like a baby if you did and I wasn't expecting it! Me, a mother!” she laughed nuzzling my face again.
First
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I see that your that type huh
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Only on a friday
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Thoughts on the chapter?
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Not very emotional like the other chapter's. Maybe because it only like since it's 1/4
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That's being saved for later, it was more of a small feel good chapter for Warm Smile. Cuz yah know she wants to feel like she belongs and what not.
Impression of Sunrise Beam? my orange cream pop ball of sunshine and the best part of Applejacks day~
Great chapter! Worth the wait. :D Sunrise is a very enjoyable character :D
I think every grammar mistake I see is actually a translation error from Equis to English. It kind of makes sense from a story perspective.
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I dont try to write in error I only got one editor and I only got decent grades in english.
I dont know what happened to my others they just kinda dropped off the map
Well, this chapter was nice, I would like to read the next one, I always loved stuff about lore and all so it will be great.
I really liked a part of the chapter ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I can't help myself but envy Smiley and her situation. To be loved by all like that, it's a great feeling.
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Love Sunrise Beam, so cute and a surprisingly developed character.
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Sunrise Beammmm is so soooooooo precious~ I love her and Applejack together~
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Ditto*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*.....ah-hem.... You heard nothing
it’s changelings right? Oh please tell me it’s changelings and they’re cocooned
One time casuality, two coincidence, three bad luck, but four or more? Some god is against you...
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I am that god
No but there is a god out there messing with her a lot, I just wont tell who~
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Ahuhuhuhu
You'll find out but it's got nothing to do with Queen Swiss Cheese Legs
I wonder if Twilight is going to ask about 'Fanfiction' to Smile
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It's going to pop up yeah
I want more scripture of the book of Log. MOAR I SAY! WE MUST CLEANSE THE HERETICS AND MAKE THE NON-BELIEVERS TO BELIEVE OUR LORD AND SAVIOR LOG! FOR LOG LOVES AS FOR WE ARE ITS PEOPLE!
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And the Log did sayth:
Weep not my child, for thine art with me in every tree, givith nature and sacred logs enshrined and I will guide thee in life
Amen
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Amen!
Does the song have a real world counter part or did you come up with it? I would really like to hear it.
Through out the later part of this chapter all I could think about was this song.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lBi5Dd1vn4A
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Thanks
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Lol that 'I'm not sure what to think' tab
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About what??
I dont understand why you are furious about that, imagine being a Male and then becoming a female its dumb masculine thoughts she is having
9257741
Ooooh, well that's just how she is! When I first came up with Warm Smile I gave her a few things she would have to deal with.
Most herbivores have twice as many taste buds than omnivores or carnivores, this means her human saturated brain is receiving twice as intense flavour responses than a normal human. Which means food taste nearly orgasmic in nature she will eventually get use to it but for now she has a very positive response to eating.
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As for this one, you know this is a mature rated fic right? It's going to be dealing with sex and sexual themes it's even in the tags.
Besides it's also a jab at the Straight Too Belle author who made going to the bathroom in their fic almost sexual so idk what to tell you
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yeah but you know this is a M rated fic right? Its got 'Sex' in the tags and so when you read this you read this knowing there is sexual content in it, so Idk why the sexual stuff in a M rated fic is bothering you
9257883
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Then I really dont know what to tell you, Warm Smile is going to talk sexual, because she is a sexual being and a mammal. Her genderfuidity has been established that she has no clue if she was male or female before so she wasnt going to bother with it and just did what makes her happy.
She has also been wanting sexual relief because she is so stressed, so things like the food are just embarrassing for her
Am i the only one who cant wait for when s2 ep 5 happens in this universe.
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I'm looking forward to that :D
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9271400
Its gonna be hella cute, the Sisterhooves Social us a perfect place for all three of them to bond~ and maybe by then that cruel god that cock blocks Smiley might let up
9272154
I mainly just want to see smiles meet sweetie mum and dad. Confusing chaos for them since i guess thry dont know about smiles. Unless they go back to stay in canterlot
I'm really looking forward to Spike being added to the romance
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I thought about it~
Spike is a cutie and Spike crushing on Warm Smile would be very cute since both of them can nerd out like the dorks they are~
Any idea when the next chapter will come out?
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It'll be out when it's out I'll update people in my blog okay?
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Whens a blog update :dashlaugh:
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Sloooowwwww ahhhhhhhhhhh, slogging through the lore is hard since Twilight gets distracted and so does Warm Smile rip
This is wonderful. Can't wait till the next chapter!
When next charpter?
I'm waiting it since from last year)
9406665
I was taking a small break from it since, I spent months writing it nonstop the next chapter is about 40% done
9406823
It's a bit sad news, I'm eager to read more of this story... I'm read this story about 5 times before and wait next chapter to read whole story one more time)
But anyway I wish you have a good rest and when time come, return from your writers vacation with more exciting chapters.
9409359
Thank you, it means a lot, I havent abandoned it if that's what you are thinking. The chapter I'm writing is very slow since I'm going over a lot of general stuff to tie into later plot points later, Twilight talking about how magic works and other various things have big backgrounds I set up and I kinda set myself up a grind I have to overcome.
But I will try and get it done soon thank you for reading~ it means a lot
I see what you did there.
Edit 5/28/2019:
2:38
Reminds me of this clip at 1:56
8:32
This where Luna shows up and this happens. 1:04
It just occurred to me that that scene is similar to this clip. 2:25
1:52 and 12:38
Is that why her food is always burnt!?
Ooooooohhhhhhhhh that sounds so cute!!
There already inside and Spike is already awake and on the first floor!
You are not a whale Rairty!! 😝
You can just read the Equestria history summary in the Canterlot archives.
https://m.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLMdfq1crE1ouWq5s2kU3wmTGdFFvxj58u