Chaos: An old force, primal and eldritch; chaos is by it's nature uncontrollable, if you try to subdue it, it only takes new forms.
8755699indeed it does, my friend, indeed it does
infinite back up plans
Still rough to read. Run-on sentences and rambling abound.
Ok, your beginning is clearly a copy of “A new god of chaos” in any other fic I would bitch about it BUT because the other fic is dead, I hope you either continue it or just do something new with the concept.
10107089I am planning on continuing this but I would need to rebuild it I honestly lost track of where this was going
8755699
indeed it does, my friend, indeed it does
infinite back up plans
Still rough to read. Run-on sentences and rambling abound.
Ok, your beginning is clearly a copy of “A new god of chaos” in any other fic I would bitch about it BUT because the other fic is dead, I hope you either continue it or just do something new with the concept.
10107089
I am planning on continuing this but I would need to rebuild it I honestly lost track of where this was going