So what happen now in the next chapter?

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I dunno.

8881322
Ok

So, a perverted Jumanji-style game. Lets see where this goes.

8881322
So when will the next chapter be out?

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When a) the commissioner and I figure what's actually going to be in it, and b) I write it, and c) I have someone look over it after I write it.

We're doing this chapter-by-chapter, so I really just do not know what's going to be in chapter 2, or 3, or 4, or any of the chapters at this point. And that, in turn, makes me unable to know when they'll be finished.

8881551
Right

will big mac be there or will there be other stallions like pinkie cheese sandwitch or rainbow dash soaring?

Dunno how I got here, but this was a fun read :) I hope you keep going with it.

"Rob! Short for "Random Omnipotent Being.'" He spread his hands across the air as if this was the most genius, most gloriously acronym anyone, anywhere, had ever thought of across the universe. "Yes, Rob will do fine, I think."

You mean Random Omnipotent *cough*Bastard*cough.

Also: did you mean to put Discord's name in in a few spots? Might wanna ctrl+f and clean those up if you didn't.

EDIT: Oh, and tell the commissioner I look forward to seeing his take on the Perverted Transformation Game idea.

8882394
Probably more likely that the others will have the opportunity to completely turn into them.

I can see Dash choosing to turn into Big Mac, just so she can see for herself what he's packing, without Applejack able to stop her for once.

8910992

Ooh, I may just do that now.

Commissioner here.

First, I am willing to take recommendations for future chapters. In other words, ideas are welcome.

Second, I never intended for anyone beyond the players and game master (GM), but Discord 'Rob' will be needing to keep his identity a secret. So, he may need to bring in outside help so the ladies can see to their new needs.

Third, any transformation into another individual will be the result of shape-shifting. So Dashie would need to take a trait that would grant such an ability in order to look like Big Mac. However, unless the ability specifically allows her to assume another's form, she would only turn into her perception of him. Meaning Applejack would have fun poking at each mistake Dashie made. Also, all the Players will be keeping what makes them female. I am not discounting the addition of male parts, but not planning on including such. My idea involved turning them into bisexual sluts, not other ponies. They may change species, or become something more, but they will (mostly) remain themselves in body and mind.

When do we get to read the next stirring chapter of this amazing story??

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If I can focus and not dilly-dally with pointless distractions by Saturday, sometime next week. Maybe.

8942998
I can hardly wait!! Thank you very much for such a quick reply.
Keep up the awesome work!!

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I intend to pay for Chapter 3 on June 1st. If you have any suggestions, I am willing to listen.

8947361
I wouldn't want to impose, it is your story after all.
As long as it doesn't involve scat or corpses I am willing to keep a open mind.
Just have fun with your story, that is all I want from you.

8947684
No worries there.

8947684

I don't know, vampires can be pretty sexy.

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I meant SEX with corpses. I have no problems with vamponies.

A fun start, but I noticed some minor errors, the two most noticeable to me are just below. I recommend you go over what you have up already and see if you can spot any errors, it would probably would also be a good idea to have one or more sets of other eyes proofread all future chapters before they get posted, and maybe get a writing aid like Grammarly to help you out as well. None are infallible, they just help mitigate and minimize errors.

eternal knight

You see,, you

Not sure if you meant to give awat who Rob is by using their real name there, but you did.