A gear gets sent to Equestria by a machine lost to the locust war.
Short, but it's something! Hope you have a bit more luck in college than you've been having
2790758 My thoughts exactly. and look! Character development!
How does that story title even make sense?
2790878 It'll make sense later on, if I can get that far...
Finally. No more waiting!
2803528 Yep!i.imgur.com/hRO4Kbn.jpg
Great chapter, nice to see you back :D
2812690 Good to be productive again.
This is good, although there was one recurring mistake earlier that was bugging me. It is "through", not "thru".
That aside it looks like you have an interesting setup here, although the plot is not nearly far enough along to say for certain.
Short, but it's something! Hope you have a bit more luck in college than you've been having
2790758 My thoughts exactly. and look! Character development!
How does that story title even make sense?
2790878 It'll make sense later on, if I can get that far...
Finally. No more waiting!
2803528 Yep!
i.imgur.com/hRO4Kbn.jpg
Great chapter, nice to see you back :D
2812690 Good to be productive again.
This is good, although there was one recurring mistake earlier that was bugging me. It is "through", not "thru".
That aside it looks like you have an interesting setup here, although the plot is not nearly far enough along to say for certain.