During a sleepover at Sunset's, Dash gets bored and finds a deck of cards Sunset didn't know she had. What happens next is... magical. Their world is truly transformed.
8818593 Yep. Considering how crazy this might get (never know with the randomizer!) I thought it might eventually be appropriate.
8818602 I debated marking him in the character tags, but I figured there was no way I was fooling anybody after that line. Assume Twilight hasn't brought him up, but will be giving him a stern talking to once Sunset does.
8818966 8819486 Used Google Sheets, actually, with some help from a friend who knew how to use the VLOOKUP function for automation. I want some stuff to be a surprise for now, so I'm not going to link it... until the first game is over, at least. Then I'll link it so everyone can have a look.
I will say that, while I haven't counted them exactly, there are between 160 and 200 possible transformations (though some are repeats between body parts) so it's possible we're in for a wild ride.
"Fine! My turn. Okay, so, I'm curious too. This one just says 'Toot-toot.'"
" Show off your guns. " Dash read as the spirit finally provided and answer, "Well, don't mind if I do." Rainbow's arms lifted, flexing... only for the middle of her biceps to flop loosely down like spaghetti noodles, while the rest of her arms defied physics to remain in place, "What the hell!?" Another card flipped her way, her arms resuming normal shape as she left the pose to snatch at it.
" Now eat this and try again. " Rainbow looked down at the table, where an open can of greens awaited. With a suspicious air, she grabbed it... and then chugged the whole thing, chewing three times before swallowing. Her arms rose almost of their own accord, flexing once more... but this time, her muscles bulked up. And up. And up, muscular bulge on muscular bulge until there were nine layers of bulges, each smaller than the last, reaching a foot above her head.
"The fuck." Dash said, letting her arms fall... then lifting them again. This time, only one oversized bulge of muscle formed on her arms. But it bore a tattoo of two ships, one on each arm, sailing through a rough sea... no figure of speech, they actually moved, sailing along until one took a shot at the other, sinking it, and raced to occupy its place as a chirpy tune played from apparently nowhere. "Wat."
OH! I get it!
"Think that cartoon may be a bit before your time, Dash." Applejack told her with a smirk, "Ya feel any stronger?"
8820002 There's a link in the Author's Note, where it says "Here" in the second paragraph. For some reason links don't show up in the AN so well... I'll have to do something different next chapter.
i am liking this but i must nit pick this part, if you get two pair with two wild cards you dont know how to play poker as a three of a kind would be better so pinky had at least trip nines and likely a straight as she has a 6,9,j,j and one more card that is less than a nine and not a six so if is a 5,7,8 she has a straight the other cards she could have are 2,3,4 so fifty fifty straight and at least trip nines. now a straight beats a flush but we dont know what dash got. poker check your hands dubble jokers and 69 is funny but does not work for poker.
8820569 I may have derped there, now that you mention it. I forget what Pinkie's fifth card was. I am using an actual deck, but I only have a small desk space to do seven hands with, so it can be a little confusing. I'm just gonna chalk it up to the players not seeing Pinkie's winning hand if that was the case, though we'll never know now. I know I occasionally stare at a hand and miss the forest for the trees, so.
8822482 Considering how crazy this could get, it might eventually be appropriate. I even put "This Pleases Slaanesh" in one of the TF descriptions, though it hasn't come up yet.
Also: PileRow666, please stop making blank entries, it's a bit annoying to have to keep deleting them. If you want an update on the voting, I can put it in a comment here once a day?
8822707 Strawpoll would mean I'd have to do an individual poll for each character, and that'd take way longer... I'm just editing this one from poll to poll. And it's fine to discuss ideas here, the question there is just for convenience. I do like living body suits, but I didn't put it on the list- anything like that would be an outside force rather than a transformation. I plan to have it come up in one of my other works, though that's a part far far in the future.
"Everybody's a critic. Put the card on the table." Sunset looked at the card suspiciously, then flipped it over again. "Or you could play without my help and be stuck like that. Your choice."
"Doesn't that card only have two sides?" Applejack asked, bewildered.
"It's magic. I've seen a spell like it before. If you girls see an excessively fat panda, keep your hands on your wallets."
8824938 Ranma 1/2 reference. Genma turns into a panda, uses a sign with more sides than there should be to talk when he is, and is an incorrigible thief and all around terrible person.
Edit: Hm, I should put today's update here.
Applejack: Head in the Clouds and Milk Tanks are still winning by a mile. Pinkie: Cumflatable is still in the lead with half the votes. Rarity: Same ratio for nipple fucking. Flutters: More than half the votes towards a bit of a bosom boost, but the second vote has Cumflatable only losing to a sheath by a little at the moment. Twilight: It's looking like she's going to have a whole new way to masturbate, especially if she picks up a don't later. Sunset: The tribute to an old hentai, Devil's Pussy has half the votes. Fun fact: there are anus and mouth versions of this as well.
8825027 How many days before the vote is closed, and work on the chapter begin? I think I came in a bit late last time, I voted Saturday, and the chapter was released sunday.
8825051 I think I'm going to lock the poll in the wee hours of Sunday, which is when my weekend starts, and try to finish the chapter by Tuesday, before the workweek starts again. May skip a week if I need more time to write, but I'll probably stick to locking the poll around 0400 Sunday(GMT-6,) after it's been up at least four days.
8824938 Sunset already flipped the card over once, after reading what was on that side. Then, after reading what was on the back of the card, she flipped it over again, only to find different text than the first
This... This tickles all of my fetishes.
Is your cover page the mark of Slaneesh from Warhammer 40,000?
DISCORD?!!
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Even the spinach?
8818593
Yep. Considering how crazy this might get (never know with the randomizer!) I thought it might eventually be appropriate.
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I debated marking him in the character tags, but I figured there was no way I was fooling anybody after that line. Assume Twilight hasn't brought him up, but will be giving him a stern talking to once Sunset does.
I'll follow this for now.
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I thought this was EqG Twilight?
8818610
Nice
8818610
The spinach (and the muscles that come with it, for that matter) is not one of my fetishes, and was therefor untickled.
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It is. I meant that the OTHER Twilight hasn't told Sunset about Discord in any detail, and that's why she doesn't recognize him.
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MaudVoice: That was a joke.
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Randomizer? did you build a list of things for a "desk of cards" or similar?
looking forward to the next chapter.
Holy shit I am now following this story with a mad passion. Also, have a sub because your stories are cool.
8818966
I too am curious about this randomizer.
OH MY GAWD THIS IS BASICALLY AWESOME
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8819486
Used Google Sheets, actually, with some help from a friend who knew how to use the VLOOKUP function for automation. I want some stuff to be a surprise for now, so I'm not going to link it... until the first game is over, at least. Then I'll link it so everyone can have a look.
I will say that, while I haven't counted them exactly, there are between 160 and 200 possible transformations (though some are repeats between body parts) so it's possible we're in for a wild ride.
OH! I get it!
see? AJ knows it.
Uh... Not quite.
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8819778
I liked your links better ('cause they're shorter) so I stole them. Thanks.
How do you vote ?
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There's a link in the Author's Note, where it says "Here" in the second paragraph. For some reason links don't show up in the AN so well... I'll have to do something different next chapter.
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Looking forward to it. That's a lot more than my own spread sheet of 'traits' I use to randomly create monster girls and stuff.
8819778 “You’re a mean one Ms. Dash”(From the Grinch Song) but inMLP
i am liking this but i must nit pick this part, if you get two pair with two wild cards you dont know how to play poker as a three of a kind would be better so pinky had at least trip nines and likely a straight as she has a 6,9,j,j and one more card that is less than a nine and not a six so if is a 5,7,8 she has a straight the other cards she could have are 2,3,4 so fifty fifty straight and at least trip nines. now a straight beats a flush but we dont know what dash got. poker check your hands dubble jokers and 69 is funny but does not work for poker.
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I may have derped there, now that you mention it. I forget what Pinkie's fifth card was. I am using an actual deck, but I only have a small desk space to do seven hands with, so it can be a little confusing. I'm just gonna chalk it up to the players not seeing Pinkie's winning hand if that was the case, though we'll never know now. I know I occasionally stare at a hand and miss the forest for the trees, so.
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Play this song
Play this muted
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LOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL(DEAD FROM LAUGHING)
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*picks a cart up*
*reads the card* "a sex-zombie attacks you !?"
*you tack up and attacks me*
Question... why do you has a slaanesh symbol for this story cover page?
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Considering how crazy this could get, it might eventually be appropriate. I even put "This Pleases Slaanesh" in one of the TF descriptions, though it hasn't come up yet.
Also: PileRow666, please stop making blank entries, it's a bit annoying to have to keep deleting them. If you want an update on the voting, I can put it in a comment here once a day?
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Find.
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You could use straw poll, but i dont know if there are fill in the blank type questions you can do :/
Oof. I just gont an idea, but i already voted... :(
My idea was living body suit
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Strawpoll would mean I'd have to do an individual poll for each character, and that'd take way longer... I'm just editing this one from poll to poll. And it's fine to discuss ideas here, the question there is just for convenience. I do like living body suits, but I didn't put it on the list- anything like that would be an outside force rather than a transformation. I plan to have it come up in one of my other works, though that's a part far far in the future.
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Sexy
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._.
Well this is a wondrous little clusterfuck ain't it?
I like it. Another!
This was handled beautifully.
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I don get it D:
8824938
Ranma 1/2 reference. Genma turns into a panda, uses a sign with more sides than there should be to talk when he is, and is an incorrigible thief and all around terrible person.
Edit: Hm, I should put today's update here.
Applejack: Head in the Clouds and Milk Tanks are still winning by a mile.
Pinkie: Cumflatable is still in the lead with half the votes.
Rarity: Same ratio for nipple fucking.
Flutters: More than half the votes towards a bit of a bosom boost, but the second vote has Cumflatable only losing to a sheath by a little at the moment.
Twilight: It's looking like she's going to have a whole new way to masturbate, especially if she picks up a don't later.
Sunset: The tribute to an old hentai, Devil's Pussy has half the votes. Fun fact: there are anus and mouth versions of this as well.
8825027
How many days before the vote is closed, and work on the chapter begin? I think I came in a bit late last time, I voted Saturday, and the chapter was released sunday.
TL;DR: how long is chapter development?
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I think I'm going to lock the poll in the wee hours of Sunday, which is when my weekend starts, and try to finish the chapter by Tuesday, before the workweek starts again. May skip a week if I need more time to write, but I'll probably stick to locking the poll around 0400 Sunday(GMT-6,) after it's been up at least four days.
8824938
Sunset already flipped the card over once, after reading what was on that side. Then, after reading what was on the back of the card, she flipped it over again, only to find different text than the first
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yeah, I got that. I just didn't get the reference he was making. But Scy got me to figure it out! :D
What is the thing in the picture?
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See:
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*see's cover* FUCKING SLANNESH
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I thought you, of all people, would be a fan.
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need I say more?
Alright! Locking survey, commence writing!
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Where do you think those cards came from?
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The symbol of Slaanesh, the Chaos God of Excess, from the Warhammer 40K series.