-sees My Female Bat Pony Self in this chapter-

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My Female Bat Pony Self has finally appeared in a MLP Fan Fic for the 1st time EVAR!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3

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you're welcome.

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:3

I hope she will appear in another chapter soon :3

This remake is good

Good job can't wait to see you next chapter

So your writing hasn't actually improved. Unfortunately, that I means I get off the train here.

A bit of a sudden end, the game didn't last very long, if there was just one more chapter of this game and then this chapter came out with its conclusion would have been a pretty good end to this segment of the story, but instead just kinda ended. A good chapter don't get me wrong!
Now on to new adventures.

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And guess what?

My Female Bat Pony Self finally debuted in a MLP Fan Fic!!! <3 <3 <3

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...who said the game is over. remember, chaos is at best wonky with a two-layered plan and at worst, is bat-sh*t insane, with thousand layered plans

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...... nice.

Cool idea, but you're in need of an editor

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yeah, I know, but I don't have anyone willing.
as of June 25, of this year, 2018, I have an editor, my work is now that much greater.

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I now have an editor, so I hope you'll give this another chance once the editing is done.

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I now have an editor, I hope you will feel inclined to give this fic another chance, once the editing is done of course.

Wait, what was the point behind this then ? I don’t you dare respond with “chaos doesn’t need a point”.
I though he was taking over.