I understand that not many people like this story at all, and that's cool, it's your opinion, feel free to dislike. I don't judge other people when I myself am not any better. I just do what I love and I love what I do. and that's to create things, like stories for instance.

My love goes to everybody here who also likes to create stories too. But to be totally fair, there're some stories that i've read that would make this story like a literal walk through Care Bear Land by comparison. That's not to say that they're horrible stories, not at all, just much more graphic than my content. There's only so far that i'll be willing to go, and even I wouldn't go that far down the rabbit hole. *shudders*

Nice work.

A sequel with a broken Twilight would be awesome!

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I'll think about it after I finalize this story. I may make a new chapter to give you just that pleasure mate.

I'm currently doing some work on this story. Fixing mistakes, misspelled words and making it better. I apologize for any inconvenience.

9065562
Awesome to hear!

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Now all that's left is to eventually make the new chapter of Twilight being broken in by Tempest's smelly ass and maybe even some other extra goodies for your reading pleasure.

9072484
Wait a minute! (looks intensely) No! You wouldn't happen to be the same Seeguywhoiscool from my friends list on Steam would you?

It would appear that people would still dislike and not tell me why they don't like it. How could I do my job here to do better if I don't know what's wrong?
And I made sure to warn anybody who reads my stories of everything they should come to expect from said stories. So! I'm afraid to say that if you don't like it and yet, still walk deeper into the rabbit hole that is this story anyways, I don't feel pity for you. I'm sorry, but that's just how I feel.

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I'm sorry, but I tend to find it very difficult to actually feel sorry for those people.

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No I'm not, but it's funny how similar the names are! Also, people will downvote any story that deals with extreme fetishes without even reading it.

There're alot of people reading this story. How does this even happen?

I'm almost finished with the bad ending to chapter two everybody! It'll be published soon.

Is it really necessary for there to be this many dislikes? Seriously! I'll guarantee that most of the people that disliked didn't even make an attempt at reading it in the first place. If that's the case and safe to assume it is; You know, now that there're thorough warnings about all of my content. You can always just ignore the story, you don't have to like, or dislike and you don't even have to comment, just ignore it if you don't like it and move on with your life. Simplicity itself!

Again if you're warned and yet you still go down the rabbit hole, I won't feel bad for you if you don't like it. I'm sorry, but it really irks me when people do this. I tend to find it very difficult to feel sorry for people like that. Especially once they're aware of the story's content and still walk into it regardless.

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I think its nicely written. I´m not into noncon and could do without smelly butts, but the fact, that you use different "*´to differentiate between Actions, thoughts and speech is worth a thumbsup.

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Thank you very much bro, and i'm taking everyone's advice into account for my future stories. Pretty soon there will be a bad ending, then a good ending. And they will have alot more different fetishes, yes there will be Tempest's smelly butt, but there'll also be a myriad of other fetishes that'll catch your eye i'm sure.