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...Well then....okay.
I had gotten to this chapter. And, well. This kind of ruined the story for me.
I mean no disrespect, nor is it my intention to be mean.
But giving the protagonist magical powers that are equal to a Alicorn simply ruins it. Now if he was a human, it might make sense to be gifted some form of magic.
But hes a Lycanthrope that is a trained warrior. The axe I'll buy as a good possibility, but having it given by Luna or Celestia would have made more sense.
But adding in his Lycanthropy with the magic makes the protagonist possibly too powerful.
I'm just saying that this could have been done a lot better. But I'm late in giving my two cents, and I'm not demanding that you change things. Simply wanted to point out flaws that can ruin a story.
I'm sorry if I seem overly too blunt, but I wanted to speak my mind.
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I thank you for the comment. Though if you keep reading, it shows that he rarely uses his magic for anything but fun. He still uses brute force when in combat.
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I'm in agreement the other dude the mc is too powerful
And I don't care if he rarely uses his magic the fact that the mc has it. It's like giving a necromancer the ability to rase whatever he wants whenever and wherever with no consequences for him to do it.
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I thought that's what necromancers did? Though to be honest, nearly unlimited power is worthless unless you have the knowledge to properly use it. But that's my line of thinking and everyone is entitled to their own opinion.
Food for thought.
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Apparently these guys never read ‘Star Eater’ or ‘The One With The Heart’ cause those MCs’ are the most overpowered characters I’ve ever seen, but even with that the storys are still really good by creating situations where they can’t use all their power for one reason or another. Also the learning to control your power part can get dull, but usually using it in a way you aren’t good at usually leads to some kind injury, which is why having fights during this time can be good, cause they can figure out a different way to use their powers in the heat of the moment and end up pushing past their limits.
his weapon should have been a sword lol but I I'm loving this story tho
Okay
I did a little reading about angelic wolves or winged wolves
I beleive they are called divine hounds. Guardian keepers of the gates of heaven.
If Joe is anything like that, then I beleive he has transcended his werewolf heritage and became a divine Hound of the werewolf kind
Wow the axe was enough my guy because bro the man was already a werewolf and a trained warrior that was only such cool enough and in all honesty I'm not feeling the wings on the werewolf sorry my man I just feel like you ever did it
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ever did it
Over did it. And I see where you're coming from. But, future plans will need him like that. Maybe even more so.
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That's.... Kinda fucking awesome. I'm gonna go read up on those now too.