Why? WHY YOU DON'T EVEN MENTION WHAT IS THE CROSSOVER ABOUT?!!?!??!?!
If there's ONE thing I hate about crossovers is that the author NEVER points out what the crossover is about. I would guess this one is Gears of War but i'm not sure since I didn't read it yet.
Gears of War, GEARS OF FUCKING WAR!! The most, fucking, epic game ever!! I bought gears of war 1 on the premiere day. And then gears 2, limited, and gears 3, also limited! FUCK YEAH!
Interesting start, though the ending was a bit odd.
Kids having a near death experience to fall asleep rather than to just faint from all the gore.
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Well... At lest one fuck-up is better then a fuck-ton, right? I see it as progress. Did you see anything else wrong, or was that it?
Criticism helps as long as you are able to take it into consideration.
Why? WHY YOU DON'T EVEN MENTION WHAT IS THE CROSSOVER ABOUT?!!?!??!?!
If there's ONE thing I hate about crossovers is that the author NEVER points out what the crossover is about.
I would guess this one is Gears of War but i'm not sure since I didn't read it yet.
Gears of War, GEARS OF FUCKING WAR!! The most, fucking, epic game ever!! I bought gears of war 1 on the premiere day. And then gears 2, limited, and gears 3, also limited! FUCK YEAH!
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Did you look at the picture? Gears. Also, you haven't read it yet. your point is invalid.
99749I love gears of war as well, but what did you think of the story. ಠ_ಠ
you sir have my attention.
and odd ending to that chapter though i can allready see this will be good
ill be waiting patiently for the next update
997597 Hey, you talking to me about the story?
It's. Fucking. Awesome. FTW!!
Bloody brilliant, my good sir!
Very interesting. I look forward for the next chapter.
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My reaction to any good reactions my story's get:
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But for cereal...
I'm doing this right now:
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yay.
997464 The tag in the story pic said "Property of the coalition of ordered government" Also known as, the cog.
998498 To be honest I didn't know what that tags meant since I played only GOW 1 and I didn't find anything like that in the game.
999605 I figured out that it meant that for COG and, the tag was in the shape of a cog.
999612 However if nobody never played any GOW game how is he/she supposed to know what's the crossover about?
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Good answer.
999662 bow chikka honk honk
Nice Cliff Hanger
I like it but you should think about getting a pre-reader to help iron out any mistakes.
BTW It's 'through' not 'thru'
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explain the difference
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Thru is a simplified version of through, therefore it isn't a 'proper' word. I'm not really too bothered by it. I like the story anyway.
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And that's why I usually don't care when people say that. It's not a problem, so why make one?
997964 i just noticed the the wings are upside down
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999605 the dog tags and the symbols with the damage system you twat
3630460 not to mention the FUCKING BRUMAK