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NeoLuna


I march into the night, Blade and Quill in hoof, ready to serve The Princess of The Night and write stuff...

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Interesting idea but you really need an editor as there are lots of misused words and typos. The biggest problem that stands out is "Vynial"; her name should be spelled "Vinyl".

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yea I know Ill get on that today

This is an interesting read so far, I will be looking forward to see what will happen next.

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Thanks, Also I have discord now and I think I saw you on there, my user name is NeoLuna22 and I saw you on the Padded Pony server, was that you?

Most interesting. I like how you had D J Pon 3 have a bit of a meltdown upon feeling like her whole life was about being a DJ with her true self being less 'real' to the masses than her party-pony side. This would certainly warrant her a desire to want a simpler life where she can be herself instead of keeping up an image day-after-day.

I also like the maternal instincts of Stargazer. Sure he's a he but that doesn't mean you can't be maternal.

I'll follow along and see where this all goes. Nice start. :)

Awsome start that was very well done with Vinyl

To my mind, the scenarios at the bar are entertaining, but the use of caps for yelling throws me off some.

<LoL!> I'm sure Padded Punch enjoyed watching Vinyl and Stargazer while they 'blacked out'. Being silly drunks certainly makes for epic amusement to all the sober onlookers.
I wondered how you'd get back to 'The Brown Note'. The gurgling of purple soda as Stargazer rocked that chair certainly was a fun way to make it happen.

No doubt both will have a bonus to their hangovers once they discover the bill for their night's festitivities. :)

hey I've always liked the three ponies walk into a bar to chat stories the addition of diapers just makes it better keep it up!

The past, present, and future walk into the bar. The drinking game was long, tense, and ended in bed...zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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