Interesting idea but you really need an editor as there are lots of misused words and typos. The biggest problem that stands out is "Vynial"; her name should be spelled "Vinyl".

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yea I know Ill get on that today

This is an interesting read so far, I will be looking forward to see what will happen next.

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Thanks, Also I have discord now and I think I saw you on there, my user name is NeoLuna22 and I saw you on the Padded Pony server, was that you?

Most interesting. I like how you had D J Pon 3 have a bit of a meltdown upon feeling like her whole life was about being a DJ with her true self being less 'real' to the masses than her party-pony side. This would certainly warrant her a desire to want a simpler life where she can be herself instead of keeping up an image day-after-day.

I also like the maternal instincts of Stargazer. Sure he's a he but that doesn't mean you can't be maternal.

I'll follow along and see where this all goes. Nice start. :)

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thanks

Awsome start that was very well done with Vinyl

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thankies