• Published 28th May 2018
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Secret Evils - Feather Guide



When secrets are revealed and creatures get betrayed will there be happiness in the end?

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Turn for the worst (updated)

It had stopped being very cold. Fluttershy/ Malice, Shuddercord, and Deedee all attack at once.

"What are you going to do now?" Shuddercord asked.

"We won't stop fighting." Sweetie Belle said with determination.

"You should just give up." Fluttershy said.

"Giving up isn't in my nature." Sweetie Belle said.

Red Velvet lit up her horn then blasted her magic at her twin brother.

"What was that for?" Funnel asked.

"Did you really think I was on your side?" Red Velvet asked her horn still lit up.

"Yes." Funnel said.

"I didn't." Melody said.

"I know you knew. Smarty pants." Red Velvet said.

Melody lit up her horn her magic aura darker then usual.

"That doesn't look good." Surprise said flying towards the ground.

"Melly, don't do what I think your going to do." Sweetie Belle said.

Melody looked at her mom then at the evil ponies in front of her then lit up her horn more. She was about to do strap Red Velvet, Fluttershy, Shuddercord, and Deedee of their powers but she collapsed on the floor before she could.

"Mel!" Fifer cried running over to her sister.

"You won't win." Red Velvet said.

Fifer lit up her horn and shot a beam of magic at Deedee. Deedee shot back at her and it hit her in the heart.

Flameheart ran over still weak from when it was cold.

"Sis." Flameheart cried.

Sweetie Belle looked at her two motionless daughters then at her other two daughters.

"What's going on?" Cream Puff asked next to her was Pound.

Red Velvet shot magic at Cream Puff and Pound. Pumpkin lit up horn and fired at her sister.

"This is interesting." Mia said eating cotton candy.

"Seriously?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"What?" Mia asked. “I’m hungry.”

Deedee shot some magic at Sweetie Belle. It was inches away before Sweetie Belle blocked it.

"Is that all you can do?" Sweetie Belle asked with a smile.

"Please stop." Dinky said looking at Deedee.

"Melly isn't breathing." Diamond said.

Sweetie Belle looked at Melodys body then at Fluttershy.

"I will kill you. Like Derpy and I should've done long ago." Sweetie Belle said angerliy.

"You are one of the only ones that can hurt me but you won't." Fluttershy said.

"As much as I hate say it Malice is right." Derpy said.

"What?" Sweetie Belle asked still angry.

"I don't want you to darken your heart." Derpy said.

"Isn't that what I told you once?" Sweetie Belle said.

"Yes, so why kill someone with revenge?" Derpy asked.

"Two of my daughters are dead now because of her." Sweetie Belle said.

"You once told me that revenge is never the answer no matter what happens" Derpy said.

Fluttershy was about to attack but Larva shot her with some magic before she could.

"You won't hurt them." Larva said spreading out her wings and lighting her horn.

"Why be on the side with weaklings?" Fluttershy asked.

"It's the side that my family is on." Larva said.

"I'm your family." Fluttershy said.

"Not really." Larva said.

"Deedee please don't do this." Dusk Shine said with a begging look.

"This is who I really am Eve." Deedee said.

"Stop calling me that." Dusk Shine said crying.

"You are pathetic." Deedee said.

Dawn Pie watched everything not knowing what to do.

"We should join the fight." Spectrum said walking up to Dawn Pie.

"I would rather be poisoned." Dawn Pie said.

"I don't like fights but friends and family are getting hurt." Spectrum said.

"Then go ahead and join the fight." Dawn Pie said.

"I got this Spectrum go and help the others." Party Lights said.

"What do you want Lights?" Dawn Pie asked.

"I know that you are about to leave to go hide in a crystal cave and read but you should at least try to fight." Party Light said.

"I will never join in something like this." Dawn Pie said.

"Think about it like you are inside a book and are helping the heros." Party Lights said.

"Is that what you do?" Dawn Pie asked.

"Yeah." Party Lights said.

"I'm going to go to the crystal caves and read now." Dawn Pie said.

"After all of this you need to make friends." Party Lights said.

"Sis, you know I'm not very big on that." Dawn Pie said.

"At least try after this please." Party Lights said.

"You are the only creature I will ever call a friend." Dawn Pie said her voice softened a little.

"If we weren't sisters would we still be friends?" Party Lights asked.

"I don't know." Dawn Pie said looking away.

Party Lights tied hugging her sister but Dawn refused it. They waved goodbye instead.

"Where is she going?" Surprise asked.

"She is going to read." Party Lights said.

"That isn't a surprise." Surprise said.

"I'm worried about her." Party Lights said.

"I'm sure she will be fine." Surprise said.

"Don't hurt me!" Pupa said with fear.

"You are too weak to fight." Shuddercord said.

Pupa tried casting a spell but only a few sparks came out. Shuddercord laughed at that.

"Go away." Pupa said with fear stepping back a little.

Shuddercord cast a spell that was meant for Pupa but it hit Surprise because she got in the way.

Pupa looked at Surprise then at Shuddercord and tried casting a spell again this time it was more then sparks.

"What are you going to do with that?" Shuddercord asked with a laugh.

Pupa shot magic at Shuddercord which caused both of them to fall to the ground.

"Pupa are you alright?" Larva asked flying over to her twin.

"Yeah I'm fine." Pupa said.

"That was awesome!" Mia said eating pink cotton candy.

Everyone turned their heads and looked at Mia. Most of their expressions read seriously. Mia smiled sheepishly and ate the rest of the cotton candy.

“You’re powerful when emontional.” Shuddercord said wiping some blood off her cheek and looking at Pupa.

Red Velvet and Pumpkin were shooting magic at each other.

"I don't want to hurt you sis." Pumpkin said.

"You aren't going to stop me sister." Red Velvet said angerliy.

"What does your cutie mark mean to you?" Pumpkin asked.

"Preparing strategies." Red Velvet said.

"I think it has more meaning then that." Sweetie Belle said before getting attacked by Fluttershy.

"Are you really as good as you let on?" Fluttershy asked.

"I would never hide who I am unlike you." Sweetie Belle said.

"Yes, you have hidden yourself." Fluttershy said.

"I mean I would never act like someone I'm not." Sweetie Belle said.

"I know that you and Derpy could easily defeat me and send me to Tartarusus for a very long time and make sure I don't leave." Fluttershy said.

"If they could do that then why haven't they?" Robert asked.

"Wait if Fluttershy/ mom is evil then how did she become the element of kindness?" Party Lights and Harmony asked in unison.

"She corrupted it." Sweetie Belle said.

"What's going on?" a pink pegasus mare with a rainbow mane asked walking out of an orphanage.

"Long story." Sweetie Belle said.

"Can you try to give me a short version?" the pink pegasus mare with a rainbow mane asked.

"We are battling a battle that as been going on for over a millennium." Sweetie Belle said.

The pink mare with a rainbow mane had a confused look on her face.

"She means over a thousand years." Rainbow said.

"Oh ok." the pink mare with a rainbow mane said.

Dawn Pie and Candace appeared in a flash of blue light.