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Now the right time to show off plant's regenerating power.
Called it, I know there was a new chapter coming, and a good one at that. Now the question is, how many more ponies are gonna be in the loop after this? As in how many will learn she is now half plant.
Aww, no deep penetration on the fetish list for this chapter?
Damn, that's a... penetrating cliffhanger
While I will admit my tastes are usually much more fatal than what you usually write, I'm very glad I finally got around to this story. This is a pretty golden example of "Porn with plot", and a very interesting plot at that, concerning Withania's own musings and confusion about her own body and the changes that have occurred. The subtext of temptation and conflict between the pony and plant halves are especially fascinating; the plant is making her want more prey, which wouldn't be a problem if her pony half wasn't also digesting them, even non-fatally.
Personally, my recommendation would be to keep the scope of this really small; just Withania and her immediate connections. A lot of good stories like this suddenly feel like they need to include goddesses, fey spirits and Celestia/Luna's personal intervention to escalate things to the author's satisfaction, and that often kills the reader's interest instead. This works best as just being a part of the setting, and contributing to the general tapestry of "Equestria is weird, and weird things happen all the time in it, and everypony's pretty much happy with how weird it all is." (Even Twilight's own involvement makes perfect sense; she lives in Ponyville, and she'd be all over studying Withania's new mutations even if she weren't a princess. Maybe even more so, in fact. Royal authority just means she can get things done faster.)
I don't have any plans to do so (and I will ask for permission if I ever do) but I'd love to have Withania show up in a story, whether SFW or NSFW, just to reinforce the themes of "Weird things happen all the time in Equestria." An anthology of stories about things like this, ponies finding abandoned artifacts, strange wildlife intruding from the wilderness, or even just old magical effects left over from previous spellcasters who weren't all that good at cleanup, would be a fantastic resource for worldbuilding.
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I entirely agree about escalations, I make references to canon ponies, but there's no plans to 'blow this wide open' so to speak.
A little escalation to make the characters feel out of their depth is fine, but yea, Withania will always be a botanist living at the edge of town and occasionally biting off a little more than she can chew - so to speak ;)
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Or a troll's regeneration abilitirles, considering where she/he is right now.
I just spotted comment to 10th chapter... huh, I didn't knew that Hanns Heinz Ewers character's name became a common noun :P
Now, if Alraune was half-mandrake, Withy is .. half -Tegmen ?
This reminds me of a fic where Twi got caught by a tentacle plant in the Everfree, that kind of eats poor unsuspecting ponies, Withania might like it lol.
Noooo I've caught up, and it's a cliffhanger, it's just the worst combo
I any other context this sentence would sound very different...
That's actually a good question.
In other words: (to use an slightly altered quote from Jurassic Park)
"I was so preoccupied with whether or not I could that I didn't stop to think if I should."
Yup, Oh is probably an accurate reaction.
Good chapter!
I look forwards to see what happens next.
ProbablyHopefully something about plant regeneration abilities.(And remember to send the colt and his mother to an therapist afterwards; they might need it.)
It's okay, her seed is still intact, so no worries! Dumping all that nectar into the stream was unfortunate, hopefully nopony panics... The fact that she passed out is an indicator for shock we think.
Still, what Zecora and Epoch said is true, a balance must be struck; we're still in the "wildly teeter" phase.
Keep going! ;)
It's kind of like how I've been able to wiggle my ears all of... Twice.
To... Be fair, a lot of the bodies of water in Equestria have some... Odd creatures around. Methinks Fluttershy may have gone a bit far with making new friends.